Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 13
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Sanders (Land of Milky Honey)
-Liaden, just after performing purification ritual with Azyrran in the Hornet Hive (Land of Milky Honey)
-Azyrran, when returning to her and the hive after a day to let it be purified (Land of Milky Honey)
-Hornet Hive, when entering from Old Forest or leaving
-Old Forest, on the tile/square to go to the Hornet Hive
-Azyrran transformation when changing from Honey Maiden Set to Knight Set
-Brienne & Azyrran, threesome sex scene
-Liaden, outside the Frost Hound, post-Land of Milky Honey, before meeting her father
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Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Typo: ...groaning and fighting to find breath...
-Suggested Fix: ...groaning and fighting to find a breath...
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Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Typo: ...too tight for two foot of fuck-flesh...
-Suggested Fix: ...too tight for two feet of fuck-flesh...
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Sanders (Land of Milky Honey)
/Cleanse Core
-Typo: ... whatever this it's...
-Suggested Fix: ... whatever this is, it's...
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Liaden, just after performing purification ritual with Azyrran in the Hornet Hive (Land of Milky Honey)
-Typo: ..."sure, sure."
-Suggested Fix: ..."Sure, sure."
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Azyrran, when returning to her and the hive after a day to let it be purified (Land of Milky Honey)
/Kiss Her
-Typo: ...stepping in pressing your succulent lips...
-Suggested Fix: ...stepping in and pressing your succulent lips...
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Hornet Hive, when entering from Old Forest or leaving
/[Enter/Leave]
-Typo: ...for your friendss to arrive...
-Suggested Fix: ...for your friends to arrive...
-Note: For the version when the player character has wings.
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Old Forest, on the tile/square to go to the Hornet Hive
-Note: This seems out of place after having completed Land of Milky Honey.
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Azyrran transformation when changing from Honey Maiden Set to Knight Set
-Typo: ...the usual backend bronze...
-Suggested Fix: ...the usual blackened bronze...
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Brienne & Azyrran, threesome sex scene
Azyrran/Flirt/Sex/Threesome/BriDoubleTitjob
-Typo: ...load of potent into their tits...
-Suggested Fix: ...load of potent cum into their tits...
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Liaden, outside the Frost Hound, post-Land of Milky Honey, before meeting her father
-Typo: ...That's is not what...
-Suggested Fix: ...That's not what...
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Sanders (Land of Milky Honey)
-Liaden, just after performing purification ritual with Azyrran in the Hornet Hive (Land of Milky Honey)
-Azyrran, when returning to her and the hive after a day to let it be purified (Land of Milky Honey)
-Hornet Hive, when entering from Old Forest or leaving
-Old Forest, on the tile/square to go to the Hornet Hive
-Azyrran transformation when changing from Honey Maiden Set to Knight Set
-Brienne & Azyrran, threesome sex scene
-Liaden, outside the Frost Hound, post-Land of Milky Honey, before meeting her father
__________________________________________________________________
Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Typo: ...groaning and fighting to find breath...
-Suggested Fix: ...groaning and fighting to find a breath...
__________________________________________________________________
Queen Nyzerrah, defeated by her (Land of Milky Honey)
-Typo: ...too tight for two foot of fuck-flesh...
-Suggested Fix: ...too tight for two feet of fuck-flesh...
__________________________________________________________________
Sanders (Land of Milky Honey)
/Cleanse Core
-Typo: ... whatever this it's...
-Suggested Fix: ... whatever this is, it's...
__________________________________________________________________
Liaden, just after performing purification ritual with Azyrran in the Hornet Hive (Land of Milky Honey)
-Typo: ..."sure, sure."
-Suggested Fix: ..."Sure, sure."
__________________________________________________________________
Azyrran, when returning to her and the hive after a day to let it be purified (Land of Milky Honey)
/Kiss Her
-Typo: ...stepping in pressing your succulent lips...
-Suggested Fix: ...stepping in and pressing your succulent lips...
__________________________________________________________________
Hornet Hive, when entering from Old Forest or leaving
/[Enter/Leave]
-Typo: ...for your friendss to arrive...
-Suggested Fix: ...for your friends to arrive...
-Note: For the version when the player character has wings.
__________________________________________________________________
Old Forest, on the tile/square to go to the Hornet Hive
-Note: This seems out of place after having completed Land of Milky Honey.
__________________________________________________________________
Azyrran transformation when changing from Honey Maiden Set to Knight Set
-Typo: ...the usual backend bronze...
-Suggested Fix: ...the usual blackened bronze...
__________________________________________________________________
Brienne & Azyrran, threesome sex scene
Azyrran/Flirt/Sex/Threesome/BriDoubleTitjob
-Typo: ...load of potent into their tits...
-Suggested Fix: ...load of potent cum into their tits...
__________________________________________________________________
Liaden, outside the Frost Hound, post-Land of Milky Honey, before meeting her father
-Typo: ...That's is not what...
-Suggested Fix: ...That's not what...
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