Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 1
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Etheryn, introductory scene when entering the Wayfort proper the first time
-Etheryn
-Etheryn
-Etheryn
-Etheryn, Winter City date
-Elthara, Wayfort
-Hethia, visiting her in the Winter City Palace of Ice after defeating Alissa, etc
-General, whenever King Dowager is mentioned (scenes involving or referencing Elyon or the Wyld Hunt quest)
-Elyon, in the Frostwood at the fjord bridge (Wyld Hunt)
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Etheryn, introductory scene when entering the Wayfort proper the first time
-Typo 1: ...sound breaking the everpresent silence...
-Suggested Fix: ...sound breaking the ever-present silence...
-Typo 2: ...Your perk your cat-like ear...
-Suggested Fix: ...You perk your cat-like ear...
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Etheryn
/Talk/Her People
-Typo: ...We also have larger hips less broad chests than men...
-Suggested Fix: ...We also have larger hips and less broad chests than men...
-Note: Specifically after you've raised her confidence and her portrait changes to the happier one.
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Etheryn
/Sex/FemDuoBJ
"
"Both of us? Pleasuring you together?" Etheryn blushes, averting her gaze."
"
(for some reason I can't get this specific quote again for a screenshot. it took me awhile the first time to get the quote, but this time I got nothing)
-Typo: ...averting her gaze."
-Suggested Fix: ...averting her gaze.
-Note: Unnecessary quotation at the end of the line. After reading Etheryn's wiki page [https://wiki.smutosaur.us/CoC2/Etheryn], I believe she has moderate or low-to-moderate Libido in my game from this quote. I think so because I usually see this scene as her saying something even more embarrassed.
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Etheryn
/Sex/FemDuoBJ
-Typo 1: ...pair of them side-by-side are too much...
-Suggested Fix: ...pair of them side-by-side is too much...
-Typo 2: Once you're between them and on your back, ...
-Note: Unfinished sentence 'Once you're between them and on your back,'.
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Etheryn, Winter City date
/Spend Time/Cathedral
-Note: Not a typo per se. The lines between the first and last paragraph in the quote aren't very clear. I'm confused about what is suppose to be happening. It could be written much more clearly I think, but it may just be me not understanding.
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Elthara, Wayfort
/"Talks"/Princess Carry/Rough Anal
-Typo: ...You wouldn't guess how you'd spent your night...
-Suggested Fix: ...They wouldn't guess how you'd spent your night...
-Note: From the context it sounds as if this line is referring to others noticing/not noticing. Also 'You wouldn't guess how you'd spent your night' doesn't make much sense out loud.
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Hethia, visiting her in the Winter City Palace of Ice after defeating Alissa, etc
-Typo: ...speaking in their naive tongue...
-Suggested Fix: ...speaking in their native tongue...
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General, whenever King Dowager is mentioned (scenes involving or referencing Elyon or the Wyld Hunt quest)
Example:
-Note: It seems strangely coincidental that almost every time 'King Dowager' appears in the text, it is all lowercase. At least a dozen times or more, all lower case 'king dowager' instead of 'King Dowager'. Is there a reason?
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Elyon, in the Frostwood at the fjord bridge (Wyld Hunt)
-Typo: ...Now that you've my side of the story...
-Suggested Fix: ...Now that you've heard my side of the story...
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Etheryn, introductory scene when entering the Wayfort proper the first time
-Etheryn
-Etheryn
-Etheryn
-Etheryn, Winter City date
-Elthara, Wayfort
-Hethia, visiting her in the Winter City Palace of Ice after defeating Alissa, etc
-General, whenever King Dowager is mentioned (scenes involving or referencing Elyon or the Wyld Hunt quest)
-Elyon, in the Frostwood at the fjord bridge (Wyld Hunt)
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Etheryn, introductory scene when entering the Wayfort proper the first time
-Typo 1: ...sound breaking the everpresent silence...
-Suggested Fix: ...sound breaking the ever-present silence...
-Typo 2: ...Your perk your cat-like ear...
-Suggested Fix: ...You perk your cat-like ear...
__________________________________________________________________
Etheryn
/Talk/Her People
-Typo: ...We also have larger hips less broad chests than men...
-Suggested Fix: ...We also have larger hips and less broad chests than men...
-Note: Specifically after you've raised her confidence and her portrait changes to the happier one.
__________________________________________________________________
Etheryn
/Sex/FemDuoBJ
"
"Both of us? Pleasuring you together?" Etheryn blushes, averting her gaze."
"
(for some reason I can't get this specific quote again for a screenshot. it took me awhile the first time to get the quote, but this time I got nothing)
-Typo: ...averting her gaze."
-Suggested Fix: ...averting her gaze.
-Note: Unnecessary quotation at the end of the line. After reading Etheryn's wiki page [https://wiki.smutosaur.us/CoC2/Etheryn], I believe she has moderate or low-to-moderate Libido in my game from this quote. I think so because I usually see this scene as her saying something even more embarrassed.
__________________________________________________________________
Etheryn
/Sex/FemDuoBJ
-Typo 1: ...pair of them side-by-side are too much...
-Suggested Fix: ...pair of them side-by-side is too much...
-Typo 2: Once you're between them and on your back, ...
-Note: Unfinished sentence 'Once you're between them and on your back,'.
__________________________________________________________________
Etheryn, Winter City date
/Spend Time/Cathedral
-Note: Not a typo per se. The lines between the first and last paragraph in the quote aren't very clear. I'm confused about what is suppose to be happening. It could be written much more clearly I think, but it may just be me not understanding.
__________________________________________________________________
Elthara, Wayfort
/"Talks"/Princess Carry/Rough Anal
-Typo: ...You wouldn't guess how you'd spent your night...
-Suggested Fix: ...They wouldn't guess how you'd spent your night...
-Note: From the context it sounds as if this line is referring to others noticing/not noticing. Also 'You wouldn't guess how you'd spent your night' doesn't make much sense out loud.
__________________________________________________________________
Hethia, visiting her in the Winter City Palace of Ice after defeating Alissa, etc
-Typo: ...speaking in their naive tongue...
-Suggested Fix: ...speaking in their native tongue...
__________________________________________________________________
General, whenever King Dowager is mentioned (scenes involving or referencing Elyon or the Wyld Hunt quest)
Example:
-Note: It seems strangely coincidental that almost every time 'King Dowager' appears in the text, it is all lowercase. At least a dozen times or more, all lower case 'king dowager' instead of 'King Dowager'. Is there a reason?
__________________________________________________________________
Elyon, in the Frostwood at the fjord bridge (Wyld Hunt)
-Typo: ...Now that you've my side of the story...
-Suggested Fix: ...Now that you've heard my side of the story...
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