Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 2
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
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-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Gweyr, Glacial Rift
-Gweyr, Glacial Rift
-Gweyr, Glacial Rift
-River
-Gweyr Paralogue, East Gate scene with Sanders (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, inspecting orb engine (Winter Wolf)
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Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Typo: ...rift worse with their corruption...
-Suggested Fix: ...rift worse with their corruption...
-Note: Double space between 'worse' and 'with'.
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Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Note: The two paragraphs need spacing between them. With Etheryn in party.
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Gweyr, Glacial Rift
/Chat/Herself
-Typo 1: ...from taleer would-be lords... (two other misspellings as noted in Note)
-Suggested Fix: ...from taeleer would-be lords...
-Typo 2: ...but sellwords don't find work...
-Suggested Fix: ...but sellswords don't find work...
-Note: The first two paragraphs lack end quotations. Also the mention of taeleer in each paragraph is misspelled as 'taleer'.
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Gweyr, Glacial Rift
/Chat/Kids
-Typo: ...that he wanted me to remember me at his prime...
-Suggested Fix: ...that he wanted me to remember him at his prime...
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Gweyr, Glacial Rift
/Chat/Kids
-Typo: ...that's why sought to be...
-Suggested Fix: ...that's why she sought to be...
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River
/Chat/Gweyr
-Typo: ...courage to face her kids.
-Suggested Fix: ...courage to face her kids."
-Note: The second to last paragraph doesn't have an end quotation.
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Gweyr Paralogue, East Gate scene with Sanders (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: short sword at the ready...
-Suggested Fix: Short sword at the ready...
-Note: Capitalisation.
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Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Typo 1: ...with the ships's crew quarters...
-Suggested Fix: ...with the ship's crew quarters...
-Typo 2: ...clearly no in use anytime...
-Suggested Fix: ...clearly not in use anytime...
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Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Shall we begin?"That...
-Suggested Fix: ...Shall we begin?" That...
-Note: '"Oh, please. Shall we begin?"' should be italicised. There needs to be a space between 'Begin' and 'Without' or 'That' if Etheryn's in the party.
(ah yes, the good old 'beat them over the head with a scroll' exercise. that'll knock them out. sometimes your weapon of choice makes the scenes very strange or silly sounding, but it's honestly a minor complaint if anything; I'm mostly just joking)
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Ship Interior, inspecting orb engine (Winter Wolf)
-Note: Final sentence in paragraph has an abrupt break in it to the next line, after 'you turn to'.
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Gweyr, Glacial Rift
-Gweyr, Glacial Rift
-Gweyr, Glacial Rift
-River
-Gweyr Paralogue, East Gate scene with Sanders (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Ship Interior, inspecting orb engine (Winter Wolf)
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Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Typo: ...rift worse with their corruption...
-Suggested Fix: ...rift worse with their corruption...
-Note: Double space between 'worse' and 'with'.
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Selkies, pre-battle first encounter
-Note: The two paragraphs need spacing between them. With Etheryn in party.
__________________________________________________________________
Gweyr, Glacial Rift
/Chat/Herself
-Typo 1: ...from taleer would-be lords... (two other misspellings as noted in Note)
-Suggested Fix: ...from taeleer would-be lords...
-Typo 2: ...but sellwords don't find work...
-Suggested Fix: ...but sellswords don't find work...
-Note: The first two paragraphs lack end quotations. Also the mention of taeleer in each paragraph is misspelled as 'taleer'.
__________________________________________________________________
Gweyr, Glacial Rift
/Chat/Kids
-Typo: ...that he wanted me to remember me at his prime...
-Suggested Fix: ...that he wanted me to remember him at his prime...
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Gweyr, Glacial Rift
/Chat/Kids
-Typo: ...that's why sought to be...
-Suggested Fix: ...that's why she sought to be...
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River
/Chat/Gweyr
-Typo: ...courage to face her kids.
-Suggested Fix: ...courage to face her kids."
-Note: The second to last paragraph doesn't have an end quotation.
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Gweyr Paralogue, East Gate scene with Sanders (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: short sword at the ready...
-Suggested Fix: Short sword at the ready...
-Note: Capitalisation.
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Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Typo 1: ...with the ships's crew quarters...
-Suggested Fix: ...with the ship's crew quarters...
-Typo 2: ...clearly no in use anytime...
-Suggested Fix: ...clearly not in use anytime...
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Ship Interior, after infiltrating (Winter Wolf)
-Typo: ...Shall we begin?"That...
-Suggested Fix: ...Shall we begin?" That...
-Note: '"Oh, please. Shall we begin?"' should be italicised. There needs to be a space between 'Begin' and 'Without' or 'That' if Etheryn's in the party.
(ah yes, the good old 'beat them over the head with a scroll' exercise. that'll knock them out. sometimes your weapon of choice makes the scenes very strange or silly sounding, but it's honestly a minor complaint if anything; I'm mostly just joking)
__________________________________________________________________
Ship Interior, inspecting orb engine (Winter Wolf)
-Note: Final sentence in paragraph has an abrupt break in it to the next line, after 'you turn to'.
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