Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 14
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Mountain Ravine/Trail, atop the climbable point where you can throw naptha or wyvern venom onto the blockade (Getting into the Closet)
Winter Wolf / Getting into the Closet
-Cloister, with Cait and Etheryn in party
-Janeen, introductory scene at the Hawkethorne gym field
-Janeen
-Ogrish
-Ogrish
-Solveig
-Grettel, victory against her
-Grettel, defeat against her
-Arona & Bodyguards, when the former asks you to fuck the latter, after completing Right of Conquest with Arona as chieftain
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Mountain Ravine/Trail, atop the climbable point where you can throw naptha or wyvern venom onto the blockade (Getting into the Closet)
-Typo: ...as a long group we...
-Suggested Fix: ...as a lone group we...
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Winter Wolf / Getting into the Closet
-Note: During the quest Winter Wolf, in the Jotun castle, if you haven't done the quest Getting into the Closet yet, Whisper will greet you and introduce himself, then drop Sorra's Succor after defeat. A nice touch. However, Sanders doesn't recognise you have Sorra's Succor, and going back to do that quest (Getting into the Closet), the cultists and Whisper will still be there. Whisper will introduce himself as if you haven't met, and you find Sorra's Succor as usual. Interesting that those writing these scenes would have the foresight to realise a player might not have done that quest, yet at the same time didn't think to go and correct the scenes in Getting into the Closet. Just something I thought I'd make note of I guess.
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Cloister, with Cait and Etheryn in party
-Typo: You pink kitty winks...
-Suggested Fix: Your pink kitty winks...
-Note: There also needs to be spacing between these two paragraphs. With Cait and Etheryn in party.
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Janeen, introductory scene at the Hawkethorne gym field
-Typo: The field — a large...
-Suggested Fix: The field — a large...
-Note: Double space between 'field' and '—'.
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Janeen
/Exercise
-Typo: ...half an hour later , barely even...
-Suggested Fix: ...half an hour later, barely even...
-Note: Unnecessary space between 'later' and the comma.
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Ogrish
-Typo: ...step into the burly orc's smithing...
-Suggested Fix: ...step into the burly orc's smithy...
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Ogrish
/Jewelry/Buy
-Typo: ...you say drily, rolling your eyes...
-Suggested Fix: ...you say dryly, rolling your eyes...
-Note: After asking Brienne if she wants jewellery. (Speaking of jewellery, it'd be nice to introduce an option for such for your character, like in CoC1 and TiTS. I'd love some earrings or something else maybe. On a related note, it'd be neat to see more rings and necklaces amongst character attire options, since I find myself always using a Ward Amulet. Anyway, my rant's over)
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Solveig
/Flirt/Reverse Petplay
-Typo: ...if anything they only grow harder...
-Suggested Fix: ...if anything it only grows harder...
-Note: It is erroneously worded in a way that refers to my character having multiple penises, when she only has one.
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Grettel, victory against her
/Sit and Drink
-Typo: ...are looking pretty shmammered.
-Suggested Fix: ...are looking pretty hammered.
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Grettel, defeat against her
-Typo: ...exhausted, and once the massive orc seems intent on simply claiming you sexually they collapse...
-Suggested Fix: ...exhausted, and once the massive orc seems intent on simply claiming you sexually, they collapse...
-Note: Missing comma.
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Arona & Bodyguards, when the former asks you to fuck the latter, after completing Right of Conquest with Arona as chieftain
/Breed Guard
-Typo: ...finally gets hand meaty hands...
-Suggested Fix: ...finally gets her meaty hands...
-Note: Scene that can trigger when entering warchief's pavilion in Kervus Warcamp.
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Mountain Ravine/Trail, atop the climbable point where you can throw naptha or wyvern venom onto the blockade (Getting into the Closet)
Winter Wolf / Getting into the Closet
-Cloister, with Cait and Etheryn in party
-Janeen, introductory scene at the Hawkethorne gym field
-Janeen
-Ogrish
-Ogrish
-Solveig
-Grettel, victory against her
-Grettel, defeat against her
-Arona & Bodyguards, when the former asks you to fuck the latter, after completing Right of Conquest with Arona as chieftain
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Mountain Ravine/Trail, atop the climbable point where you can throw naptha or wyvern venom onto the blockade (Getting into the Closet)
-Typo: ...as a long group we...
-Suggested Fix: ...as a lone group we...
__________________________________________________________________
Winter Wolf / Getting into the Closet
-Note: During the quest Winter Wolf, in the Jotun castle, if you haven't done the quest Getting into the Closet yet, Whisper will greet you and introduce himself, then drop Sorra's Succor after defeat. A nice touch. However, Sanders doesn't recognise you have Sorra's Succor, and going back to do that quest (Getting into the Closet), the cultists and Whisper will still be there. Whisper will introduce himself as if you haven't met, and you find Sorra's Succor as usual. Interesting that those writing these scenes would have the foresight to realise a player might not have done that quest, yet at the same time didn't think to go and correct the scenes in Getting into the Closet. Just something I thought I'd make note of I guess.
__________________________________________________________________
Cloister, with Cait and Etheryn in party
-Typo: You pink kitty winks...
-Suggested Fix: Your pink kitty winks...
-Note: There also needs to be spacing between these two paragraphs. With Cait and Etheryn in party.
__________________________________________________________________
Janeen, introductory scene at the Hawkethorne gym field
-Typo: The field — a large...
-Suggested Fix: The field — a large...
-Note: Double space between 'field' and '—'.
__________________________________________________________________
Janeen
/Exercise
-Typo: ...half an hour later , barely even...
-Suggested Fix: ...half an hour later, barely even...
-Note: Unnecessary space between 'later' and the comma.
__________________________________________________________________
Ogrish
-Typo: ...step into the burly orc's smithing...
-Suggested Fix: ...step into the burly orc's smithy...
__________________________________________________________________
Ogrish
/Jewelry/Buy
-Typo: ...you say drily, rolling your eyes...
-Suggested Fix: ...you say dryly, rolling your eyes...
-Note: After asking Brienne if she wants jewellery. (Speaking of jewellery, it'd be nice to introduce an option for such for your character, like in CoC1 and TiTS. I'd love some earrings or something else maybe. On a related note, it'd be neat to see more rings and necklaces amongst character attire options, since I find myself always using a Ward Amulet. Anyway, my rant's over)
__________________________________________________________________
Solveig
/Flirt/Reverse Petplay
-Typo: ...if anything they only grow harder...
-Suggested Fix: ...if anything it only grows harder...
-Note: It is erroneously worded in a way that refers to my character having multiple penises, when she only has one.
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Grettel, victory against her
/Sit and Drink
-Typo: ...are looking pretty shmammered.
-Suggested Fix: ...are looking pretty hammered.
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Grettel, defeat against her
-Typo: ...exhausted, and once the massive orc seems intent on simply claiming you sexually they collapse...
-Suggested Fix: ...exhausted, and once the massive orc seems intent on simply claiming you sexually, they collapse...
-Note: Missing comma.
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Arona & Bodyguards, when the former asks you to fuck the latter, after completing Right of Conquest with Arona as chieftain
/Breed Guard
-Typo: ...finally gets hand meaty hands...
-Suggested Fix: ...finally gets her meaty hands...
-Note: Scene that can trigger when entering warchief's pavilion in Kervus Warcamp.
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