Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 6
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
-Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
-Cait, back in Hawkethorne after defeating Centaurs and the half-Gnoll at the caravansary (Cat Call)
-Cait, sex scene after finding her father and defeating centaurs and Half-Gnoll (Cat Call)
-Barnaphous
-Barnaphous
-Cait & Barnaphous, right before starting the survey (Divine Pussy)
-Cait & Barnaphous, survey right before fight (Divine Pussy)
-Cait & Barnaphous, post survey fight (Divine Pussy)
-Working clients at the Mallachite Temple
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Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
/[Offer Womb/Knock Up]/Threeway
-Note: If you choose to get impregnated or impregnate Evergreen, when you take Cait along for a threesome, the above quote happens. It plays this regardless of whether you bring Cait along for a threesome. This is erroneous because Cait was with you and Evergreen. It should say something to the extent of Cait coming down with you and Evergreen to make sense with the prior content. It only makes sense if you chose not to bring Cait along for the sex scene.
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Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
/[Offer Womb/Knock Up]/[Threeway/No way]
-Typo: ...camp in an abandoned caravanserai...
-Suggested Fix: ...camp in an abandoned caravansary...
-Note 1: Shouldn't it be caravansary, not caravanserai? Unless this is an older, archaic form or something else purposely used or is suppose to be a setting-specific term? It's listed again in the Cat Call quest description, at its site in Harvest Valley, in the tooltip for [Investigate] at the site during the quest, and at least a few times throughout the rest of the quest.
-Note 2: Evergreen mentions not to forget the Waystone even if you have already been using it or it's not your first visit. I believe this is intended to play with your first visit, but even if you have Cait with you the first time, Cait won't bring up her father if you don't leave immediately and instead peruse and make use of Evergreen's services on your first visit.
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Cait, back in Hawkethorne after defeating Centaurs and the half-Gnoll at the caravansary (Cat Call)
-Typo: ...Cait takes your head and leads you back to her favorite table...
-Suggested Fix: ...Cait takes your hand and leads you back to her favorite table...
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Cait, sex scene after finding her father and defeating centaurs and Half-Gnoll (Cat Call)
/Sex/Deflower Ass
-Typo: ...through your cockand erupts...
-Suggested Fix: ...through your cock and erupts...
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Barnaphous
Cait/Barney/About Calla
-Typo: ...Accord to Garth...
-Suggested Fix: ...According to Garth...
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Barnaphous
Cait/Barney/Randa
-Typo 1: ...about you and Nadira?
-Suggested Fix: ...about him and Nadira?
-Typo 2: ...'Tis a quite a blessing...
-Suggested Fix: ...'Tis quite a blessing...
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Cait & Barnaphous, right before starting the survey (Divine Pussy)
/Barney/Survey
-Typo 1: ...Do you not watch to fetch...
-Suggested Fix: ...Do you not want to fetch...
-Typo 2: ...keeps pace with Heart, Cait, and Etheryn as you...
-Suggested Fix: ...keeps pace with you, Cait, and Etheryn as you...
-Note: For some reason your character is referred to in the third person, which isn't consistent with how it's usually worded.
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Cait & Barnaphous, survey right before fight (Divine Pussy)
/Barney/Survey/Ready
-Typo: ...Heart, Cait, and Etheryn step up in front...
-Suggested Fix: ...you, Cait, and Etheryn step up in front...
-Note: Again, for some reason your character is referred to in the third person here.
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Cait & Barnaphous, post survey fight (Divine Pussy)
/Barney/Survey
-Typo: ...Heart, Cait, and Etheryn desperately hold the line...
-Suggested Fix: ...you, Cait, and Etheryn desperately hold the line...
-Note: Again, for some reason your character is referred to in the third person here.
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Working clients at the Mallachite Temple
Salwah/Work Clients/Work/Yes/Oil Message/Cock
-Typo: ...and you animal brain responds...
-Suggested Fix: ...and your animal brain responds...
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
-Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
-Cait, back in Hawkethorne after defeating Centaurs and the half-Gnoll at the caravansary (Cat Call)
-Cait, sex scene after finding her father and defeating centaurs and Half-Gnoll (Cat Call)
-Barnaphous
-Barnaphous
-Cait & Barnaphous, right before starting the survey (Divine Pussy)
-Cait & Barnaphous, survey right before fight (Divine Pussy)
-Cait & Barnaphous, post survey fight (Divine Pussy)
-Working clients at the Mallachite Temple
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Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
/[Offer Womb/Knock Up]/Threeway
-Note: If you choose to get impregnated or impregnate Evergreen, when you take Cait along for a threesome, the above quote happens. It plays this regardless of whether you bring Cait along for a threesome. This is erroneous because Cait was with you and Evergreen. It should say something to the extent of Cait coming down with you and Evergreen to make sense with the prior content. It only makes sense if you chose not to bring Cait along for the sex scene.
__________________________________________________________________
Oxana Evergreen, post-sex scene after asking for Cait's father's location and providing payment (Cat Call)
/[Offer Womb/Knock Up]/[Threeway/No way]
-Typo: ...camp in an abandoned caravanserai...
-Suggested Fix: ...camp in an abandoned caravansary...
-Note 1: Shouldn't it be caravansary, not caravanserai? Unless this is an older, archaic form or something else purposely used or is suppose to be a setting-specific term? It's listed again in the Cat Call quest description, at its site in Harvest Valley, in the tooltip for [Investigate] at the site during the quest, and at least a few times throughout the rest of the quest.
-Note 2: Evergreen mentions not to forget the Waystone even if you have already been using it or it's not your first visit. I believe this is intended to play with your first visit, but even if you have Cait with you the first time, Cait won't bring up her father if you don't leave immediately and instead peruse and make use of Evergreen's services on your first visit.
__________________________________________________________________
Cait, back in Hawkethorne after defeating Centaurs and the half-Gnoll at the caravansary (Cat Call)
-Typo: ...Cait takes your head and leads you back to her favorite table...
-Suggested Fix: ...Cait takes your hand and leads you back to her favorite table...
__________________________________________________________________
Cait, sex scene after finding her father and defeating centaurs and Half-Gnoll (Cat Call)
/Sex/Deflower Ass
-Typo: ...through your cockand erupts...
-Suggested Fix: ...through your cock and erupts...
__________________________________________________________________
Barnaphous
Cait/Barney/About Calla
-Typo: ...Accord to Garth...
-Suggested Fix: ...According to Garth...
__________________________________________________________________
Barnaphous
Cait/Barney/Randa
-Typo 1: ...about you and Nadira?
-Suggested Fix: ...about him and Nadira?
-Typo 2: ...'Tis a quite a blessing...
-Suggested Fix: ...'Tis quite a blessing...
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Cait & Barnaphous, right before starting the survey (Divine Pussy)
/Barney/Survey
-Typo 1: ...Do you not watch to fetch...
-Suggested Fix: ...Do you not want to fetch...
-Typo 2: ...keeps pace with Heart, Cait, and Etheryn as you...
-Suggested Fix: ...keeps pace with you, Cait, and Etheryn as you...
-Note: For some reason your character is referred to in the third person, which isn't consistent with how it's usually worded.
__________________________________________________________________
Cait & Barnaphous, survey right before fight (Divine Pussy)
/Barney/Survey/Ready
-Typo: ...Heart, Cait, and Etheryn step up in front...
-Suggested Fix: ...you, Cait, and Etheryn step up in front...
-Note: Again, for some reason your character is referred to in the third person here.
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Cait & Barnaphous, post survey fight (Divine Pussy)
/Barney/Survey
-Typo: ...Heart, Cait, and Etheryn desperately hold the line...
-Suggested Fix: ...you, Cait, and Etheryn desperately hold the line...
-Note: Again, for some reason your character is referred to in the third person here.
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Working clients at the Mallachite Temple
Salwah/Work Clients/Work/Yes/Oil Message/Cock
-Typo: ...and you animal brain responds...
-Suggested Fix: ...and your animal brain responds...
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