Sex > Tease Her
1. Should be 'heartbeat's' instead of 'hearbeat's'.
Sex > Against Door
2. Should be 'welcomes'.
3. Something tells me there should be a second thing on her mind here.
4. Her skin shouldn't be bluish. This is probably a holdover from when she was envisioned as a boreal/ice elf before being changed to a wyld elf. Should probably just be 'pale' skin.
5. Should be 'how generous her figure is' instead of 'how generous figure is'.
1. Should be 'heartbeat's' instead of 'hearbeat's'.
Sex > Against Door
2. Should be 'welcomes'.
3. Something tells me there should be a second thing on her mind here.
4. Her skin shouldn't be bluish. This is probably a holdover from when she was envisioned as a boreal/ice elf before being changed to a wyld elf. Should probably just be 'pale' skin.
5. Should be 'how generous her figure is' instead of 'how generous figure is'.
