Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 15
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Hretha, after visiting her with Ragnild and Ragnild has left (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, leaving Kervus Warcamp (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, at the Frost Hound (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, the next day (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, in the evening
-Ragnild
-Ragnild, in the evening
-Ragnild, in the evening
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Hretha, after visiting her with Ragnild and Ragnild has left (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...her staff as a cane-cum-walking stick to...
-Suggested Fix: ...her staff as a cane-slash-walking stick to...
-Note: This has been bothering me for a very long time. Is this some sort of inside joke? I've seen this a few times throughout CoC2 and plenty more times from Trials in Tainted Space. Every time it's the same thing: [something]-slash-[something] . Except instead of 'slash', it says 'cum'. Has this been bothering anyone else or am I the only one?
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Ragnild, date, leaving Kervus Warcamp (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...As Ragnild comes into view...
-Suggested Fix: ...As the gate comes into view...
-Note: Derp.
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Ragnild, date, at the Frost Hound (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...sundress belief the difference...
-Suggested Fix: ...sundress shows the difference...
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Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...down to pound town — . Despite her strength...
-Suggested Fix: ...down to pound town. Despite her strength...
-Note: I'm not sure what the purpose of the '—' is, but as far as I know it's not serving any purpose.
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Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...and slams down one last time as she clenches ever tighter about your pulsating shaft...
-Note: Sentence is missing its beginning. Also, it is preceeded by a double space.
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Ragnild, date, the next day (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...see that lady of your home safely...
-Suggested Fix: ...see that lady of yours home safely...
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Ragnild, in the evening
/Sex/Wear Dress
-Typo: ...push her to all fours...
-Suggested Fix: ...push her onto all fours...
-Note: Random 'S' between paragraphs, remove. Also might not be a typo, but 'onto' may sound better?
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Ragnild
/Sex/Breed
-Typo: ...out of your cat-dick, more! — ...
-Suggested Fix: ...out of your cat-dick, more!...
-Note: The '—' seems to serve no purpose here.
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Ragnild, in the evening
/Visit Hretha/Threesome/Double Titjob
-Typo: ...fair if you're the one feeling good...
-Suggested Fix: ...fair if you're the only one feeling good...
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Ragnild, in the evening
/Visit Hretha/Threesome/Drunk Romp
-Typo: ...all you have to do is take on in each hand...
-Suggested Fix: ...all you have to do is take one in each hand...
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Hretha, after visiting her with Ragnild and Ragnild has left (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, leaving Kervus Warcamp (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, at the Frost Hound (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, date, the next day (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Ragnild, in the evening
-Ragnild
-Ragnild, in the evening
-Ragnild, in the evening
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Hretha, after visiting her with Ragnild and Ragnild has left (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...her staff as a cane-cum-walking stick to...
-Suggested Fix: ...her staff as a cane-slash-walking stick to...
-Note: This has been bothering me for a very long time. Is this some sort of inside joke? I've seen this a few times throughout CoC2 and plenty more times from Trials in Tainted Space. Every time it's the same thing: [something]-slash-[something] . Except instead of 'slash', it says 'cum'. Has this been bothering anyone else or am I the only one?
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild, date, leaving Kervus Warcamp (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...As Ragnild comes into view...
-Suggested Fix: ...As the gate comes into view...
-Note: Derp.
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Ragnild, date, at the Frost Hound (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...sundress belief the difference...
-Suggested Fix: ...sundress shows the difference...
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...down to pound town — . Despite her strength...
-Suggested Fix: ...down to pound town. Despite her strength...
-Note: I'm not sure what the purpose of the '—' is, but as far as I know it's not serving any purpose.
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild, date, sex scene (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...and slams down one last time as she clenches ever tighter about your pulsating shaft...
-Note: Sentence is missing its beginning. Also, it is preceeded by a double space.
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild, date, the next day (Blacksmith's New Clothes)
-Typo: ...see that lady of your home safely...
-Suggested Fix: ...see that lady of yours home safely...
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild, in the evening
/Sex/Wear Dress
-Typo: ...push her to all fours...
-Suggested Fix: ...push her onto all fours...
-Note: Random 'S' between paragraphs, remove. Also might not be a typo, but 'onto' may sound better?
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild
/Sex/Breed
-Typo: ...out of your cat-dick, more! — ...
-Suggested Fix: ...out of your cat-dick, more!...
-Note: The '—' seems to serve no purpose here.
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild, in the evening
/Visit Hretha/Threesome/Double Titjob
-Typo: ...fair if you're the one feeling good...
-Suggested Fix: ...fair if you're the only one feeling good...
__________________________________________________________________
Ragnild, in the evening
/Visit Hretha/Threesome/Drunk Romp
-Typo: ...all you have to do is take on in each hand...
-Suggested Fix: ...all you have to do is take one in each hand...
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