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[0.7.6] Post-CentaurQuest: Centaur Village & HV
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<blockquote data-quote="teawolf" data-source="post: 439099" data-attributes="member: 51577"><p>When taking Naiyana back to her daughter, the semicolon after "memory" should be a colon (followed by a fragment): </p><p>[ATTACH=full]35212[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Same scene, I think it should be contact "with" not "of" here:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35213[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Missing "the" before "sun-kissed," I think:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35215[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Main map in HV Zone 2, the entrance to the Centaur Village, "less" should be "fewer" (the number of trees is countable): </p><p>[ATTACH=full]35216[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>In the Centaur Village, on the map, in the southern-most tile of the circle path within the village, I'm not entirely sure what this means. Is it supposed to be "unseeming[ly]" (the path doesn't have any dangerous spots which would be embarrassing and inappropriate), or "seemingly dangerous" (there aren't any dangerous spots as far as the champ notices)? I guess both work, it's just a moment of confusion that maybe could be clarified:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35217[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>In HV, after defeating a Crazy Horse, I think a parser should be fixed (?)--if he has a poleaxe, should be "it shatters," not "they shatter:"</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35235[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Meeting the lupine scouts in HV for a subsequent time, should cut the "had" in "had previously," because the scene isn't in past tense, so the past perfect is unnecessary:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35237[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Missing punctuation after "shout." Could be a period and keep the graf break, or a comma, and move the dialogue to the same graf, or a colon, and do either:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35238[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>When encountering the marefolk shaman, missing comma after "small," and "roughly humanoid" should be hyphenated ("roughly-humanoid") as a compound adjective:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35239[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Super minor. Same scene: preferred spelling in American English is "jewelry:" </p><p>[ATTACH=full]35240[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="teawolf, post: 439099, member: 51577"] When taking Naiyana back to her daughter, the semicolon after "memory" should be a colon (followed by a fragment): [ATTACH type="full" width="616px"]35212[/ATTACH] Same scene, I think it should be contact "with" not "of" here: [ATTACH type="full" width="625px"]35213[/ATTACH] Missing "the" before "sun-kissed," I think: [ATTACH type="full" width="614px"]35215[/ATTACH] Main map in HV Zone 2, the entrance to the Centaur Village, "less" should be "fewer" (the number of trees is countable): [ATTACH type="full" width="617px"]35216[/ATTACH] In the Centaur Village, on the map, in the southern-most tile of the circle path within the village, I'm not entirely sure what this means. Is it supposed to be "unseeming[ly]" (the path doesn't have any dangerous spots which would be embarrassing and inappropriate), or "seemingly dangerous" (there aren't any dangerous spots as far as the champ notices)? I guess both work, it's just a moment of confusion that maybe could be clarified: [ATTACH type="full" width="636px"]35217[/ATTACH] In HV, after defeating a Crazy Horse, I think a parser should be fixed (?)--if he has a poleaxe, should be "it shatters," not "they shatter:" [ATTACH type="full" width="614px"]35235[/ATTACH] Meeting the lupine scouts in HV for a subsequent time, should cut the "had" in "had previously," because the scene isn't in past tense, so the past perfect is unnecessary: [ATTACH type="full" width="609px"]35237[/ATTACH] Missing punctuation after "shout." Could be a period and keep the graf break, or a comma, and move the dialogue to the same graf, or a colon, and do either: [ATTACH type="full" width="636px"]35238[/ATTACH] When encountering the marefolk shaman, missing comma after "small," and "roughly humanoid" should be hyphenated ("roughly-humanoid") as a compound adjective: [ATTACH type="full" width="648px"]35239[/ATTACH] Super minor. Same scene: preferred spelling in American English is "jewelry:" [ATTACH type="full" width="652px"]35240[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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