[0.5.3] Typo/Error Megapost

[MistressAzula]

Errors found in version [0.5.3], Part 1
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.

-Some of these entries aren't strictly typos and may be or contain suggested improvements.
-Like in my previous posts, I tried to create some semblance of organisation of the entries, whether by location, association, etc.
-I omit any [Next]s in the choice paths (the line below the character/scene name with the forward-slashes, if present).


Looks like I'm a few days late for this version still being current.
I initially intended for this to be a relatively small compilation, yet I ended up with ~128 entries.




Typos:
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Flash Fire power, card description



-Typo:
"...and causing all other enemies to be..."
--Suggested Corrections:
"...and causing all enemies to be..."
"...and causing every enemy to be..."

-Note:
The description implies that every opponent besides the target is burned and blinded. Removing "other" sets it in-line with its actual effect of burning and blinding all enemies.
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Mirror Image power, in-combat description



-Typo:
"...numerous lifelike images of..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...numerous life-like images of..."

-Note:
More of a suggestion; "life-like" looks better than "lifelike".
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Codex, Gameplay, Attributes & Statistics



-Typo:
"Each point of Presence increases Sexiness by +1 and Leadership by +2."
--Suggested Correction:
"Each point of Presence increases Sexiness by +1, Leadership by +2, and Health by +2."

-Note:
Needs to be updated to reflect the new HP calculation. I believe there may be a few other leftovers from before the mechanics update in there too.
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Gaining experience



-Typo:
"You gain 15 Electrum Coins, 1x Gaia Leaflets, and 60 XP. Cait gains 0 XP. Brint gains 0 XP."
--Suggested Correction:
"You gain 15 Electrum Coins, 1x Gaia Leaflets, and 60 XP."

-Note:
Since your companions' experience and level are based off yours now, the mention of them gaining experience is obsolete.
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Centaur Woman Dream



-Typo 1:
"...stand above her, conqueror and king, as she..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...stand above her, conqueror and queen, as she..."

-Typo 2:
"...flared horse-dick is raging hard, leaking spunk all down the underside of its underside ."
--Suggested Correction:
"...flared horse-dick is raging hard, leaking spunk all down its underside."

-Note:
A suggestion: as my character is a woman, "queen" instead of "king" is largely preferential. (Typo 1)
Double space between "is" and "raging". Also, the end of the sentence is badly worded, and there's an unnecessary space between "underside" and the period. (Typo 2)
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Old Forest, resolve loss scene



-Note:
Since resolve is no longer a mechanic, this line is meaningless and obsolete.
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Old Forest, HP and resolve recover scene



-Typo:
"Your party recovers some health and resolve."
--Suggested Correction:
"Your party recovers some health."

-Note:
Since resolve is no longer a mechanic, it should be stricken from the line.
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Foothills, HP and resolve recover scene



-Typo:
"Your party recovers some health and resolve."
--Suggested Correction:
"Your party recovers some health."

-Note:
Since resolve is no longer a mechanic, "resolve" should be removed.
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Glacial Rift, resolve drain scene



-Note:
Since resolve is no longer a mechanic, does the failure to resist mean anything? Or is this just a 'flavour' scene now?
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Razorcup Necter item use



-Note:
You can still use it on companions despite their experience and level being based off yours now. Should be corrected so that you automatically take it like most other items instead of giving a (now meaningless) choice.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 2

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Baad Clover, transformative effect (tail)



-Typo:
"Your nimble tail don't feel right; since when did they feel both warm and short?"
--Suggested Correction:
"Your nimble tail doesn't feel right; since when did it feel both warm and short?"

-Note:
"don't" should be "doesn't", and "they" should be "it". My character has/had only one tail; the scene erroneously refers to having had multiple. As far as I know, only a kitsune player character can have multiple tails (which my character is not).
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Atugia introductory scene, pre-battle



-Typo:
"The mistress was so sure there..."
--Suggested Correction:
"She was so sure there..."
"Carmen was so sure there..."
"Mistress was so sure there..."

-Note:
A suggestion: replacing "The mistress" with just "She" sounds better and keeps the mystique; replacing "The mistress" with "Carmen" sounds more like something Atugia would say, and for a first-time player they won't know the name; or if mistress is preferential for some reason, removing "The" so that it's just "Mistress" sounds better to me.
I know it's suppose to sound vague and not directly mention Carmen (at least that's what I've always thought), but at the same time it just doesn't sound like Atugia.
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Atugia introductory scene (Hawkethorne), victory against her, post-battle



-Typo:
"your last blow staggers..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Your last blow staggers..."

-Note:
First word "your" needs capitalisation.
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Stylists, chest tattooing
/Services/Tattoos/Chest



-Typo 1:
"...gives your big, lactating, tattooed breasts a squeeze..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...gives your big, lactating, breasts a squeeze..."

-Typo 2:
"...casual concentration you'd call it, but for the way her ears occasionally twitch when you hiss at an extra-sensitive spot."
--Suggested Correction:
"...casual concentration you'd call it, except the way her ears occasionally twitch when you hiss at an extra-sensitive spot."

-Note:
How can my character's chest be tattooed already when it hasn't been tattooed yet? (Typo 1)
This is a suggestion; I think "except the way" sounds notably better than "but for the way" in this case. (Typo 2)
In addition, there's an inconsistency with all the tattooing scenes. In all these scenes, Aurera says she knows healing magic right before the tattooing, but after the tattooing it's Claire that performs the healing magic (as outlined at the top and bottom of the screenshot).
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Cait, Sun Dancer set, Dance of the Dunes perk in-combat text



-Typo:
"Cait's resolve is restored by Dance of the Dunes!"
--Suggested Correction:
"Cait's health is restored by Dance of the Dunes!"

-Note:
Oversight; "resolve" should now be "health" here.
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Caravanserai, after rejecting Evergreen's offer, Cat Call quest



-Note:
Not only do I not have Brienne in the party in this scene, but Brienne is still Brint in my game with this character.
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Eryka dream



-Note:
Dialogue needs to be italicised, and the first word in the sentence should be capitalised. Player character doesn't have a cock variant.
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Eryka dream



-Note:
Dialogue needs to be italicised, and it's missing a quotation mark in front of "Maybe". Player character doesn't have a cock variant.
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Kasyrra, Dream Palace
/Just Talk/Aileh?



-Typo:
"...sculpted them into goddess of war!"
--Suggested Correction:
"...sculpted them into goddesses of war!"

-Note:
Missing plural form; "goddess" should be "goddesses" here.
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Crazy Horse, in-combat attack description



-Typo:
"...for a limb shotthat you are..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...for a limb shot that you are..."

-Note:
Lack of space between "shot" and "that.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 3

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Zo, after happy family-making love-making
/Crib



-Typo:
"...not much of a craftsman yourself."
--Suggested Correction:
"...not much of a craftswoman yourself."

-Note:
As my character is a woman, "craftswoman" is much preferable over "craftsman".
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Lucia, Manticore Girl, and Morwen



-Note:
This scene assumes you've encountered the Manticore Girl, and states such even if you haven't. It's a bit bothersome given that, at least in my experience, most of my characters come across this scene before encountering the Manticore Girl, including the first time I saw the scene. I was initially confused about her being 'familiar', before realising she was a character you could encounter somewhere in the game. Anyway, encountering the Manticore Girl should be a prerequisite for this scene occurring.
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Valencia
/Training/Will Training/Ride & Facesit



-Note:
Space/break needed between the first and second paragraphs.
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Valencia
/Training/Will Training/Ride & Facesit



-Note:
Apostrophe (') at the start of the dialogue line should be a quotation mark, and the dialogue needs to be italicised.
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Valencia
/Sex/Fuck Ass/Again/Again



-Note:
Dialogue needs to be italicised. In addition, the end quotation is bolded.
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Valencia
/Sex/Fuck Ass/Again/Again/Again/Again



-Note:
Dialogue needs to be italicised. In addition, the end quotation is bolded.
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Lusina
/Sex/Anal



-Typo:
"Pussyjuices squirt out around..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Pussy juices squirt out around..." (1)
"Pussy-juices squirt out around..." (2)

-Note:
Shouldn't it be two words?
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Kitsune Scouts, Old Forest (Kitsune Camp)
/Kitsunes/Chat



-Note:
Missing end quotation mark for first paragraph.
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Kitsune Scouts, Old Forest (Kitsune Camp)
/Kitsunes/Chat/Home



-Typo:
"Kitsune have to supplement ourselves with..."
--Suggested Correction:
"We kitsune have to supplement ourselves with..."

-Note:
With "ourselves" in that sentence, it sounds better and makes more sense to change the beginning of the sentence to "We kitsune".
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Kitsune Scouts, Old Forest (Kitsune Camp)
/Kitsunes/Chat/Bridge



-Typo:
"She is a plant, and so naturally fears fire."
--Suggested Corrections:
"She is a plant, and so naturally she fears fire."
"She is a plant, and so she naturally fears fire."

-Note:
Adding "she" before or after "naturally" sounds better. I prefer the former of my two suggested corrections.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 4

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Viviane, second meeting



-Note:
The quotation mark after "more your speed" should be removed, and the sentence afterwards should be italicised.
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Azyrran (Old Forest)



-Note:
The tooltip for [Talk] doesn't make sense after your first meeting. Or before you select [Talk] for the first time, like if you instead attacked her or simply left instead. Just look at what she's saying, it just doesn't match up. (like the below)
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Azyrran (Old Forest)
/Talk



-Note:
The first paragraph doesn't make sense after first time or so, especially after you get to know each other and become affectionate. Just look at what she's saying in the second paragraph, it just doesn't match up. (like the above)
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Azyrran (Old Forest), duel, victory against her
/Challenge



-Typo:
"...using her spear to support herself."
--Suggested Correction:
"...using her lance to support herself."

-Note:
Azyrran wields a lance, or short-lance or lancet, not a spear (wrong type of polearm).
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Corrupt Hornets, victory against them, sex scene
/Boobjob/Cock



-Typo:
"Your manhood are lengthy enough..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Your manhood is lengthy enough..."

-Note:
"are" should be "is". It's as if this, among several other scenes, erroneously think my character has multiple cocks; she has only one.
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Queen Nyzzerah, purified
/Sex/Get Egged



-Typo:
"...with dripping finers, you line them up..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...with dripping fingers, you line them up..."

-Note:
Misspelling; "finers" should be "fingers".
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Queen Nyzzerah, purified
/Sex/Get Egged



-Typo:
"...starts to pound with insistance..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...starts to pound with insistence..."

-Note:
Misspelling; "insistance" should be "insistence".
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Queen Nyzzerah, purified
/Sex/Orgy



-Typo:
"...body is heavy eggs and honey..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...body is heavy with eggs and honey..."

-Note:
Missing "with" in between "heavy" and "eggs". Importantly, this entire scene plays as if my character has a vagina, which she doesn't (shemale). I outlined the most prominent of this error.
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Evergreen
/Sex/Get Fucked



-Note:
She mentions impregnation even though my character received it anally.
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Vari, after giving birth to kittens



-Note:
For some reason this scene came up when I selected [Pick Fight]. Seems like a mistake, unless it's intentional.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 5

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Maids, after delivering uniforms (Maids of Wayfort)



-Typo:
"...even more fun than naked?!"
--Suggested Correction:
"...even more fun than being naked?!"

-Note:
Missing word; needs "being" between "than" and "naked". After Nelia finishes the dresses and returning to Rumie with them.
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Daliza, asking about upgrading (Wayfort Upgrade)
/WayfortUpgrade



-Note:
Unnecessary quotation mark.
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Wayfort Upgrades quest, after getting everything, demon statue (Wayfort Upgrade)
/Demon



-Typo:
"did I hear that right?"
--Suggested Correction:
"Did I hear that right?"

-Note:
Shouldn't "did" be capitalised?
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Farrah
/Arid Rose



-Note:
The line near the bottom "That is the Arid Rose, the dance of the winding dunes." looks and sounds like it's being said by Farrah, yet there are no quotation marks, and it isn't italicised either. If it's suppose to be, it needs those things.
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Daliza, sleeping with at the Wayfort



-Note:
Extra, unnecessary quotation mark after "chuckle". The sleep scene where Narcie is already in your bed.
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Daliza, talking about the Alraune
/Talk/Wayfort Folk



-Note:
The outlined dialogue should be italicised, and it is missing a quotation mark at the start.
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Daliza
/Jaelyn Date/Subby Fuck



-Typo:
"...flood of Daliza's cum..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...flood of Jael'yn's cum..."

-Note:
Wrong elf, should be Jael'yn.
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Elthara, Wayfort, sex including Brint
/"Talks"/Get Brint/Just Watch



-Note:
The outlined paragraph has a few issues: the first is that it looks like something may be missing before/at the start of the paragraph. Otherwise, it needs to be capitalised. Secondly, there's a '|' on the next line down, which shouldn't be there (both the '|' and the extra line/space/break).
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Hethia, Old Forest (Logging Camp), Dog Days quest
/River/Parley/.../Keep Silent/Sympathize



-Typo:
"You're guessing that she's other fellow druids in the Old Forest, doesn't she?"
--Suggested Correction:
"You're guessing that she's wanting to check up on her fellow druids in the Old Forest, doesn't she?"

-Note:
The sentence doesn't make sense and seems to be missing words. My suggested correction is based off of stuff from the next 'page'.
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Hethia, Old Forest (Logging Camp), Dog Days quest
/River/Parley/.../Keep Silent/Sympathize



-Typo:
"...Alissa's, the current queen's grandmother..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...Alissa's, the current queen's, grandmother..."

-Note:
There should be a comma after "queen's".
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[MistressAzula]

Part 6

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Hethia, sex scene, post-Dog Days quest



-Typo:
"Her companion warg pads along silently at her side..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Her warg companion pads along silently at her side..."

-Note:
I think it sounds better if the ordering of "companion warg" is reversed to "warg companion".
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Hethia, sex scene, post-Dog Days quest
/Yes/Titty 69



-Typo:
"...doesn't she??"
--Suggested Correction:
"...doesn't she?"

-Note:
Extra, unnecessary question mark.
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Hethia, sex scene, post-Dog Days quest
/Yes/Mating Press



-Typo:
"...shudder of relief.The forceful..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...shudder of relief. The forceful..."

-Note:
Needs a space between "relief" and "The", after the period.
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Etheryn, kissing embrace scene, Frost Hound or Palace of Ice (throne room)



-Typo:
"...fingers kitting at your middle"
--Suggested Correction:
"...fingers knitting at your middle"

-Note:
"kitting" should be "knitting". The scene that can happen when you enter the Frost Hound or Palace of Ice throne room, after you save Winter City.
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Midwinter Festivus invitation scene



-Note:
An end quotation is missing from the last paragraph in the screenshot.
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Midwinter Festivus, Etheryn
/Elves/Etheryn



-Typo:
"...projecting her royal presence as elven regent..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...projecting her royal presence as elven regent..."

-Note:
Double space between "presence" and "as".
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Midwinter Festivus, Etheryn's speech



-Note:
Each paragraph in the screenshot is dialogue or ends in dialogue and each are missing an end quotation mark.
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Midwinter Festivus, Etheryn's speech



-Note:
More inconsistencies with the quotation marks. More of the previous entry, and one paragraph of dialogue lacking a start quotation mark.
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Midwinter Festivus, Etheryn's speech



-Note:
More inconsistencies with the quotation marks.
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Midwinter Festivus, Etheryn's speech



-Note:
More missing quotation marks.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 7

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Midwinter Festivus, dance with Atugia
/Atugia



-Typo:
"Despite your lack of formal training, you find yourself having no trouble following Tui's steps, managing as graceful a dance as you can."

-Note:
This sentence is erroneous; my character is a noble scion and in all the other dance scenes there has been mention of your previous lessons.
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Midwinter Festivus, dance with Kasyrra
/Atugia



-Typo:
"...gracefully allows you lead her away..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...gracefully allows you to lead her away..."

-Note:
Missing "to" between "you" and "lead".
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Midwinter Festivus, dance with Hethia
/Hethia



-Typo:
"...a little more complex as she learns, spinning the druidess..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...a little more complex as she learns, spinning the druidess..."

-Note:
Double space between "learns" and "spinning".
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Midwinter Festivus, evening with Etheryn
/Etheryn



-Typo:
"...wander through her and catch her..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...wander through here and catch her..."

-Note:
Misspelling; "her" should be "here".
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Midwinter Festivus, evening with Etheryn, post-sex
/Etheryn



-Typo:
"...you hesitate to use it until Ryn assures you that..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...you hesitate to use it until Ryn assures you that..."

-Note:
Double space between "Ryn" and "assures".
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Midwinter Festivus, the next morning



-Typo:
"Slowly, cait shakes her head..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Slowly, Cait shakes her head..."

-Note:
"cait" needs capitalisation. In addition, Cait's last line and the last paragraph in the screenshot need a space/break between them.
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Alissa speech, when first entering Winter City



-Typo:
"So that's the elvenqueen?"
--Suggested Correction:
"So that's the elven queen?"

-Note:
Specifically, the variant that plays if you haven't interacted much at all with Etheryn beforehand.
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CharacterSceneTitle
/Path

QQQ1

-Typo:
""
--Suggested Correction:
""

-Note:
visiting brienne's family
"She sticks her tongue out at her" -> "Rina sticks her tongue out at her"
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Rina, after visiting several times
/Flirt



-Typo:
"...having running water in your home..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...having running water in a home..."

-Note:
I think this sounds better. After the scene where she cries into your bosom.
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Brienne Rina first sex



-Typo:
"...balls-deep the cowgirl sisters..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...balls-deep in the cowgirl sisters..."

-Note:
Missing word; needs "in" between "deep" and "the". Character has cock.
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Brienne and Rina
/TeachFingering



-Note:
The outlined text needs to be italicised, and it has an extra quotation mark at the beginning. Chose for Rina to be submissive.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 8

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Adventurers, first meeting outside Khor'minos in the outskirts



-Typo:
"hey seem nice enough..."
--Suggested Correction:
"They seem nice enough..."

-Note:
In the tooltip for [No Thanks], missing "T" in "they"; "hey" should be "They".
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Adventurers, first meeting outside Khor'minos in the outskirts
/Vicky



-Note:
The dialogue at the top needs to be italisiced, and it's missing a quotation mark before "Vicky". Also, shouldn't "you" (at the top) and "she" (near the middle) be capitalised?
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Adventurers, first meeting outside Khor'minos in the outskirts
/Lessala



-Note:
There needs to be a space/break between Brienne's line and the paragraph below it. With Brienne in the party, of course.
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Mara, before relocation
/Services/Mara/Bondage



-Typo:
"...fountaining into your bowels..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...fountaining into your bowels..."

-Note:
Double space between "your" and "bowels".
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Adel, milking barn
/Milk Girls



-Typo:
"...she pushes herself back into you, angling herself so..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...she pushes herself back into you, angling herself so..."

-Note:
Double space between "you" and "angling". First time variation, if it matters.
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Livie, milking barn
/Milk Girls



-Note:
I'm not sure if this is intentional, but should it say "Livie" both times? First time variation.
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Livie, milking barn
/Milk Girls



-Note:
My character doesn't have a cock, yet is referenced here. First time variation, if it matters.
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Nona, milk me
/Get A Stall/Get Milked/Nona



-Typo:
"...this big?I'm gonna have..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...this big? I'm gonna have..."

-Note:
A space needed between sentences, between "big" and "I'm".
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Khor'minos bakery




-Note:
Two things about the bakery: its name and cake.
First is that when mentioned by Julia in the outskirts, she refers to it as "Butterman's", but at the bakery it says it's called "The Sweetest Pie".
Second is that the text saying Brienne wants cake outside the bakery exists even if you haven't seen the previously mentioned scene in the outskirts, and it doesn't go away until you do see the scene and come back and get it for her.
The second screenshot was taken without seeing the minor scene in the outskirts with the cowgirl named Julia, of course.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 9

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Milly
/Help Her



-Note:
The outlined dialogue needs to be italicised, and it has an unnecessary period after the end quotation.
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Milly
/Sex/Behind Counter/Tend Store/[Pastries/Cum Pastries]



-Typo:
"...to see your juice-drenched face..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...to see your juice-drenched face..."

-Note:
Double space between "your" and "juice". Player character with pussy and no cock variation.
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Milly
/Talk/Clothes/Only Apron



-Typo:
"Also, there's no one on sight,"
--Suggested Correction:
"Also, there's no one in sight,"

-Note:
"on" should be "in".
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Milly
/Sex/Tease Her



-Note:
The outlined text needs to be italicised. Also, there needs to be a space between "her exposed lower back" and "You don't", before the quotation mark and after the period.
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Milly
/Sex/Against Door



-Typo:
"...nectar falls down, briefly staining..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...nectar falls down, briefly staining..."

-Note:
Double space between "falls" and "down".
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Milly
/Sex/Against Door



-Typo 1:
"Her hole wellcomes you with..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Her hole welcomes you with..."

-Typo 2:
"You smile while pushing..."
--Suggested Correction:
"You smile while pushing..."

-Note:
"wellcomes" should be "welcomes". (Typo 1)
Double space between "smile" and "while". (Typo 2)
Player character with pussy and no cock variation of scene.
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Milly
/Sex/Against Door/Secret



-Typo:
" "Is anyone in there?" one of the voices... "
--Suggested Correction:
" "Is anyone in there?" One of the voices... "

-Note:
Shouldn't "one" be capitalised? Also there's an unfinished sentence: "Her mind can only think about two things: keeping her lips shut tight and ".
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Milly
/Sex/Against Door/Secret



-Typo:
"...and viciously wigger your fingers..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...and viciously wiggle your fingers..."

-Note:
"wigger" should be "wiggle".
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Milly
/Sex/Against Door/Secret



-Typo:
"...onto Milly's arched back, painting her bluish skin white. . "
--Suggested Correction:
"...onto Milly's arched back, painting her bluish skin white."

-Note:
Double space between "Milly's" and "arched". Unnecessary period after spaces at the end of the paragraph. Player character using (magi)cock variation.
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Milly
/Sex/Behind Counter/[Dismiss/Tend Store/Tell Him]



-Typo:
"...against your crotch , sending your summoned strapon..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...against your crotch, sending your summoned strapon..."

-Note:
Unnecessary space between "crotch" and the comma. Last choice in the path doesn't matter. Player character using (magi)cock variation.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 10

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Milly
/Sex/Against Door/Public



-Typo 1:
"Milly takes one of her hands..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Milly takes one of her hands..."

-Typo 2:
"...around her ass.. With some effort..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...around her ass. With some effort..."

-Note:
Double space between "Milly" and "takes". (Typo 1)
Extra period after "ass". (Typo 2)
Player character using (magi)cock variation.
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Milly
/Help Her/Venom Frosting/Go After/Use Cock



-Typo 1:
"...answer by reflex , eagerly wrapping..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...answer by reflex, eagerly wrapping..."

-Typo 2:
" "So, what did you want from me?" you ask while leaning forward."
--Suggested Correction:
" "So, what did you want from me?" You ask while leaning forward."

-Note:
Unnecessary space between "reflex" and the comma. (Typo 1)
Double space between "while" and "leaning". Also, shouldn't "you" be capitalised? (Typo 2)
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Milly
/Help Her/Venom Frosting/Go After/Use Cock



-Typo 1:
" "Where did you want this to go?" you say as... "
--Suggested Correction:
" "Where did you want this to go?" You say as... "

-Typo 2:
"...deep inside me.Pound my..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...deep inside me. Pound my..."

-Typo 3:
" ...your neck."Thanks for granting your slut her wiiiIIIISHHH. OH GOD." "
--Suggested Correction:
" ...your neck. "Thanks for granting your slut her wiiiIIIISHHH. OH GOD." "

-Typo 4:
"...your cock , tightening around..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...your cock, tightening around..."

-Note:
Shouldn't "you" be capitalised? (Typo 1)
Space needed between "me" and "Pound". (Typo 2)
Space needed between "neck" and "Thanks". Also the dialogue needs to be italicised. (Typo 3)
Unnecessary space between "cock" and the comma. (Typo 4)
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Milly
/Help Her/Venom Frosting/Go After/Use Cock



-Typo 1:
"...love feeling you with my twat."
--Suggested Correction:
"...love feeling you in my twat."

-Typo 2:
" ...milk them. " Send my warm milk... "
--Suggested Correction:
" ...milk them. "Send my warm milk... "

-Typo 3:
" ...drinks it all up?" you say as you resume... "
--Suggested Correction:
" ...drinks it all up?" You say as you resume... "

-Typo 4:
"...hard from having her milk..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...hard from having her milk..."

-Note:
Shouldn't it be "in" instead of "with"? It sounds better, regardless. (Typo 1)
Unnecessary space between the quotation mark and "Send". (Typo 2)
Shouldn't "you" be capitalised? (Typo 3)
Double space between "from" and "having". (Typo 4)
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Milly
/Help Her/Venom Frosting/Go After/Use Cock



-Typo 1:
"...with a week long thirst."
--Suggested Correction:
"...with a week-long thirst."

-Typo 2:
"...in Khor Minos, but her..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...in Khor'minos, but her..."

-Note:
Inserting a '-' between "week" and "long", making it "week-long", I think works better. (Typo 1)
"Khor Minos" should be "Khor'minos". (Typo 2)
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Livrea, first meeting



-Note:
Outlined dialogue needs to be italicised.
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Livrea
/Local News (Hawkstone Castle)



-Typo:
"They lady of the castle..."
--Suggested Correction:
"The lady of the castle..."

-Note:
Misspelling; "They" should be "The".
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Livrea, date
/Have Dinner



-Typo:
"...the legions, but if the demons breach the city me and..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...the legions, but if the demons breach the city, me and..."

-Note:
Shouldn't there be a comma after "city"?
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Livrea, date, sex
/Have Dinner/Sure/Cowgirl



-Typo:
"...until you feet sultriness blossoming around..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...until you feel sultriness blossoming around..."

-Note:
Misspelling; "feet" should be "feel".
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Livrea, date, sex
/Have Dinner/Sure/Cowgirl



-Typo:
"...and twists around the straddle you."
--Suggested Correction:
"...and twists around to straddle you."

-Note:
Wrong word; "the" should be "to".
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[MistressAzula]

Part 11

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Livrea
/Flirt



-Note:
There's an extra break/space between the second paragraph and Cait's line; a two line space compared to the normal one line spacing between paragraphs. While Cait is in the party, of course.
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Serena, first meeting



-Typo:
"...you found other ways to amoose yourself..."
--Suggested Corrections:
"...you found other ways to a-moo-se yourself..." (1)
"...you found other ways to aMOOse yourself..." (2)

-Note:
I didn't think this one was very obvious, typed out as it is (probably just me). I think it'd look better as one of the offered suggestions, maybe also with the "moo" in "amoose" being italicised and/or bolded.
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Saldarium (Khor'minos Baths)




-Note:
Brienne says she used to spend time in the baths, yet outside she says she's never been inside. Her chatting when you first enter with her also supports the latter.
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Teyarium (Khor'minos Baths), post-massage aftercare
/Massage/Yeas Please



-Typo:
"...and lets out a and lets out a low whistle."
--Suggested Correction:
"...and lets out a low whistle."

-Note:
Doubling of text.
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Teyarium (Khor'minos Baths), Tarandra selection button and tooltip before meeting



-Note:
Her selection button and the tooltip for it both state "Boreal Elf". A confusing inconsistency, because then the tooltip says wyld elf in its description text, and she's called wyld elf again by your character when you approach her. Also the first conversation topic you can bring up is her wyld mark. I'm not sure how this sort of strange mixup could have happened. Anyway, both the selection button and tooltip should say "Wyld Elf".
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Tarandra, first time sex
/Sex



-Typo:
"...to reveal your sight of your..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...to reveal the sight of your..."

-Note:
Wrong word; "your" should be "the". Scene variation where the player character has a (apparently) smaller cock (however big the magicock is).
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Arille
/[Great Warrior/Name On List/Coincidence]/Yes



-Typo:
"...unceremoniously strips you off, tossing your clothes..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...unceremoniously strips you, tossing your clothes..."

-Note:
Removing "off" makes it sound/flow better.
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Arille, sex (edging blowjob)



-Note:
The outlined dialogue needs a quotation mark in front of "There's", and the dialogue needs to be italicised.
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Noire
/Sex/Doggystyle



-Typo:
"Imagine a heroine on the city having..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Imagine the heroine of the city having..."

-Note:
Change "a" to "the", and "on" to "of" makes the sentence make sense.
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[MistressAzula]

Part 12

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Noire
/Sex/Doggystyle



-Typo 1:
"...all the way from herwomb to the rest..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...all the way from her womb to the rest..."

-Typo 2:
"...grows more frenetic, she spreads..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...grows more frenetic, she spreads..."

-Note:
A space needed between "her" and "womb". (Typo 1)
Double space between "frenetic," and "she". (Typo 2)
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Noire
/Sex/Doggystyle



-Typo:
"...going at it like taleer in..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...going at it like taeleer in..."

-Note:
Taeleer is misspelled as "taleer".
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Noire
/Sex/Doggystyle



-Typo:
"...out about your knot even as..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...out about your knot even as..."

-Note:
Double space between "knot" and "even".
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Noire
/Suite/Hang Out/Shear



-Typo:
"...leans forward and emcompasses you in as fluffy a hug..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...leans forward and encompasses you in as fluffy a hug..."

-Note:
"emcompasses" should be spelled "encompasses".
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Noire
/Suite/Sex/Impregnate



-Typo:
"What were the word she used again?"
--Suggested Correction:
"What was the word she used again?"

-Note:
Wrong word; "were" should be "was".
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Noire
/Suite/Sex/Impregnate



-Typo 1:
"The petite sheepgirl is not just prepared, but absolutely itching for you to fuck her brains out in a fit of animalistic mating, but what happen instead is that she sighs breathily upon you tracing the curves of her body on both sides."
--Suggested Correction:
"The petite sheepgirl is not just prepared, but absolutely itching for you to fuck her brains out in a fit of animalistic mating. What happens instead is that she sighs breathily upon you tracing the curves of her body on both sides."

-Typo 2:
"...nuzzling close rubbing her hot cheeks all over your lactating tits."
--Suggested Correction:
"...nuzzling close and rubbing her hot cheeks all over your lactating tits."

-Typo 3:
"...and vulnerable you're going tofuck her senseless."
--Suggested Correction:
"...and vulnerable you're going to fuck her senseless."

-Note:
"happen" should be "happens", and the entire sentence is a run-on sentence. Something like my suggested correction fixes that. (Typo 1)
It needs "and" between "close" and "rubbing". (Typo 2)
There needs to be a space between "to" and "fuck". (Typo 3)
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Noire
/Suite/Sex/Impregnate



-Typo:
"...no resistance to the her prospective role of being mother to her servants of her mistress' future children."
--Suggested Correction:
"...no resistance to her prospective role of being mother to her mistress' future servants."

-Note:
"the her" should be either "her" or "the", though I think the former is better. The end of the sentence is a mess; it looks like there were two lines of thought going on simultaneously. How I worded it in my suggested correction is what I think is closest to be the original intent.
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Harpy Acolytes, Grave of Saints, Ring of Fate sidequest (I call it so even though it doesn't have an entry in the codex)
/Diplomancy



-Typo:
" "Ask her something only Zhara's baby-mommy would know!" a third harpy says. "
--Suggested Correction:
" "Ask her something only Zhara's baby-mommy would know!" A third harpy says. "

-Note:
Shouldn't "a" be capitalised? In addition, Calise's dialogue at the bottom should italicised, and it's missing its end quotation mark.
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Succubi, Grave of Saints
/Scare Them



-Typo:
"Etheryn conjures a gust of chill wind..."
--Suggested Correction:
"Etheryn conjures a gust of chilly wind..."

-Note:
"chill" looks like it should be something like "chilly". (Typo 1)
In addition, there is a missing word or words in the double space between "to" and "and" at the top of the 'page' and again in the double space between "to" and "before" at the bottom of the page.
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Succubi, Grave of Saints
/Scare Them



-Typo:
"...trying to ignore the feeling her Calise's tight rear..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...trying to ignore the feeling of Calise's tight rear..."

-Note:
Wrong word; "her" should be "of".
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[MistressAzula]

Part 13

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Vacia, victory against her, sex
/Fuck Her



-Typo 1:
"...is positively divine. You grip the..."
--Suggested Correction:
"...is positively divine. You grip the..."

-Typo 2:
"...to the hilt and flooding both her holes."
--Suggested Correction:
"...to the hilt and flooding her hole."

-Note:
Double space between "divine" and "You". (Typo 1)
Typo 2 mistakenly refers to my character as having multiple cocks when she has only one. (Typo 2)
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General/Miscellaneous Errors:
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Marefolk Village, after Atani has given birth

How it looks when it happens:

What's at the top of the 'page':


When you arrive at the Marefolk Village, the scene notifying you about Atani having given birth is weird. The text of the scene follows the normal scenery descriptor without space or break, and the normal commands ([ChangeParty], [North], [South], [Inventory], [Wait]) are still present, with [Next] replacing [Waystone]. When it happens the 'page' is automatically scrolled to the bottom (as shown in the first screenshot). Troublingly, if you select any of the aforementioned normal commands still present, anything besides [Next], the scene doesn't proceed and goes away, seemingly as if it never happened.
Also of note, the scene only occurs at the entrance square/tile of the village. So if you come and leave through the Ways Between, you can potentially entirely miss it.
Unfortunately the screenshots doesn't show much.
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Cait, asking her to officiate Atani and your wedding

Scene:

After selecting [Next]:


The scene where you ask Cait to perform the wedding ritual for Atani and you. When you select [Next] to progress the scene, nothing happens except time progressing about an hour. You have to select [Next] again to actually progress. Using the arrows near the bottom right of the interface to look at previous 'pages', it doesn't count the initial [Next] as having progressed to another scene (which I guess makes sense since they are the same and the scroll bar doesn't even change position back to the top). It makes me wonder if there was suppose to be another 'page' of text that didn't get in by accident...
Unfortunately the screenshots don't show much.
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Ahmri and your wedding

Before:

After selecting [Next]:

Where the new text is added (after scrolling up to it):


The wedding scene of Ahmri and you. When you select [Next] to progress the scene, instead of going to a new 'page' of text, it just adds text after the end of the current 'page', and it throws you to the bottom of the 'page'. I also included a possible typo (outline in the third screenshot), but it may not be if the text added is suppose to be a new 'page'.
Typo: Where the new text is added into the scene, after selecting [Next], it is added to the previous last paragraph without a space. If it's not suppose to appear on a new 'page', it at least needs to have a break as a new paragraph.
Unfortunately the screenshots don't show much.
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