Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 4
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
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If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
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-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Undermountain, a few squares/tiles north into the green from the purple, not far from Khor'minos Outskirts entrance
-Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
-Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
-Zhara (Harpy Wingleader), introductory scene
-Lycanthorn transformative effect (increase tone)
-Wyvern Venom item use from inventory
-Manticore Girl, victory against her
-Manticore Girl, defeat against her (or Give Up), cunnilingus defeat sex
-Cat Harem, first meeting (Missing Meows)
-Cat Harem, returning with equipment (Missing Meows)
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Undermountain, several squares/tiles south of the Khor'minos Outskirts entrance
-Typo: ...He nods...
-Suggested Fix: ...She nods...
-Note: I have Brienne in my game, who is referred to erroneously as 'He' here.
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Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
/Take Her/Fuck Her
-Typo 1: ...Her pussyclenches around your shaft...
-Suggested Fix: ...Her pussy clenches around your shaft...
-Typo 2: ...her holesqueezes around you...
-Suggested Fix: ...her hole squeezes around you...
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Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
/Take Her/Fuck Her/Flip Kas
-Typo 1: ...beneath her broodmarish hips...
-Suggested Fix: ...beneath her broodmare-ish hips...
-Typo 2: ...Her pussyclenches hard around...
-Suggested Fix: ...Her pussy clenches hard around...
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Zhara (Harpy Wingleader), introductory scene
-Typo 1: ...that those aren't harpy feathers...
-Suggested Fix: ...that those are harpy feathers...
-Note: This (the suggested fix) seems to be the intended reading, as it doesn't make as much sense otherwise.
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Lycanthorn transformative effect (increase tone)
-Typo: ...supercharged! you stretch yourself...
-Suggested Fix: ...supercharged! You stretch yourself...
-Note: Capitalisation.
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Wyvern Venom item use from inventory
-Typo: ...decided to sample to heady venom...
-Suggested Fix: ...decided to sample the heady venom...
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Manticore Girl, victory against her
/Venom Rut
-Typo 1: ...checks on your wellbeing, scampering...
-Suggested Fix: ...checks on your well-being, scampering...
-Typo 2: ...away when shesee the manticore...
-Suggested Fix: ...away when she sees the manticore...
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Manticore Girl, defeat against her (or Give Up), cunnilingus defeat sex
-Note: Dialogue should be italicised. Also unnecessary period at the end after the end quotation. I think you need to have lost to the Manticore at least a few times to get this scene.
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Cat Harem, first meeting (Missing Meows)
/Approach
-Typo: ...They don't see to care much that...
-Suggested Fix: ..They don't seem to care much that...
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Cat Harem, returning with equipment (Missing Meows)
-Typo: ...letting two of the kitten help her...
-Suggested Fix: ...letting two of the kittens help her...
-Note: With Cait in party.
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Undermountain, a few squares/tiles north into the green from the purple, not far from Khor'minos Outskirts entrance
-Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
-Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
-Zhara (Harpy Wingleader), introductory scene
-Lycanthorn transformative effect (increase tone)
-Wyvern Venom item use from inventory
-Manticore Girl, victory against her
-Manticore Girl, defeat against her (or Give Up), cunnilingus defeat sex
-Cat Harem, first meeting (Missing Meows)
-Cat Harem, returning with equipment (Missing Meows)
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Undermountain, several squares/tiles south of the Khor'minos Outskirts entrance
-Typo: ...He nods...
-Suggested Fix: ...She nods...
-Note: I have Brienne in my game, who is referred to erroneously as 'He' here.
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Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
/Take Her/Fuck Her
-Typo 1: ...Her pussyclenches around your shaft...
-Suggested Fix: ...Her pussy clenches around your shaft...
-Typo 2: ...her holesqueezes around you...
-Suggested Fix: ...her hole squeezes around you...
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Kasyrra, when first entering Frostwood, victory against Imp Swarm
/Take Her/Fuck Her/Flip Kas
-Typo 1: ...beneath her broodmarish hips...
-Suggested Fix: ...beneath her broodmare-ish hips...
-Typo 2: ...Her pussyclenches hard around...
-Suggested Fix: ...Her pussy clenches hard around...
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Zhara (Harpy Wingleader), introductory scene
-Typo 1: ...that those aren't harpy feathers...
-Suggested Fix: ...that those are harpy feathers...
-Note: This (the suggested fix) seems to be the intended reading, as it doesn't make as much sense otherwise.
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Lycanthorn transformative effect (increase tone)
-Typo: ...supercharged! you stretch yourself...
-Suggested Fix: ...supercharged! You stretch yourself...
-Note: Capitalisation.
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Wyvern Venom item use from inventory
-Typo: ...decided to sample to heady venom...
-Suggested Fix: ...decided to sample the heady venom...
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Manticore Girl, victory against her
/Venom Rut
-Typo 1: ...checks on your wellbeing, scampering...
-Suggested Fix: ...checks on your well-being, scampering...
-Typo 2: ...away when shesee the manticore...
-Suggested Fix: ...away when she sees the manticore...
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Manticore Girl, defeat against her (or Give Up), cunnilingus defeat sex
-Note: Dialogue should be italicised. Also unnecessary period at the end after the end quotation. I think you need to have lost to the Manticore at least a few times to get this scene.
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Cat Harem, first meeting (Missing Meows)
/Approach
-Typo: ...They don't see to care much that...
-Suggested Fix: ..They don't seem to care much that...
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Cat Harem, returning with equipment (Missing Meows)
-Typo: ...letting two of the kitten help her...
-Suggested Fix: ...letting two of the kittens help her...
-Note: With Cait in party.
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