[0.5.11] Astraea's Quest typos

Ace Hangman

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Astraea; Begin Berwyn's Quest
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let what happened to Astraea happened to him
Should be 'happen to him'

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you and Berwyn at the Waystone
Should be 'are' at the Waystone or 'arrive' at the Waystone.

Matiha's Fortress; Climbing the stairs to Matiha
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you give the room a push
Should be 'door' instead of 'room.

Matiha; Wait
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Once the enchantments starting taking hold
Should be 'started'.

Matiha, Boss fight (victory)
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a blast of firey magic
Should be 'fiery'.

Aftermath
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Remove extra space.

Aftermath; Talk to Her
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She leans back, taking by surprise by the question.
Should be 'taken' instead of 'taking'.

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I could always ask him with some help with it.
Should be 'for some help'.

Aftermath; Astraea
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You’re sure your own journey will probably see you in that direction someday. You tell her that you’re sure your own journey will see you there someday.
These two sentences probably could be one sentence, 'You're sure your own journey will probably see you in that direction someday and you tell her so.'

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"I take is Astraea’s gone?"
Should be 'I take it'.