Errors found in version [0.5.3], Megapost Part 10
I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
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Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
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}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Mai
-Miko, with Cait in party
-Kiyoko
-Kiyoko, pregnant
-Kiyoko, not pregnant
-Kiyoko, scene where she's in heat when you visit her home, after getting her out of the Astral Plane
-Rindo
-Miko & Mai
-Miko & Mai
-Maria (Mushroom Druidess), victory against her
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Mai
/Harai/"Cleanse"
-Note: Unnecessary quotation mark at the end of the line.
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Miko, with Cait in party
/Omikuji/Special Box
-Typo 1: Given that Miko's got your seed growing in her womb, . ...
-Typo 2: ...have a thresome with those...
-Suggested Fix: ...have a threesome with those...
-Note: Unfinished sentence 'Given that Miko's got your seed growing in her womb, .' at the start of the paragraph. With Cait in party.
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Kiyoko
/Have Meal
"
"Oh yes. Who would know two and centuries would improve the trees so?"
"
(haven't been able to get this one to come up for a screenshot)
-Typo: ...know two and centuries would...
-Suggested Fix: ...know two and a half centuries would...
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Kiyoko, pregnant
/Have Meal/Actually...
-Typo: ...otherwise wholesome domicile . No matter...
-Suggested Fix: ...otherwise wholesome domicile. No matter...
-Note: Unnecessary space. Kiyoko is already pregnant.
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Kiyoko, not pregnant
/Have Meal/Actually...
-Typo: ...bun rising in her oven. . No matter...
-Suggested Fix: ...bun rising in her oven. No matter...
-Note: Unnecessary space and period. Kiyoko is not pregnant.
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Kiyoko, scene where she's in heat when you visit her home, after getting her out of the Astral Plane
-Typo: ...you and your siblings supposed to out at Komari's...
-Suggested Fix: ...you and your siblings supposed to be out at Komari's...
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Rindo
/Chat/People/Kazuo
-Typo: ...away from him and his living prosthetic of an arm as i can...
-Suggested Fix: ...away from him and his living prosthetic of an arm as I can...
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Miko & Mai
/Sex/Both Sisters/Cait
-Typo: ... — but it's too late, too late...
-Suggested Fix: ... — but it's too little, too late...
-Note: With Cait in party, of course.
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Miko & Mai
/Sex/Both Sisters/Kiyoko
-Typo: ...a while, yeah?" I'll tell...
-Suggested Fix: ...a while, yeah? I'll tell...
-Note: Unnecessary quotation mark after 'yeah?'. Also the whole line needs to be italicised. With Kiyoko in party, of course.
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Maria (Mushroom Druidess), victory against her
/Sex/Titfuck
-Typo: ...catching some of you gooey load...
-Suggested Fix: ...catching some of your gooey load...
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I'm playing the downloadable version, not on a browser.
This is my typo reporting format, in the brackets:
{
__________________________________________________________________
Character or scene, including the quest if any, usually what is listed at the upper right in-game above the portrait
/Inputs or choices leading to scene, if any, divided by forward-slashes '/' like an address in windows explorer
Screenshot of typo(s)/error(s), with outlining in pink
"
If no screenshot: Quote, direct from the game and unaltered, usually a paragraph, identified by the quotations the line before and after it. Unfortunately, I lose italicised and bolded text since I'm using a basic text editor to record, but I do note when there's such missing or unnecessarily present.
"
-Typo from the text in the quote, sometimes multiple
-Suggestion(s) for a fix to the typo by moi
-Any notes, usually if I'm unsure about it
__________________________________________________________________
}
Preface:
I've upgraded to the most recent public version [0.5.3] and have verified what entries I have compiled still exist (sadly, nearly all). Took out the Kinu flashback, Atani after-wedding, and Atani marital sex entries; I don't think the things I found questionable were errors in those. I removed the character creation and Kaina kuddle entries because they have been corrected since version [0.4.14]. I've also taken the time to order the entries so they match up more relevantly, such as all the Land of Milky Honey quest related entries are together. I took screenshots of all but one or two I couldn't get and outlined the errors, for convenience, etc.
Because of the limit of 10 attatched files (screenshots), I have to split this into multiple parts.
It's unfortunate that most of these typos have been around since I started reading in version [0.3.7], or as early as they were added into the game. After a while I couldn't stand seeing these errors persist and started working on compiling typos and grammatical errors. Also, I couldn't help myself with pointing out a few places where better wording could exist, if I dare so may.
Approximate Contents (by Character / Scene Title) (May be missing a few)
-Mai
-Miko, with Cait in party
-Kiyoko
-Kiyoko, pregnant
-Kiyoko, not pregnant
-Kiyoko, scene where she's in heat when you visit her home, after getting her out of the Astral Plane
-Rindo
-Miko & Mai
-Miko & Mai
-Maria (Mushroom Druidess), victory against her
__________________________________________________________________
Mai
/Harai/"Cleanse"
-Note: Unnecessary quotation mark at the end of the line.
__________________________________________________________________
Miko, with Cait in party
/Omikuji/Special Box
-Typo 1: Given that Miko's got your seed growing in her womb, . ...
-Typo 2: ...have a thresome with those...
-Suggested Fix: ...have a threesome with those...
-Note: Unfinished sentence 'Given that Miko's got your seed growing in her womb, .' at the start of the paragraph. With Cait in party.
__________________________________________________________________
Kiyoko
/Have Meal
"
"Oh yes. Who would know two and centuries would improve the trees so?"
"
(haven't been able to get this one to come up for a screenshot)
-Typo: ...know two and centuries would...
-Suggested Fix: ...know two and a half centuries would...
__________________________________________________________________
Kiyoko, pregnant
/Have Meal/Actually...
-Typo: ...otherwise wholesome domicile . No matter...
-Suggested Fix: ...otherwise wholesome domicile. No matter...
-Note: Unnecessary space. Kiyoko is already pregnant.
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Kiyoko, not pregnant
/Have Meal/Actually...
-Typo: ...bun rising in her oven. . No matter...
-Suggested Fix: ...bun rising in her oven. No matter...
-Note: Unnecessary space and period. Kiyoko is not pregnant.
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Kiyoko, scene where she's in heat when you visit her home, after getting her out of the Astral Plane
-Typo: ...you and your siblings supposed to out at Komari's...
-Suggested Fix: ...you and your siblings supposed to be out at Komari's...
__________________________________________________________________
Rindo
/Chat/People/Kazuo
-Typo: ...away from him and his living prosthetic of an arm as i can...
-Suggested Fix: ...away from him and his living prosthetic of an arm as I can...
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Miko & Mai
/Sex/Both Sisters/Cait
-Typo: ... — but it's too late, too late...
-Suggested Fix: ... — but it's too little, too late...
-Note: With Cait in party, of course.
__________________________________________________________________
Miko & Mai
/Sex/Both Sisters/Kiyoko
-Typo: ...a while, yeah?" I'll tell...
-Suggested Fix: ...a while, yeah? I'll tell...
-Note: Unnecessary quotation mark after 'yeah?'. Also the whole line needs to be italicised. With Kiyoko in party, of course.
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Maria (Mushroom Druidess), victory against her
/Sex/Titfuck
-Typo: ...catching some of you gooey load...
-Suggested Fix: ...catching some of your gooey load...
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