(0.5.22) Arona Dommy Mommy Scene typos/errors

[luciel1331]

1. These screenshots are from the scene that occurs when you do Dom Mommy scene for the 1st time (before the choice split).

Extra that. Only happens for non-bimbo champs.

Not sure if this was meant to be in quotes or not. Since this game used italics when ppl talk I was a bit confused about whether it was supposed to be in the talk (in quotes) or just there for emphasis.

Also even if pc is pregnant, it says pc might be fertile for the 1st time doing the scene (1st screenshot) and subsequent times (2nd screenshot). It might be only tracking whether pc has fertile/infertile pussy and doesn't account for whether pc is pregnant (can't be knocked up again if you're pregnant). Even though subsequent scenes recognize when pc is pregnant or not (3rd and 4th screenshot).

2. These screenshots below are from Dom Mom --> Go Easy

I know that sentence with the highlighted part is grammatically correct but it seems a bit awkward to read and I feel like it might need some kind of a break in between? This scene only happens if pc is bigger than GG but less than huge size tits like M cup.

This is just me being nitpicky and more of a question. Why does it mention pc and Arona has equal in size in like a big leap of range? I tested it and it occurs when pc is DD cup to GG cup, Doesn't Arona have DD cup so shouldn't the bigger breasts scene occur when PC is F cup or bigger (I know the art doesn't make it seems like she's DD cup it looks more like F cup but I think ppl in the forum were saying the appearance description/text should dictate the scene rather than the picture since they aren't always consistent with each other)?

 

[luciel1331]

3. These are from the scene that occurs after both go easy/push her when Arona succeeds.

It mentions PC might get pregnant even if PC is infertile (2nd screenshot), the buttslut mode is on (3rd screenshot), and even if PC is pregnant. I've also tested the scene with shemale PC, which does the same thing. Not sure if this is a game flagging wrong things or just a saying that Arona came so much she could knock the PC right up kink thing. But Arona says she'll take up on the offer (which feels like it's implying she wants to impregnate pc) and start a family (if pc is fertile) so I think it's the former?

Edit: Or is Arona referring to the hugs/cuddles? Because when PC had kids with Arona it seems clear that she meant she wants cuddles but it seems less clear so in the other variation I mentioned above.

4. These are from the scene that occurs after push her option when Arona fails.

Arona mentions again even though this is the 1st time she fails (might be tracking how many times Dom Mom scene). This is the 1st time pc does push her and she can't fail 1st time Dom Mom scene happens since push her option doesn't appear until subsequent times and she can't fail when doing go easy on her scene.

 

[Alypia]

1. These screenshots are from the scene that occurs when you do Dom Mommy scene for the 1st time (before the choice split).
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Extra that. Only happens for non-bimbo champs.

Intentional, and grammatically correct.

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Not sure if this was meant to be in quotes or not. Since this game used italics when ppl talk I was a bit confused about whether it was supposed to be in the talk (in quotes) or just there for emphasis.

Yep, it's there for emphasis. Intentional.

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Also even if pc is pregnant, it says pc might be fertile for the 1st time doing the scene (1st screenshot) and subsequent times (2nd screenshot). It might be only tracking whether pc has fertile/infertile pussy and doesn't account for whether pc is pregnant (can't be knocked up again if you're pregnant). Even though subsequent scenes recognize when pc is pregnant or not (3rd and 4th screenshot).

The specific wording I used was "if PC has a fertile vag OR is already pregnant but doesn't know it yet". The player might know that Champ's been knocked up because of the changing belly description, but until you miss your monthly or start feeling sick or any of the other symptoms, the PC doesn't know for sure (even if she might have a pretty good guess~) - all the better to tease Arona with more babymaking!

2. These screenshots below are from Dom Mom --> Go Easy
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I know that sentence with the highlighted part is grammatically correct but it seems a bit awkward to read and I feel like it might need some kind of a break in between? This scene only happens if pc is bigger than GG but less than huge size tits like M cup.

It could be better, yes. Here's how I would change it (additions bolded and in blue):

They're perfect to cup, to heft, to smoosh your own[pc.breastRange C E H MM
|, smaller breasts into as a gentle reminder that the biggest tits don't always top
| breasts into, equal in size and heft and roundness and just as wonderfully soft, too
|, even larger breasts into, all to gently remind her that Mommy's even bigger and bustier than she is
| absolutely colossal bust into; as big as Arona is, Mommy's so much bigger, more buxom, more pillowy
].

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This is just me being nitpicky and more of a question. Why does it mention pc and Arona has equal in size in like a big leap of range? I tested it and it occurs when pc is DD cup to GG cup, Doesn't Arona have DD cup so shouldn't the bigger breasts scene occur when PC is F cup or bigger (I know the art doesn't make it seems like she's DD cup it looks more like F cup but I think ppl in the forum were saying the appearance description/text should dictate the scene rather than the picture since they aren't always consistent with each other)?

Because I didn't want to make it such a narrow range that most players wouldn't see it.

3. These are from the scene that occurs after both go easy/push her when Arona succeeds.
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It mentions PC might get pregnant even if PC is infertile (2nd screenshot), the buttslut mode is on (3rd screenshot), and even if PC is pregnant. I've also tested the scene with shemale PC, which does the same thing. Not sure if this is a game flagging wrong things or just a saying that Arona came so much she could knock the PC right up kink thing. But Arona says she'll take up on the offer (which feels like it's implying she wants to impregnate pc) and start a family (if pc is fertile) so I think it's the former?

This is probably the fault of imprecise instructions. In the scene, I wrote:

//Champ is fertile OR is pregnant but doesn't know it yet, AND vagAss returns vag:

Or, to put it another way, "this text should only appear if Champ has a vag and it just got creampied, AND one of the two following conditions: she's either pregnant-but-doesn't-know-yet OR she's fertile".

I think some wires got crossed. It's kind of a complex check to make, though, and my wording wasn't great.

4. These are from the scene that occurs after push her option when Arona fails.
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Arona mentions again even though this is the 1st time she fails (might be tracking how many times Dom Mom scene). This is the 1st time pc does push her and she can't fail 1st time Dom Mom scene happens since push her option doesn't appear until subsequent times and she can't fail when doing go easy on her scene.

That scene was written like this:

"I messed that up {//repeat of failure: so bad <b>again</b> else: <b>so bad</b>}…"

Some more wires might've gotten crossed.

Thanks for looking so closely at the flags! You're putting in a lot of work to make sure everything clicks properly. I appreciate it!

 

[luciel1331]

The specific wording I used was "if PC has a fertile vag OR is already pregnant but doesn't know it yet". The player might know that Champ's been knocked up because of the changing belly description, but until you miss your monthly or start feeling sick or any of the other symptoms, the PC doesn't know for sure (even if she might have a pretty good guess~) - all the better to tease Arona with more babymaking!

OK. So part of foreplay/dirty talk. Makes sense. I think that scene still has wrong flagging problems though. Because:

This only happens when dom mon scene happens in subsequent times pc is fertile. In this save pc is currently pregnant with brint's kid. It says mistress's turn which seems like it's keeping track of whether arona had babies or not(which she hasn't bc pc is here is vag-only).

And in that same scene it mentions making family bigger even though pc has never had arona's kid (she has no kids in nursery yet-2nd screenshot).

I know you've said it's kind of vague to feed arona's and pc's preg thing but these seems way to specific and it seems to be flagging wrong things. I'll attach the save used in these screenshots.

Because I didn't want to make it such a narrow range that most players wouldn't see it.

Well most descriptions of characters are vague anyway so I guess it is pretty fun to leave a lot to imaginations even if there are illustrations of characters.

Thanks for looking so closely at the flags! You're putting in a lot of work to make sure everything clicks properly. I appreciate it!

No problem! As I said, I love your works and I love the sheer amount of variation ur scenes have! Like there were so many variations for these scenes for just vag-only champs alone. I can't imagine how many variants added for the shemaoe and futa pcs (only skimmed through shemale version to check flags). Love the dom mommy scene so it was no sweat for me to re-read and check things again. Looking forward to more of ur work and now onward to new viv strap on scene for me!

 

[Alypia]

OK. So part of foreplay/dirty talk. Makes sense. I think that scene still has wrong flagging problems though. Because:

This only happens when dom mon scene happens in subsequent times pc is fertile. In this save pc is currently pregnant with brint's kid. It says mistress's turn which seems like it's keeping track of whether arona had babies or not(which she hasn't bc pc is here is vag-only).
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And in that same scene it mentions making family bigger even though pc has never had arona's kid (she has no kids in nursery yet-2nd screenshot).

Hm. Yeah, this sequence should only show up if a) PC is fertile and b) PC has never given birth to any of Arona's children and c) Arona is either currently pregnant or has given birth to at least one of PC's kids. If that is not the case, flag's bugged.