[0.7.42] - [0.8.1] typos 'n' such

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- Hana & Hatsumomo Catching Threesome - double space/missing "target" (pussy)
Hana squeaks, and the trio of you come to an immediate, near-panicked halt. The shemale sprawls out across you, knotting your aching and knocking your legs free from Hatsu's grasp while she buries her face in the maroon fox's tits.

- Hatsumomo - Fuck Her Slowly - double now in one sentence
Hatsu recovers from the post-fuck afterglow a lot faster, although there’s a tiny frown on her face. "‘S going t’be really hard to sleep now that I’m all hopped up on fucksauce now, though."

- Cait nursing handjob - formatting error
It gushes down your gullet before entering your stomach and sitting there like a lead weight, guaranteeing that you're going to end up bloated down the line. Still, for now, it's worth it, oh so worth it

. You don't even need to do anything or wrap your lips about Cait's boobage — the sheer weight and force of her insistent giving ensure that nothing runs away or spills, just as it should be.

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- Have Dinner /w Hana
Starts with double [ " ]
""Are you hungry, Hana? Because I'm starving!"

Hana grins, glancing between you and Kaede sitting beside her. "How 'bout we make it a family meal, then?"

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- Writing is suddenly in first-person
Drifa - Lover's Embrace - me = you
It ends all too soon and your bodies collapse in exhaustion with Drifa barely staying on top of me. You weakly manage to wrap your arms around her limp, sweating body, and for minutes the two of you simply lay there, silently savoring the contact with each other while you recover from the experience of child-making.

There was another similar error earlier (one off scene?) - my = your
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- Visiting Khor'minos bath with Arona - Sex Her - [Her (hand?) meander up and down]
"I know," you say with a smile. You swing yourself into her lap, steadying yourself on her shoulders while her cock slides between your cheeks. Her meander up and down your flanks teasing at your breasts and wide hips while you blindly line yourself up with her rock-hard pole. The warm water of the heated pool serves as lubricant enough once you finally find the right angle, and soon enough an involuntary groan of pleasure parts your beta orc's lips, opening them wide for you to thrust your tongue into while your hips slide down the first inches of her tumescent pride.
 
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More things to fix

- After giving Bovumcherry to Arona - She's not pregnant, champion is
You sigh. "Say please."

"Fuckin' dickbag, my tits hurt! And it's your fault for breedin' me so.... aaargh! So please suck my tits already! Come oooon!"

That's more like it.

- At Ruins of Xadaron - after dealing elemental - why is champion mentioned by name?
Well," Elthara says. "That's one way to solve the problem."

Mm-hm. Nothing else accosts you as Mana, Cait, Etheryn, and Elthara stride across the bridge, easily making it to the other side. Now to see just what you've stumbled into, and whether you've just leapt out of the frying pan and right into the fire...

- Lessala's Adventurers - Being fucked by Yani doesn't remove champs Pent-Up status. Fucking Lessala does.

- Ruins of Xadaron - Ryn IS a queen.

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[0.8.1]

- Receiving Elosa's blessing [My - May]
"There we have it, our bond and pact is complete," Elosa says, equine tail swishing. "My blessings are yours, my dears. My you have many, many children, all strong and healthy, beloved by the earth."

- Darius' spell "experiment" [of how = or how]
You have no answer to that as Darius secures the last of the links and draws out a small tome bound in black-dyed leather, about the size and thickness of a small notebook. "I've no idea how the baroness gets ahold of these volumes of how Barnaphous convinces her to allow him to borrow them, if but for a while, but even so... now, where was it?"

- Grant Wish with ghostly harem - Ryn has been already "de-caged" [tiny shrimp and cock.pressed] - [all in service of — of — ] ???
You barely have enough time to receive her shock and ecstasy before the same happens to you, a cold thrill running down your spine even as a spectral yet very corporeal and throbbing member finds its way against your narrow butthole, cold fingers sinking into your hand-filling backside as you're lifted off the floor alongside Ryn by the ghostly harem. As shafts start plunging in and out of you in your elevated sitting position, your mutual moans into each others' mouths grow more and more intense; the tip of Ryn's cock rubs against your clit as she picks up her pace, your insides overflowing onto her tiny shrimp of a cock.pressed up between the two of you as tight and snug as can be, spewing blobs upon blobs of pre to join the mess that the ghosts are making of the both of you.

The queenly harem is experienced at aiding love along even if they're not participating directly themselves, and the spirits use that to great effect. Their fingers feel like they're not just touching you, but digging through your skin into your flesh in order to stimulate parts of your person you didn't even know you had, all in service of — of —
- Also, at end of same scene - Granny has been dealt with alredy, before going to harem
"I think that settles that," Ryn says. "Let's get dressed and move on... there's still my grandmother herself to deal with, if nothing else."

- When Atani is pregnant/given birth, you can enter Marevillage through portal and go meet/interact with your child. But even after that, walking to village gate square triggers event where guards take champ to see Atani/baby for first time.
 
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