Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 17
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Wedding scene of Ahmri and you
-Atani
-Atani
-Naiyana
-Marefolk Village, Naiyana's yurt
-Cait, talking to her about performing the wedding ritual for Atani and you
-Wedding ceremony with Atani
-Wedding ceremony with Atani
-Atani post-wedding marital sex scene
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Wedding scene of Ahmri and you
-Typo: ..."Congratulations!. You look...
-Suggested Fix: ..."Congratulations! You look...
-Note: Unnecessary period after the exclamation mark.
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Atani
/Private Time/Sixty-Nine
-Typo 1: ...easy grin and dextrous ear-teasing...
-Suggested Fix: ...easy grin and dexterous ear-teasing...
-Typo 2: ...tear the clothing from her body...
-Suggested Fix: ...tear the clothing from your body...
-Typo 3: ...comfortable woolen attire...
-Suggested Fix: ...comfortable woollen attire...
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Atani
/Private Time/Sixty-Nine
-Typo: ..."a girl could get addicted to this." You gasp...
-Suggested Fix: ..."A girl could get addicted to this." You gasp...
-Note: Shouldn't the 'a' be capitalised?
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Naiyana
/Fuck/Get Ridden/Open Wide
-Typo: ...alone in the tent with naiyana...
-Suggested Fix: ...alone in the tent with Naiyana...
-Note: Capitalisation.
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Marefolk Village, Naiyana's yurt
-Note: This is a minor continuity error; when you ask Naiyana for her blessing in marrying Atani, she leaves you there. In this brief period, it still describes her being in her tent/yurt.
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Cait, talking to her about performing the wedding ritual for Atani and you
-Typo 1: ...Is she pregnant yet are you gonna have lots of kids?...
-Suggested Fix: ...Is she pregnant yet? Are you gonna have lots of kids?...
-Typo 2: ...I’ve never done a marriage before I bet it’ll be so fun!...
-Suggested Fix: ...I’ve never done a marriage before, I bet it’ll be so fun!...
-Typo 3: ...still got an everyone to save and an all the people...
-Suggested Fix: ...still got everyone to save and all the people...
-Typo 4: ...I’ve been with and will...
-Suggested Fix: ...I’ve been with other people and will...
-Note 1: It looks like there should be a question mark in there to divide those two thoughts. (Typo 1)
-Note 2: It looks like there should be a comma there to divide those two thoughts. (Typo 2)
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Wedding ceremony with Atani
-Typo: ...I Heart swear to love...
-Suggested Fix: ...I, Heart, swear to love...
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Atani post-wedding marital sex scene
/Get Ridden
-Typo: ...the way it seems to rush in your ears...
-Suggested Fix: ...the way it seems to rush into your ears...
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Wedding scene of Ahmri and you
-Atani
-Atani
-Naiyana
-Marefolk Village, Naiyana's yurt
-Cait, talking to her about performing the wedding ritual for Atani and you
-Wedding ceremony with Atani
-Wedding ceremony with Atani
-Atani post-wedding marital sex scene
__________________________________________________________________
Wedding scene of Ahmri and you
-Typo: ..."Congratulations!. You look...
-Suggested Fix: ..."Congratulations! You look...
-Note: Unnecessary period after the exclamation mark.
__________________________________________________________________
Atani
/Private Time/Sixty-Nine
-Typo 1: ...easy grin and dextrous ear-teasing...
-Suggested Fix: ...easy grin and dexterous ear-teasing...
-Typo 2: ...tear the clothing from her body...
-Suggested Fix: ...tear the clothing from your body...
-Typo 3: ...comfortable woolen attire...
-Suggested Fix: ...comfortable woollen attire...
__________________________________________________________________
Atani
/Private Time/Sixty-Nine
-Typo: ..."a girl could get addicted to this." You gasp...
-Suggested Fix: ..."A girl could get addicted to this." You gasp...
-Note: Shouldn't the 'a' be capitalised?
__________________________________________________________________
Naiyana
/Fuck/Get Ridden/Open Wide
-Typo: ...alone in the tent with naiyana...
-Suggested Fix: ...alone in the tent with Naiyana...
-Note: Capitalisation.
__________________________________________________________________
Marefolk Village, Naiyana's yurt
-Note: This is a minor continuity error; when you ask Naiyana for her blessing in marrying Atani, she leaves you there. In this brief period, it still describes her being in her tent/yurt.
__________________________________________________________________
Cait, talking to her about performing the wedding ritual for Atani and you
-Typo 1: ...Is she pregnant yet are you gonna have lots of kids?...
-Suggested Fix: ...Is she pregnant yet? Are you gonna have lots of kids?...
-Typo 2: ...I’ve never done a marriage before I bet it’ll be so fun!...
-Suggested Fix: ...I’ve never done a marriage before, I bet it’ll be so fun!...
-Typo 3: ...still got an everyone to save and an all the people...
-Suggested Fix: ...still got everyone to save and all the people...
-Typo 4: ...I’ve been with and will...
-Suggested Fix: ...I’ve been with other people and will...
-Note 1: It looks like there should be a question mark in there to divide those two thoughts. (Typo 1)
-Note 2: It looks like there should be a comma there to divide those two thoughts. (Typo 2)
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Wedding ceremony with Atani
-Typo: ...I Heart swear to love...
-Suggested Fix: ...I, Heart, swear to love...
__________________________________________________________________
Atani post-wedding marital sex scene
/Get Ridden
-Typo: ...the way it seems to rush in your ears...
-Suggested Fix: ...the way it seems to rush into your ears...
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