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<blockquote data-quote="Ace Hangman" data-source="post: 442038" data-attributes="member: 40656"><p><strong>Kobolds > Combat (Loss) cont.</strong></p><p></p><p>30. Should be a space at the start of this sentence, likely a parser error.</p><p>[ATTACH]36139[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>31. 'Orc' should be capitalized since it's the start of a sentence.</p><p>[ATTACH]36140[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>32. This part doesn't make sense, I know it's supposed to be the area after the kobold fight, but them being 'scattered in terror' doesn't fit the scene if the Champ loses to them. Simplest fix is probably to make it just 'scattered' by itself. Although I admit very few people will probably lose to the kobolds except on purpose.</p><p>[ATTACH]36141[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p><strong>Kobolds > Combat (Victory) > Roleplay King</strong></p><p></p><p>33. Should be 'arching' instead of 'arcing'.</p><p>[ATTACH]36142[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p><strong>Kobolds > Combat (Victory) > Roleplay King > Largest Male</strong></p><p></p><p>34. Should be 'his' instead of 'he'.</p><p>[ATTACH]36143[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>35. Prone generally means 'laying down'. This should probably be 'bent over'.</p><p>[ATTACH]36145[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>36. 'Thrust' instead of 'thrusted'. Thrust is an irregular past tense form.</p><p>[ATTACH]36146[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>37. Would be 'kobolds' sizes' or 'kobold's size' depending on if you were comparing them all or just the one.</p><p>[ATTACH]36147[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>38. Should be 'expert' instead of 'expertise'.</p><p>[ATTACH]36148[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>39. Should be 'uselessly' instead of 'useless'.</p><p>[ATTACH]36149[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ace Hangman, post: 442038, member: 40656"] [B]Kobolds > Combat (Loss) cont.[/B] 30. Should be a space at the start of this sentence, likely a parser error. [ATTACH alt="Liv30.png"]36139[/ATTACH] 31. 'Orc' should be capitalized since it's the start of a sentence. [ATTACH alt="Liv31.png"]36140[/ATTACH] 32. This part doesn't make sense, I know it's supposed to be the area after the kobold fight, but them being 'scattered in terror' doesn't fit the scene if the Champ loses to them. Simplest fix is probably to make it just 'scattered' by itself. Although I admit very few people will probably lose to the kobolds except on purpose. [ATTACH alt="Liv32.png"]36141[/ATTACH] [B]Kobolds > Combat (Victory) > Roleplay King[/B] 33. Should be 'arching' instead of 'arcing'. [ATTACH]36142[/ATTACH] [B]Kobolds > Combat (Victory) > Roleplay King > Largest Male[/B] 34. Should be 'his' instead of 'he'. [ATTACH]36143[/ATTACH] 35. Prone generally means 'laying down'. This should probably be 'bent over'. [ATTACH]36145[/ATTACH] 36. 'Thrust' instead of 'thrusted'. Thrust is an irregular past tense form. [ATTACH]36146[/ATTACH] 37. Would be 'kobolds' sizes' or 'kobold's size' depending on if you were comparing them all or just the one. [ATTACH]36147[/ATTACH] 38. Should be 'expert' instead of 'expertise'. [ATTACH]36148[/ATTACH] 39. Should be 'uselessly' instead of 'useless'. [ATTACH]36149[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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