Astraea; Begin Berwyn's Quest
Matiha's Fortress; Climbing the stairs to Matiha
Matiha; Wait
Matiha, Boss fight (victory)
Aftermath
Remove extra space.
Aftermath; Talk to Her
Aftermath; Astraea
Should be 'happen to him'let what happened to Astraea happened to him
Should be 'are' at the Waystone or 'arrive' at the Waystone.you and Berwyn at the Waystone
Matiha's Fortress; Climbing the stairs to Matiha
Should be 'door' instead of 'room.you give the room a push
Matiha; Wait
Should be 'started'.Once the enchantments starting taking hold
Matiha, Boss fight (victory)
Should be 'fiery'.a blast of firey magic
Aftermath
Remove extra space.
Aftermath; Talk to Her
Should be 'taken' instead of 'taking'.She leans back, taking by surprise by the question.
Should be 'for some help'.I could always ask him with some help with it.
Aftermath; Astraea
These two sentences probably could be one sentence, 'You're sure your own journey will probably see you in that direction someday and you tell her so.'You’re sure your own journey will probably see you in that direction someday. You tell her that you’re sure your own journey will see you there someday.
Should be 'I take it'."I take is Astraea’s gone?"