From the scene where PC asks Cait to officiate: should be a space for aswell.
Domrona asking PC to relieve her breasts:Sentence wording feels off, and salty is missing the s
Garret's elevator scene has misplaced quotations, as is Gweyr's initial encounter with her son.
Aftermath scene with Kiyoko variant has a typo.
Fem!Liulfr's TF scene cuts off the sentence. First time sparring has extra comma, same with post defeat sparring.
Sanders confront scene with Gweyr has extra spaces where commas are, along with Gweyr's name spelled wrong.
Option to speak about Gweyr to Sanders, Garth, and River appears even when she has returned. Referring to confronting them about her being in the Glacier.
Domrona asking PC to relieve her breasts:Sentence wording feels off, and salty is missing the s
Garret's elevator scene has misplaced quotations, as is Gweyr's initial encounter with her son.
Aftermath scene with Kiyoko variant has a typo.
Fem!Liulfr's TF scene cuts off the sentence. First time sparring has extra comma, same with post defeat sparring.
Sanders confront scene with Gweyr has extra spaces where commas are, along with Gweyr's name spelled wrong.
Option to speak about Gweyr to Sanders, Garth, and River appears even when she has returned. Referring to confronting them about her being in the Glacier.
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