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[0.7.6] Harvest Valley & Sariel Quest
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<blockquote data-quote="teawolf" data-source="post: 439171" data-attributes="member: 51577"><p>Continuing with SarielQuest, on returning to the Marefolk Village, comma splice in this sentence. Comma after "her" should be a period or an em-dash:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35279[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>After fighting the boar, missing comma after "if you've noticed:"</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35280[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>In the next scene, period after "with" should be a comma:</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35282[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>When visiting Sariel for the completion of the quest, Sariel'd just stuck her head out of the tent in question, so "the tent" rather than "a tent" seems appropriate?</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35283[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Thank you!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="teawolf, post: 439171, member: 51577"] Continuing with SarielQuest, on returning to the Marefolk Village, comma splice in this sentence. Comma after "her" should be a period or an em-dash: [ATTACH type="full" width="655px"]35279[/ATTACH] After fighting the boar, missing comma after "if you've noticed:" [ATTACH type="full" width="646px"]35280[/ATTACH] In the next scene, period after "with" should be a comma: [ATTACH type="full" width="637px"]35282[/ATTACH] When visiting Sariel for the completion of the quest, Sariel'd just stuck her head out of the tent in question, so "the tent" rather than "a tent" seems appropriate? [ATTACH type="full" width="639px"]35283[/ATTACH] Thank you! [/QUOTE]
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