Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 8
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
-Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
-Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
-Brienne, demon dream
-Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
-Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
-Clementine
-Clementine
-Clementine
-Cait, during buttplug masturbation option
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Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
/Fuck Both
-Typo: ...staring at the tip of your pricks.
-Suggested Fix: ...staring at the tip of your prick.
-Note: My character only has one penis; this erroneously describes her possessing multiple.
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Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
/Fuck Both
-Typo: ...whenever wanting you to fuck her.
-Suggested Fix: ...whenever she's wanting you to fuck her.
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Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
/Fuck Both
-Typo 1: ...and your lust to multiply...
-Suggested Fix: ...and your lust multiply...
-Typo 2: ...lupine cunt into aheated frenzy...
-Suggested Fix: ...lupine cunt into a heated frenzy...
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Brienne, demon dream
/Body Love
-Typo: ...Before you squishes you into the bed...
-Suggested Fix: ...Before she squishes you into the bed...
-Note: Tall player character.
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Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
/Fuck/Fuck Asshole
-Typo: ...Your other hand dals a spank...
-Suggested Fix 1: ...Your other hand deals a spank...
-Suggested Fix 2: ...Your other hand doles out a spank...
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Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
/Fuck/Fuck Asshole
-Typo: ...It'd be, like, a total shame if she got snatched up, or hurt or something... There're a lot of meanie-pantses out there!. ...
-Note: Bimbo speech shouldn't be here; my character doesn't have the perk/isn't a bimbo. Also there is unnecessary punctuation directly at the end of the bimbo speech.
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Clementine
-Note: When in Clementine's interaction interface, the tooltip for [Appearance] reads like it should be for [Talk].
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Clementine
/Talk/Herself
-Typo: ...but most of them just saw me as a wool factory than a real apprentice...
-Suggested Fix 1: ...but most of them just saw me as a wool factory rather than a real apprentice...
-Suggested Fix 2: ...but most of them just saw me as more of a wool factory than a real apprentice...
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Clementine
/Talk/Chat
-Typo: ‘D-don’t tell...
-Suggested Fix: "D-don’t tell...
-Note: The apostrophe mark ['] should be a quotation mark ["]. Also this line should be italicised.
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Cait, during buttplug masturbation option
/Masturbate/Buttplug
-Typo: ...do just act natural...
-Suggested Fix: ...do just act natural...
-Note: Double space between 'do' and 'just'.
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
-Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
-Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
-Brienne, demon dream
-Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
-Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
-Clementine
-Clementine
-Clementine
-Cait, during buttplug masturbation option
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Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
/Fuck Both
-Typo: ...staring at the tip of your pricks.
-Suggested Fix: ...staring at the tip of your prick.
-Note: My character only has one penis; this erroneously describes her possessing multiple.
__________________________________________________________________
Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
/Fuck Both
-Typo: ...whenever wanting you to fuck her.
-Suggested Fix: ...whenever she's wanting you to fuck her.
__________________________________________________________________
Gwyn & Rune, nursery scene
/Fuck Both
-Typo 1: ...and your lust to multiply...
-Suggested Fix: ...and your lust multiply...
-Typo 2: ...lupine cunt into aheated frenzy...
-Suggested Fix: ...lupine cunt into a heated frenzy...
__________________________________________________________________
Brienne, demon dream
/Body Love
-Typo: ...Before you squishes you into the bed...
-Suggested Fix: ...Before she squishes you into the bed...
-Note: Tall player character.
__________________________________________________________________
Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
/Fuck/Fuck Asshole
-Typo: ...Your other hand dals a spank...
-Suggested Fix 1: ...Your other hand deals a spank...
-Suggested Fix 2: ...Your other hand doles out a spank...
__________________________________________________________________
Sariel (hostile encounter), victory against her
/Fuck/Fuck Asshole
-Typo: ...It'd be, like, a total shame if she got snatched up, or hurt or something... There're a lot of meanie-pantses out there!. ...
-Note: Bimbo speech shouldn't be here; my character doesn't have the perk/isn't a bimbo. Also there is unnecessary punctuation directly at the end of the bimbo speech.
__________________________________________________________________
Clementine
-Note: When in Clementine's interaction interface, the tooltip for [Appearance] reads like it should be for [Talk].
__________________________________________________________________
Clementine
/Talk/Herself
-Typo: ...but most of them just saw me as a wool factory than a real apprentice...
-Suggested Fix 1: ...but most of them just saw me as a wool factory rather than a real apprentice...
-Suggested Fix 2: ...but most of them just saw me as more of a wool factory than a real apprentice...
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Clementine
/Talk/Chat
-Typo: ‘D-don’t tell...
-Suggested Fix: "D-don’t tell...
-Note: The apostrophe mark ['] should be a quotation mark ["]. Also this line should be italicised.
__________________________________________________________________
Cait, during buttplug masturbation option
/Masturbate/Buttplug
-Typo: ...do just act natural...
-Suggested Fix: ...do just act natural...
-Note: Double space between 'do' and 'just'.
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