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<blockquote data-quote="Ace Hangman" data-source="post: 435373" data-attributes="member: 40656">Yeah, yeah. I misspelled 'Sandre' in the title. I can't change it now and I don't want to repost this.Talk &gt; Cock Removal &gt; Lose PatheticallyFirst, is it intended for you to cum your soul out at any level of corruption. I literally had 1 Corruption. Anyway:1. Remove the extra space.[ATTACH]33980[/ATTACH]2. Should be 'now' instead of 'not'.[ATTACH]33981[/ATTACH]Talk &gt; Cock Removal &gt; Subdue Caera &gt; Do your best3. Should probably be 'breasts'. It's possible that the intention is that you have her angled so only one boob presses into your chest, but I don't see any indication or reason it would be only one of them, rather than a full frontal hug.[ATTACH]33982[/ATTACH]4. 'Thrust after thrust'[ATTACH]33984[/ATTACH]5. 'you are,' instead of 'you're'. 'You're' is a contraction of 'you are', but it doesn't read correctly in this particular sentence.[ATTACH]33985[/ATTACH]6. 'her' cunt.[ATTACH]33986[/ATTACH]7. mattress' with an s' apostrophe.[ATTACH]33987[/ATTACH]8. 'because of her'[ATTACH]33988[/ATTACH]9. 'Heaven's' instead of 'heaves' (capitalized, but I don't think that's super important.)[ATTACH]33989[/ATTACH]10. This should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser, since this particular Champ ejaculates honey. I assume this is just written as white.[ATTACH]33990[/ATTACH]</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Ace Hangman, post: 435373, member: 40656"] Yeah, yeah. I misspelled 'Sandre' in the title. I can't change it now and I don't want to repost this. [B]Talk > Cock Removal > Lose Pathetically[/B] First, is it intended for you to cum your soul out at any level of corruption. I literally had 1 Corruption. Anyway: 1. Remove the extra space. [ATTACH alt="SC01.png"]33980[/ATTACH] 2. Should be 'now' instead of 'not'. [ATTACH alt="SC02.png"]33981[/ATTACH] [B]Talk > Cock Removal > Subdue Caera > Do your best[/B] 3. Should probably be 'breasts'. It's possible that the intention is that you have her angled so only one boob presses into your chest, but I don't see any indication or reason it would be only one of them, rather than a full frontal hug. [ATTACH alt="SC03.png"]33982[/ATTACH] 4. 'Thrust after thrust' [ATTACH alt="SC04.png"]33984[/ATTACH] 5. 'you are,' instead of 'you're'. 'You're' is a contraction of 'you are', but it doesn't read correctly in this particular sentence. [ATTACH alt="SC05.png"]33985[/ATTACH] 6. 'her' cunt. [ATTACH alt="SC06.png"]33986[/ATTACH] 7. mattress' with an s' apostrophe. [ATTACH alt="SC07.png"]33987[/ATTACH] 8. 'because of her' [ATTACH alt="SC08.png"]33988[/ATTACH] 9. 'Heaven's' instead of 'heaves' (capitalized, but I don't think that's super important.) [ATTACH alt="SC09.png"]33989[/ATTACH] 10. This should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser, since this particular Champ ejaculates honey. I assume this is just written as white. [ATTACH alt="SC10.png"]33990[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]

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