Fight (victory > Fuck > Fuck Asshole
1. Should be 'fistful' instead of 'fistfull'. You can have a fist full of ass, but you grab a fistful of ass.
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Fight (victory) > Fuck > Fist Asshole
2. Should be 'dead-on in' instead of 'in dead-on in'
Submit > Face
3. In this scene, my Champ definitely does have a cock. Presumably if you lose in combat this occurs without a choice and this only happens because I submitted and chose it instead of Cock.
4. Scene just ends abruptly here. Like there should be another page after Next.
Golden Carrot quest. Meeting her again in the Marefolk Village.
5. Should be 'your wife' instead of 'her wife'.
Golden Carrot quest. Boar fight.
6. Should probably be 'and blasts your ears'.
Golden Carrot quest. Sariel's home, first visit.
7. Should be 'respective'. It could just be 'clean your feet' regardless of you or companions, but that might depend on the parser in play.
8. Should be 'place on a shelf' or 'place upon a shelf' instead of 'place a shelf'.
Sariel's Tent in Marefolk Village
Sex > Rim Sixty-Nine
9. The exit line seems to be imported from the wilderness sex scene. At first, I chuckled at the thought of springing a rabbit snare, but then I saw it was referring to bushes and things and think it's probably a copy/paste thing. Should likely be replaced with a line about stepping out of the tent in the village.
1. Should be 'fistful' instead of 'fistfull'. You can have a fist full of ass, but you grab a fistful of ass.
View attachment 33243
Fight (victory) > Fuck > Fist Asshole
2. Should be 'dead-on in' instead of 'in dead-on in'
Submit > Face
3. In this scene, my Champ definitely does have a cock. Presumably if you lose in combat this occurs without a choice and this only happens because I submitted and chose it instead of Cock.
4. Scene just ends abruptly here. Like there should be another page after Next.
Golden Carrot quest. Meeting her again in the Marefolk Village.
5. Should be 'your wife' instead of 'her wife'.
Golden Carrot quest. Boar fight.
6. Should probably be 'and blasts your ears'.
Golden Carrot quest. Sariel's home, first visit.
7. Should be 'respective'. It could just be 'clean your feet' regardless of you or companions, but that might depend on the parser in play.
8. Should be 'place on a shelf' or 'place upon a shelf' instead of 'place a shelf'.
Sariel's Tent in Marefolk Village
Sex > Rim Sixty-Nine
9. The exit line seems to be imported from the wilderness sex scene. At first, I chuckled at the thought of springing a rabbit snare, but then I saw it was referring to bushes and things and think it's probably a copy/paste thing. Should likely be replaced with a line about stepping out of the tent in the village.
