This is probably more of a personal thing rather than a large kind of writing error but I notice in the regular anal scene in nice bold text we are told how Nyze's anal virginity is being taken. Meanwhile however the 3sum scene when defeating him doesn't have any mention to his virginity at all!
It feels awkward to me that one scene exclaims and the other doesn't so mayhaps both should have it?
It feels awkward to me that one scene exclaims and the other doesn't so mayhaps both should have it?