Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 3
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Ship Interior, suspicious cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, liqueur cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, painting in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Gweyr, after first battle with cultists in jotun castle (Winter Wolf)
-Gweyr, after battle with Lureling, in the Ways Between (Winter Wolf)
-Return to Gweyr's hideaway, after defeating the Lureling (Winter Wolf)
-Garret & Garth, after telling Garret about Gweyr (Winter Wolf)
-Garret & Gweyr, in the Glacial Rift (Winter Wolf)
-Garret & Gweyr, in Hawkethorne (Winter Wolf)
-Gweyr, Hawkethorne
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Ship Interior, suspicious cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...been for naught.However, there's...
-Suggested Fix: ...been for naught. However, there's...
-Note: Need for a space between 'naught' and 'However'.
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Ship Interior, liqueur cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...as if to say, "really?"Yes, really...
-Suggested Fix: ...as if to say, "really?" Yes, really...
-Note: Need for a space between 'really' and 'Yes'.
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Ship Interior, painting in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Brint says as she studies the...
-Suggested Fix: ...Brienne says as she studies the...
-Note: I have Brienne in my game, who is referred to erroneously as 'Brint' here.
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Gweyr, after first battle with cultists in jotun castle (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...your blood, decide to...
-Suggested Fix: ...your blood, you decide to...
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Gweyr, after battle with Lureling, in the Ways Between (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: Oy, point taken...
-Suggested Fix: Oi, point taken...
-Note: 'Oi' not 'Oy'. 'Oy' means something else, something in Yiddish if I remember correctly. 'Oi' is Cornish and is the one used to mean 'hey'.
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Return to Gweyr's hideaway, after defeating the Lureling (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Your hand just to happens to find its way...
-Suggested Fix: ...Your hand just so happens to find its way...
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Garret & Garth, after telling Garret about Gweyr (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Garret jabs his son with a finger...
-Suggested Fix: ...Garth jabs his son with a finger...
-Note: Well this is an awkward error, for such an important conversation.
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Garret & Gweyr, in the Glacial Rift (Winter Wolf)
-Typo 1: ...as a doggy dildo..."
-Suggested Fix: ...as a doggy dildo...
-Typo 2: ...if you don't go back and try to begin with, then that 'might' turns into a 'will.'
-Suggested Fix: ...if you don't go back and try to begin with, then that 'might' turns into a 'won't.'
-Note: Shouldn't it be 'Won't', not 'Will'? Going with the first half of the sentence, it doesn't make sense for it to be 'Will'.
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Garret & Gweyr, in Hawkethorne (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...going to home to my kids...
-Suggested Fix: ...going home to my kids...
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Gweyr, Hawkethorne
/Chat/Garret
-Typo: ...sometimes what you need to bullshit to cultivate...
-Suggested Fix 1: ...sometimes what you need is to bullshit to cultivate...
-Suggested Fix 2: ...sometimes you need to bullshit to cultivate...
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Ship Interior, suspicious cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, liqueur cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, painting in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Gweyr, after first battle with cultists in jotun castle (Winter Wolf)
-Gweyr, after battle with Lureling, in the Ways Between (Winter Wolf)
-Return to Gweyr's hideaway, after defeating the Lureling (Winter Wolf)
-Garret & Garth, after telling Garret about Gweyr (Winter Wolf)
-Garret & Gweyr, in the Glacial Rift (Winter Wolf)
-Garret & Gweyr, in Hawkethorne (Winter Wolf)
-Gweyr, Hawkethorne
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Ship Interior, suspicious cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...been for naught.However, there's...
-Suggested Fix: ...been for naught. However, there's...
-Note: Need for a space between 'naught' and 'However'.
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Ship Interior, liqueur cabinet in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...as if to say, "really?"Yes, really...
-Suggested Fix: ...as if to say, "really?" Yes, really...
-Note: Need for a space between 'really' and 'Yes'.
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Ship Interior, painting in captain's chambers (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Brint says as she studies the...
-Suggested Fix: ...Brienne says as she studies the...
-Note: I have Brienne in my game, who is referred to erroneously as 'Brint' here.
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Gweyr, after first battle with cultists in jotun castle (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...your blood, decide to...
-Suggested Fix: ...your blood, you decide to...
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Gweyr, after battle with Lureling, in the Ways Between (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: Oy, point taken...
-Suggested Fix: Oi, point taken...
-Note: 'Oi' not 'Oy'. 'Oy' means something else, something in Yiddish if I remember correctly. 'Oi' is Cornish and is the one used to mean 'hey'.
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Return to Gweyr's hideaway, after defeating the Lureling (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Your hand just to happens to find its way...
-Suggested Fix: ...Your hand just so happens to find its way...
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Garret & Garth, after telling Garret about Gweyr (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Garret jabs his son with a finger...
-Suggested Fix: ...Garth jabs his son with a finger...
-Note: Well this is an awkward error, for such an important conversation.
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Garret & Gweyr, in the Glacial Rift (Winter Wolf)
-Typo 1: ...as a doggy dildo..."
-Suggested Fix: ...as a doggy dildo...
-Typo 2: ...if you don't go back and try to begin with, then that 'might' turns into a 'will.'
-Suggested Fix: ...if you don't go back and try to begin with, then that 'might' turns into a 'won't.'
-Note: Shouldn't it be 'Won't', not 'Will'? Going with the first half of the sentence, it doesn't make sense for it to be 'Will'.
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Garret & Gweyr, in Hawkethorne (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...going to home to my kids...
-Suggested Fix: ...going home to my kids...
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Gweyr, Hawkethorne
/Chat/Garret
-Typo: ...sometimes what you need to bullshit to cultivate...
-Suggested Fix 1: ...sometimes what you need is to bullshit to cultivate...
-Suggested Fix 2: ...sometimes you need to bullshit to cultivate...
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