[0.6.0] Various typos, grammer errors, and other misc. things

[CboyC95]

It's spelled "crate"

There should be a comma there.

There should be a comma there.

There should be a comma there.

Lyric with me here is male not female.

There should be a comma there.

Shouldn't this be italic like the other spoken dialogue?

There should be a comma there.

Why is there an extra comma?

Why is this part in italic?

 

[CboyC95]

Count Victor should've been in the portrait as well.

Why isn't this italic and why is there an extra quotation mark?

Annika should've been in the portrait as well.

A comma should have been there.

"It" should be replaced with "I"

"your" should be replaced with "you"

"my" should be replaced with "me"

Elthara should've been in the portrait as well.

My character is male and does not have a pussy.

"party" should be replaced with "part"

 

[CboyC95]

"a" should have been in between here.


Maybe with this part with "lady regent".

 

[CboyC95]

There should a period at the end.

Why isn't this italic, and the first quotation mark spaced?