Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 11
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Hellhound, victory against her
-Hellhound, first meeting after giving birth
-Reagents
-Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
-Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
-Prince Nyze, defeated by him (Land of Milky Honey)
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Hellhound, victory against her
/Nurse
-Typo: ...squeeze and grope them.
-Suggested Fix: ...squeeze and grope them."
-Note: Missing quotation mark. Also that paragraph is italicised where it shouldn't be. When the Hellhound is pregnant.
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Hellhound, first meeting after giving birth
-Typo 1: ...and utterly unprepared for what...
-Suggested Fix: ...and are utterly unprepared for what...
-Typo 2: ...the burly black-maned amazon perks up as you approach with a wagging tail and a genuine smile...
-Suggested Fix: ...the burly black-maned amazon perks up with a wagging tail and a genuine smile as you approach...
-Note: Grammatically, the wording says you are the one with the 'wagging tail and a genuine smile'. By changing the order like in my suggested fix, it reads well and has correct grammar. (Typo 2)
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Reagents
Examples:
-Note: In the vendor interface for buying reagents, the details off to the right listing what the reagent affects don't match up with what is listed. If I try to change the order of the list (such as to by name, alphabetized), the details stay in the same order they were, still mostly incorrect. For example, Sweet Cream is the first listed reagent by default, but the details off to the right list it as affecting Body. I took a screenshot to better show what I'm not good at describing.
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Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
/Fuck Him
-Typo: ...and reaches back, grabbing the head of your cock and his defiance returning...
-Suggested Fix: ...and reaches back, grabbing the head of your cock, his defiance returning...
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Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
/Fuck Him
-Typo: ...while helping accent the curves of his figure...
-Suggested Fix: ...while helping accentuate the curves of his figure...
-Note: Not sure if it's a typo, but it reads better as 'accentuate'.
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Prince Nyze, defeated by him (Land of Milky Honey)
-Note: His speech isn't italicised after 'chuckles'. Also it's missing the end quotation.
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Hellhound, victory against her
-Hellhound, first meeting after giving birth
-Reagents
-Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
-Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
-Prince Nyze, defeated by him (Land of Milky Honey)
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Hellhound, victory against her
/Nurse
-Typo: ...squeeze and grope them.
-Suggested Fix: ...squeeze and grope them."
-Note: Missing quotation mark. Also that paragraph is italicised where it shouldn't be. When the Hellhound is pregnant.
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Hellhound, first meeting after giving birth
-Typo 1: ...and utterly unprepared for what...
-Suggested Fix: ...and are utterly unprepared for what...
-Typo 2: ...the burly black-maned amazon perks up as you approach with a wagging tail and a genuine smile...
-Suggested Fix: ...the burly black-maned amazon perks up with a wagging tail and a genuine smile as you approach...
-Note: Grammatically, the wording says you are the one with the 'wagging tail and a genuine smile'. By changing the order like in my suggested fix, it reads well and has correct grammar. (Typo 2)
__________________________________________________________________
Reagents
Examples:
-Note: In the vendor interface for buying reagents, the details off to the right listing what the reagent affects don't match up with what is listed. If I try to change the order of the list (such as to by name, alphabetized), the details stay in the same order they were, still mostly incorrect. For example, Sweet Cream is the first listed reagent by default, but the details off to the right list it as affecting Body. I took a screenshot to better show what I'm not good at describing.
__________________________________________________________________
Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
/Fuck Him
-Typo: ...and reaches back, grabbing the head of your cock and his defiance returning...
-Suggested Fix: ...and reaches back, grabbing the head of your cock, his defiance returning...
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Prince Nyze, victory against him, sex (Land of Milky Honey)
/Fuck Him
-Typo: ...while helping accent the curves of his figure...
-Suggested Fix: ...while helping accentuate the curves of his figure...
-Note: Not sure if it's a typo, but it reads better as 'accentuate'.
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Prince Nyze, defeated by him (Land of Milky Honey)
-Note: His speech isn't italicised after 'chuckles'. Also it's missing the end quotation.
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