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[0.7.6] Kitsune Agent/Kurako typos
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<blockquote data-quote="Ace Hangman" data-source="post: 439071" data-attributes="member: 40656"><p><strong>Combat > Loss >Facesitting</strong></p><p></p><p>1. Should probably remove 'the'.</p><p>[ATTACH]35218[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>2. Should be 'fragrance' or add something else like 'fragrant scent'.</p><p>[ATTACH]35219[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>3. 'Mother Earth' would be capitalized. Having said that, I don't think Mother Earth or even Earth really fits the setting (obviously 'earth' just meaning the ground is fine). But this isn't really the place for that, otherwise I would have suggested Mother Savarra or just Savarra ('Mother Earth' might be fine as a [silly]), but regardless... Mother Earth or Earth would be capitalizedas you're personifying the Earth, just like Mother Nature.</p><p>[ATTACH]35220[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>4. Technically it's 'done well' not 'done good', but I doubt anyone really care too much. I wouldn't even mention except for the other minor typos to address.</p><p>[ATTACH]35221[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>5. 'Small' shouldn't be capitalized.</p><p>[ATTACH]35222[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p><strong>Combat > Loss >Suckle and Bang</strong></p><p></p><p>6. Should be 'She'</p><p>[ATTACH]35224[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>7. There's an extra space here.</p><p>[ATTACH]35225[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ace Hangman, post: 439071, member: 40656"] [B]Combat > Loss >Facesitting[/B] 1. Should probably remove 'the'. [ATTACH alt="Kuroko01.png"]35218[/ATTACH] 2. Should be 'fragrance' or add something else like 'fragrant scent'. [ATTACH alt="Kuroko02.png"]35219[/ATTACH] 3. 'Mother Earth' would be capitalized. Having said that, I don't think Mother Earth or even Earth really fits the setting (obviously 'earth' just meaning the ground is fine). But this isn't really the place for that, otherwise I would have suggested Mother Savarra or just Savarra ('Mother Earth' might be fine as a [silly]), but regardless... Mother Earth or Earth would be capitalizedas you're personifying the Earth, just like Mother Nature. [ATTACH alt="Kuroko03.png"]35220[/ATTACH] 4. Technically it's 'done well' not 'done good', but I doubt anyone really care too much. I wouldn't even mention except for the other minor typos to address. [ATTACH alt="Kuroko04.png"]35221[/ATTACH] 5. 'Small' shouldn't be capitalized. [ATTACH alt="Kuroko05.png"]35222[/ATTACH] [B]Combat > Loss >Suckle and Bang[/B] 6. Should be 'She' [ATTACH]35224[/ATTACH] 7. There's an extra space here. [ATTACH]35225[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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