Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 9
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Cait
-Cait
-Cait & Boomer, Boomer introductory scene when visiting Cait at the Frost Hound
-Lusamine
-June
-June
-Vari, encounter while she's pregnant
-Kitsune Patrol/Benefactor Hunters, victory against them
-Kinu, Astral Plane
-Kinu, Astral Plane (Educational Help)
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Cait
/Sex/Her Strapon/Please Her
-Typo: Her ghostly pillar of her strapon bobs in the air...
-Suggested Fix: The ghostly pillar of her strapon bobs in the air...
-Note: In addition, this paragraph is italicised and it shouldn't be.
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Cait
/Sex/Nursing Handjob
-Typo: ...Not that, you're complaining, of course...
-Suggested Fix: ...Not that you're complaining, of course...
-Note: After giving Cait Sweet Cream-infused Bovum Sherry to make her milky.
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Cait & Boomer, Boomer introductory scene when visiting Cait at the Frost Hound
-Typo: ...whenever her fingers concealed cock.
-Suggested Fix 1: ...whenever her fingers fondle his concealed cock.
-Suggested Fix 2: ...whenever she fingers his concealed cock.
-Suggested Fix 3: ...whenever her fingers find his concealed cock.
-Note: The last sentence is missing some words before 'concealed cock'. I took some jabs at it with the suggested fixes but it's more open-ended than most of the typos I've come across.
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Lusamine
/Sex/Facefuck
-Typo: ...Your smirk turns into a smirk.
-Suggested Fix: ...Your smirk turns into a grin.
-Note: Grin, smile, something of the such.
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June
/Message
-Typo: ...sitting in your lap between your legs and press your large breasts into his back...
-Suggested Fix: ...sitting in your lap between your legs with your large breasts pressing into his back...
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June
Message/Thorough/Ride Him
-Typo 1: cum spurts from the...
-Suggested Fix: Cum spurts from the...
-Typo 2: ...from the end of your cocks and...
-Suggested Fix: ...from the end of your cock and...
-Note: My character has only one penis, the scene describes as if she had more than one.
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Vari, encounter while she's pregnant
/Go With Vari
-Note: This paragraph is unnecessarily italicised.
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Kitsune Patrol/Benefactor Hunters, victory against them
No/Fight!/Victory/Yes/Ear Molest
-Typo: ...if she's so she should pipe down and not make trouble...
-Suggested Fix: ...if she's so hungry she should pipe down and not make trouble...
-Note: Involves Kitsune Trickster.
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Kinu, Astral Plane
/Play/Board Game
-Typo: ...but it's not done to question things too deeply around here...
-Note: Not sure if it is a typo per se, but it does not read well. The wording doesn't seem right.
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Kinu, Astral Plane (Educational Help)
-Typo: ...basics and discard and preconceptions...
-Suggested Fix: ...basics and discard any preconceptions...
-Note: Player character is black mage class in the scene.
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Cait
-Cait
-Cait & Boomer, Boomer introductory scene when visiting Cait at the Frost Hound
-Lusamine
-June
-June
-Vari, encounter while she's pregnant
-Kitsune Patrol/Benefactor Hunters, victory against them
-Kinu, Astral Plane
-Kinu, Astral Plane (Educational Help)
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Cait
/Sex/Her Strapon/Please Her
-Typo: Her ghostly pillar of her strapon bobs in the air...
-Suggested Fix: The ghostly pillar of her strapon bobs in the air...
-Note: In addition, this paragraph is italicised and it shouldn't be.
__________________________________________________________________
Cait
/Sex/Nursing Handjob
-Typo: ...Not that, you're complaining, of course...
-Suggested Fix: ...Not that you're complaining, of course...
-Note: After giving Cait Sweet Cream-infused Bovum Sherry to make her milky.
__________________________________________________________________
Cait & Boomer, Boomer introductory scene when visiting Cait at the Frost Hound
-Typo: ...whenever her fingers concealed cock.
-Suggested Fix 1: ...whenever her fingers fondle his concealed cock.
-Suggested Fix 2: ...whenever she fingers his concealed cock.
-Suggested Fix 3: ...whenever her fingers find his concealed cock.
-Note: The last sentence is missing some words before 'concealed cock'. I took some jabs at it with the suggested fixes but it's more open-ended than most of the typos I've come across.
__________________________________________________________________
Lusamine
/Sex/Facefuck
-Typo: ...Your smirk turns into a smirk.
-Suggested Fix: ...Your smirk turns into a grin.
-Note: Grin, smile, something of the such.
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June
/Message
-Typo: ...sitting in your lap between your legs and press your large breasts into his back...
-Suggested Fix: ...sitting in your lap between your legs with your large breasts pressing into his back...
__________________________________________________________________
June
Message/Thorough/Ride Him
-Typo 1: cum spurts from the...
-Suggested Fix: Cum spurts from the...
-Typo 2: ...from the end of your cocks and...
-Suggested Fix: ...from the end of your cock and...
-Note: My character has only one penis, the scene describes as if she had more than one.
__________________________________________________________________
Vari, encounter while she's pregnant
/Go With Vari
-Note: This paragraph is unnecessarily italicised.
__________________________________________________________________
Kitsune Patrol/Benefactor Hunters, victory against them
No/Fight!/Victory/Yes/Ear Molest
-Typo: ...if she's so she should pipe down and not make trouble...
-Suggested Fix: ...if she's so hungry she should pipe down and not make trouble...
-Note: Involves Kitsune Trickster.
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Kinu, Astral Plane
/Play/Board Game
-Typo: ...but it's not done to question things too deeply around here...
-Note: Not sure if it is a typo per se, but it does not read well. The wording doesn't seem right.
__________________________________________________________________
Kinu, Astral Plane (Educational Help)
-Typo: ...basics and discard and preconceptions...
-Suggested Fix: ...basics and discard any preconceptions...
-Note: Player character is black mage class in the scene.
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