Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 18 (Final)
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Lusina (Moth Girl), victory against her
-Lusina (Moth Girl), scene when she says she'll stop being a highway agent
-Lusina, Marefolk Village
-The scene where Atugia takes you to Carmen to be asked to accept the title of Champion of Hawkethorne
-Slime Siblings, second encounter or later
-Lieutenant Jen, victory against her
-Valencia
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Lusina (Moth Girl), victory against her
/Send Off
-Typo: you and your companions...
-Suggested Fix: You and your companions...
-Note: Capitalisation. Also to note, this is the second time choosing [Send Off].
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Lusina (Moth Girl), scene when she says she'll stop being a highway agent
-Typo: ...purple-winged moth girl descends...
-Suggested Fix: ...pink-winged moth girl descends...
-Note: Her other descriptions, along with her art, say or display pink rather than purple.
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Lusina, Marefolk Village
/Sex/Her Tits
-Typo: ...your cockcomes to rest...
-Suggested Fix: ...your cock comes to rest...
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The scene where Atugia takes you to Carmen to be asked to accept the title of Champion of Hawkethorne
-Typo: ...overlooks the castle courtyard where you and the freckled knight first sparred...
-Note: Since the change where Atugia comes down to fight you in the village if you don't go up to the castle to find her, this line no longer makes sense for when that happens near the start of the game. (such as for my character in this scene who fought Atugia just outside the Frost Hound)
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Slime Siblings, second encounter or later
-Typo: "There he is...
-Suggested Fix: "There she is...
-Note: My character is feminine; erroneously referred to as masculine.
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Lieutenant Jen, victory against her
/Sex/Tit Fun
-Typo: ...might just be worth it to make this sort...
-Suggested Fix: ...might just be worth it to make this sort...
-Note: Some strange spacing between 'it' and 'to'.
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Valencia
/Talk/Chat
-Typo: ...Saltwater fish always tastes better than freshwater ones...
-Suggested Fix: ...Saltwater fish always taste better than freshwater ones...
-Note: Since it seems that it's 'fish' plural, it should be 'taste' rather than 'tastes'.
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Lusina (Moth Girl), victory against her
-Lusina (Moth Girl), scene when she says she'll stop being a highway agent
-Lusina, Marefolk Village
-The scene where Atugia takes you to Carmen to be asked to accept the title of Champion of Hawkethorne
-Slime Siblings, second encounter or later
-Lieutenant Jen, victory against her
-Valencia
__________________________________________________________________
Lusina (Moth Girl), victory against her
/Send Off
-Typo: you and your companions...
-Suggested Fix: You and your companions...
-Note: Capitalisation. Also to note, this is the second time choosing [Send Off].
__________________________________________________________________
Lusina (Moth Girl), scene when she says she'll stop being a highway agent
-Typo: ...purple-winged moth girl descends...
-Suggested Fix: ...pink-winged moth girl descends...
-Note: Her other descriptions, along with her art, say or display pink rather than purple.
__________________________________________________________________
Lusina, Marefolk Village
/Sex/Her Tits
-Typo: ...your cockcomes to rest...
-Suggested Fix: ...your cock comes to rest...
__________________________________________________________________
The scene where Atugia takes you to Carmen to be asked to accept the title of Champion of Hawkethorne
-Typo: ...overlooks the castle courtyard where you and the freckled knight first sparred...
-Note: Since the change where Atugia comes down to fight you in the village if you don't go up to the castle to find her, this line no longer makes sense for when that happens near the start of the game. (such as for my character in this scene who fought Atugia just outside the Frost Hound)
__________________________________________________________________
Slime Siblings, second encounter or later
-Typo: "There he is...
-Suggested Fix: "There she is...
-Note: My character is feminine; erroneously referred to as masculine.
__________________________________________________________________
Lieutenant Jen, victory against her
/Sex/Tit Fun
-Typo: ...might just be worth it to make this sort...
-Suggested Fix: ...might just be worth it to make this sort...
-Note: Some strange spacing between 'it' and 'to'.
__________________________________________________________________
Valencia
/Talk/Chat
-Typo: ...Saltwater fish always tastes better than freshwater ones...
-Suggested Fix: ...Saltwater fish always taste better than freshwater ones...
-Note: Since it seems that it's 'fish' plural, it should be 'taste' rather than 'tastes'.
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