There were some typos and bugs I will pose on this mega thread. Only the best for the sun mommy with mega big heart and dick.
1. Scenes below are from, "treats" scene.
extra quote there
2. These are from the scene, "talk it out" which happens the day after the treat scene.
So this scene appears after pressing talk it out (1st screenshot), and when you press next, the after immediately begins at the very end of the scroll, or the end of the scene (2nd screenshot). The scene immediately jumps to the end instead of starting from where the 3rd screenshot shows. Also, there is no break (space) between the end of highlighted part's paragraph and the next.
3. This scene occurs when PC chooses, "sex relief," option and sees Anni afterward.
So the scene on the left screenshot only occurs if PC chooses to blow Anni, but in the appearance section, it says PC saw her nethers (right screenshot) even though PC saw what she's packing after giving her a blowjob.
4. This scene is from talk --> valk stories --> livestock.
Period should be removed. Only occurs for bimbo champ.
While I know it's grammatically correct. The highlighted part feels a bit confusing whether, "they" refer to the pigs or the trainees.
5. This scene from talk --> valk stories --> travel.
The quote mark there should be removed. This variation of talk only occurs in Agni is in pc's party.
6. This is from the Nature of Battle codex entry.
I know this isn't Anni's scene but it only pops up after talking with Anni and since it's from the same writer....figured I should include it here.
Needs a period there.
7. This is from talk -->philosophy-->cleverness
The highlighted paragraph should be separated from the next one. Should have space between them.
8. This scene occurs when PC chooses to do sex relief and come talk to Anni again. It occurs when you choose the "relationship" option.
The part of the sentence is missing there. I know that the same sentence is used if PC pursues a relationship with Anni if they did not choose the sex relief scene but the sentence becomes cut off if PC does this talk after blowing her.
9. This scene is from "treats" scene. I forgot to include it in the previous post.
So this particular scene occurs if PC has Brienne (1st screenshot), but no variation occurs if PC has Brint (2nd screenshot). I don't know if this is intentional but often Brint and Brienne have contributions to the same scene (just slightly different) and both are known to like cakes/sweets so I assume it's a bug.
10. This scene occurs when PC chooses to have sex with Anni for the 1st time and selects "meal" option.
So the scene recognizes that Anni and PC are about the same height (1st screenshot), but when you choose the pussy option, it says PC is much taller (2nd screenshot). Only does this if PC is around the same height as Anni ~6ft and works fine for PC taller and shorter than her. It also mentions anni smiling up as if PC is taller than her even though they're similar in height (3rd screenshot).
Pc here in this screenshot is 6'4" (4th screenshot).
11. This is from the tooltip for "pitch anal" option.
This error description only occurs if Anni hasn't penetrated pc before in any previous sex scenes.
12. This scene is from cuddle-->intimate-->cuddlefuck.
So doing the cuddlefuck magically gives creampie for pc even though there was no penetration whatsoever. Also it seems to always go for pc's vagina even if buttslut mode is on.
So this scene also magically gives pc creampie while also taking pc's virginity away...I know you serve the best crempies and they're nice but please no mysterious, eldritch goo crempies Anni! Before doing cuddelfucks (1st screenshot) and after cuddlefucks (3rd screenshot).
Comma should be removed.
13. This scene is from sex-->restraints.
It says just like last time (2nd screenshot) but this is the 1st time pc is doing the scene (1st screenshot).
The single quotation mark is actually correct, because it's the beginning of [pc.name] quoting an imaginary speaker on the topic of fish stories. The quotation is quite long, but closes after "made it back to the village!"
2. These are from the scene, "talk it out" which happens the day after the treat scene.
So this scene appears after pressing talk it out (1st screenshot), and when you press next, the after immediately begins at the very end of the scroll, or the end of the scene (2nd screenshot). The scene immediately jumps to the end instead of starting from where the 3rd screenshot shows. Also, there is no break (space) between the end of highlighted part's paragraph and the next.
3. This scene occurs when PC chooses, "sex relief," option and sees Anni afterward.
So the scene on the left screenshot only occurs if PC chooses to blow Anni, but in the appearance section, it says PC saw her nethers (right screenshot) even though PC saw what she's packing after giving her a blowjob.
That's on me. For organizational reasons, I asked the coders not to have the sex relief scene count for the annika.fucked parser. That is still the correct decision, but gating the appearance screen text with only annika.fucked is not ideal. As such, the best solution to this is probably to change that particular paragraph from this:
[annika.fucked|Finally, you know that underneath the dress, Annika boasts a thick, footlong elven shaft, complete with a dark throbbing cockhead and a pair of juicy balls.[silly| As always, though, let's just say that she's big enough to feel big to your porn sensibilities, without being so big that her cock's unusable. Twelve inches is fuckin' monstrous. Definitely intimidating to anyone outside Porn World.] She also has one asshole, placed right between her tight chiseled buttcheeks where it belongs.|Finally, although you haven't had the pleasure of seeing her nethers in person, you know that Annika possesses a penis and balls, just like other half-sexed frost elves. And you can only assume that she has one asshole, placed right between her cheeks where it belongs.]
to this:
{//fucked Annika OR done sex relief scene: Finally, you know that underneath the dress, Annika boasts a thick, footlong elven shaft, complete with a dark throbbing cockhead and a pair of juicy balls.[silly| As always, though, let's just say that she's big enough to feel big to your porn sensibilities, without being so big that her cock's unusable. Twelve inches is fuckin' monstrous. Definitely intimidating to anyone outside Porn World.] She also has one asshole, placed right between her tight chiseled buttcheeks where it belongs. //else: Finally, although you haven't had the pleasure of seeing her nethers in person, you know that Annika possesses a penis and balls, just like other half-sexed frost elves. And you can only assume that she has one asshole, placed right between her cheeks where it belongs.}
"[pc.isBimbo|Oooh, oooh! Let me guess! Do some of those experiences <b>not</b> include cuddly sheepies and oinky little piggies?|… which is code for 'not all of them know how to deal with sheep and pigs'," you finish].
to this:
"[pc.isBimbo|Oooh, oooh! Let me guess! Do some of those experiences <b>not</b> include cuddly sheepies and oinky little piggies?"|… which is code for 'not all of them know how to deal with sheep and pigs'," you finish.]
Fair enough! Those antecedents are unclear. I would change the line from this:
Some of them were better at it than others. They picked up the pigs by their hind legs, and with their weaker front legs, they couldn't get a grip. But those Rift kids…" She buries her head in her hands.
to this:
Some of them were better at it than others. They picked up the pigs by the hind legs, and since the pigs' front legs were weaker, the little things couldn't get a grip. But those Rift kids…" She buries her head in her hands.
6. This is from the Nature of Battle codex entry.
I know this isn't Anni's scene but it only pops up after talking with Anni and since it's from the same writer....figured I should include it here.
Yep! I just completely hung a period there. Thank you! Should go from this:
No matter what <i>kind</i> of fighting one is doing, though, it usually takes up relatively little of a warrior's daily experience A soldier in a mass army on campaign spends most of their time marching, making camp, or standing guard; one who spends their months clearing out bandits or the Wraith-touched still takes more time to search for their foes than to battle them.
to this:
No matter what <i>kind</i> of fighting one is doing, though, it usually takes up relatively little of a warrior's daily experience. A soldier in a mass army on campaign spends most of their time marching, making camp, or standing guard; one who spends their months clearing out bandits or the Wraith-touched still takes more time to search for their foes than to battle them.
|"Yeah, 'devious' is fuckin' stupid." Arona snorts derisively. "This elf has some real advice, beta bitch, even if she does take ten words to say somethin' that needs five. She's right, though. Keep it simple. Do one clever thing? Great, fine. Do six? That's not clever, that's bein' a dipshit."
]
You place a finger on your chin. "[silly|So: keep it simple, stupid.|[pc.dcb|You're saying not to fuck around and be clever, just do the thing.|So it's best not to try to overawe the enemy with your tactical genius, then.|That sounds bad. I guess there really is a time to not be too-ooo smartypants, then!]]"
to this:
|"Yeah, 'devious' is fuckin' stupid." Arona snorts derisively. "This elf has some real advice, beta bitch, even if she does take ten words to say somethin' that needs five. She's right, though. Keep it simple. Do one clever thing? Great, fine. Do six? That's not clever, that's bein' a dipshit."
]
You place a finger on your chin. "[silly|So: keep it simple, stupid.|[pc.dcb|You're saying not to fuck around and be clever, just do the thing.|So it's best not to try to overawe the enemy with your tactical genius, then.|That sounds bad. I guess there really is a time to not be too-ooo smartypants, then!]]"
8. This scene occurs when PC chooses to do sex relief and come talk to Anni again. It occurs when you choose the "relationship" option.
The part of the sentence is missing there. I know that the same sentence is used if PC pursues a relationship with Anni if they did not choose the sex relief scene but the sentence becomes cut off if PC does this talk after blowing her.
9. This scene is from "treats" scene. I forgot to include it in the previous post.
So this particular scene occurs if PC has Brienne (1st screenshot), but no variation occurs if PC has Brint (2nd screenshot). I don't know if this is intentional but often Brint and Brienne have contributions to the same scene (just slightly different) and both are known to like cakes/sweets so I assume it's a bug.
10. This scene occurs when PC chooses to have sex with Anni for the 1st time and selects "meal" option.
So the scene recognizes that Anni and PC are about the same height (1st screenshot), but when you choose the pussy option, it says PC is much taller (2nd screenshot). Only does this if PC is around the same height as Anni ~6ft and works fine for PC taller and shorter than her. It also mentions anni smiling up as if PC is taller than her even though they're similar in height (3rd screenshot).
Pc here in this screenshot is 6'4" (4th screenshot).
The breakpoints for the first parser are 72 78; the breakpoint for the second parser is 76; the breakpoint for the third parser is 66 76. I would say that the first parser should stay the same, the second parser should change to 78, and the third parser should go to 66 78.
Also, there's an extraneous space before the third parser.
12. This scene is from cuddle-->intimate-->cuddlefuck.
So doing the cuddlefuck magically gives creampie for pc even though there was no penetration whatsoever. Also it seems to always go for pc's vagina even if buttslut mode is on.
So this scene also magically gives pc creampie while also taking pc's virginity away...I know you serve the best crempies and they're nice but please no mysterious, eldritch goo crempies Anni! Before doing cuddelfucks (1st screenshot) and after cuddlefucks (3rd screenshot).
The only instructions I gave for that scene were that PC should cum and that the annika.fucked flag should be set. Didn't say anything about vaginally/anally filled! That's a bug. Champ should not lose virginity or be anally/vaginally filled.
Correct! And also I messed up the parser. Text should go from this:
Still stroking, still kissing, you nuzzle closer into your lover as her fingers inch closer and closer,[pc.isCrotchExposed| sliding underneath your [pc.gear]].
to this:
Still stroking, still kissing, you nuzzle closer into your lover as her fingers inch closer and closer[pc.isCrotchExposed||, sliding underneath your [pc.gear]].
That's not a reference to the last time you did this scene. It's a reference to the previous time in this scene that Annika edged you with her fingers.
The single quotation mark is actually correct, because it's the beginning of [pc.name] quoting an imaginary speaker on the topic of fish stories. The quotation is quite long, but closes after "made it back to the village!"
I put it just in case bc I wasn't sure if there was something missing or not. Makes sense since Brienne tends to be excitable and bubbly compared to Brint even if they share the same love for sweets!
Well all the PC I used in these screenshots are all vag only champ and this error descript only occurred with characters w/ magicock piercing (turned off). It usually doesn't trigger this error and this definitely didn't happen for Serena's moo missionary tooltip.
Perhaps bc you have a parser check to see whether the dick is Ghostlight or not? Usually, in every other scene, it treats Ghostlight as a real dick and you're one of few writers who write variations for characters to recognize it as Ghostlight (which I appreciate very much btw one of few rare scenes I enjoy PC as dick wielder are when PC uses Ghostlight on Serena and Anni). Maybe that may have caused some confusion while in coding?
That's not a reference to the last time you did this scene. It's a reference to the previous time in this scene that Annika edged you with her fingers.
Actually, I do have a question. In the meals sex scene and in the mouth option, there seems to be a variant of whether PC inserts a finger in Anni's butt or not. What is the flag for that variation? I thought initially it triggers if PC has at least blown Anni once before that scene, but it also seems to appear even if pc has blown Anni for the 1st time in the scene.
Well all the PC I used in these screenshots are all vag only champ and this error descript only occurred with characters w/ magicock piercing (turned off). It usually doesn't trigger this error and this definitely didn't happen for Serena's moo missionary tooltip.
Perhaps bc you have a parser check to see whether the dick is Ghostlight or not? Usually, in every other scene, it treats Ghostlight as a real dick and you're one of few writers who write variations for characters to recognize it as Ghostlight (which I appreciate very much btw one of few rare scenes I enjoy PC as dick wielder are when PC uses Ghostlight on Serena and Anni). Maybe that may have caused some confusion while in coding?
Oh. Yeah, it's because your ghostlight is turned off. In that case, you shouldn't even qualify for having a shaft, and you should get the tooltip for "you don't have a shaft lol but a magicock would work!"
Actually, I do have a question. In the meals sex scene and in the mouth option, there seems to be a variant of whether PC inserts a finger in Anni's butt or not. What is the flag for that variation? I thought initially it triggers if PC has at least blown Anni once before that scene, but it also seems to appear even if pc has blown Anni for the 1st time in the scene.
