I merged some of the typos into a single thread and added some of my own mistakes I found while going through the content again. If you find any more mistakes, please post them here.
Going to cave with Drifa and showing here the sword - there is either missing sentance or just additional dot from parsing. Somewhere around here:
"Scooting behind Drifa, you wrap an arm around her waist and hold her svelte hand in yours, letting a tense moment pass before activating the sword hilt in her grasp"
and at the end of paragraph there is a missing dot? or again missing sentence near
"Smiling, you ask her in a whisper if it's everything she hoped it'd be"
After defeating warlock and choosing to fuck her - there is a non italics dialog mixed with italics one - also after fixing that quotation near "fat" should be deleted:
Around: "So big!" She pants and makes small, needy gyrations with her hips. "Don't stop. Ruin me with that "fat cock of yours!"
It should be west instead of east. Whoops.
"wasn't" and "he" needs to be switched around
Going to cave with Drifa and showing here the sword - there is either missing sentance or just additional dot from parsing. Somewhere around here:
"Scooting behind Drifa, you wrap an arm around her waist and hold her svelte hand in yours, letting a tense moment pass before activating the sword hilt in her grasp"
and at the end of paragraph there is a missing dot? or again missing sentence near
"Smiling, you ask her in a whisper if it's everything she hoped it'd be"
After defeating warlock and choosing to fuck her - there is a non italics dialog mixed with italics one - also after fixing that quotation near "fat" should be deleted:
Around: "So big!" She pants and makes small, needy gyrations with her hips. "Don't stop. Ruin me with that "fat cock of yours!"
It should be west instead of east. Whoops.
"wasn't" and "he" needs to be switched around
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