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[0.4.5] Vesperran Codex bug, typos and wording issues
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<blockquote data-quote="Burnerbro" data-source="post: 364578" data-attributes="member: 35944"><p>1.</p><p>Meeting Azyrran, fighting/sparring with her, talking with her about her hive and having sex with her - none of that unlocks the Vesparans entry of the Codex.</p><p></p><p>2.</p><p></p><p>Change the highlighted 'ft' and the dot to ' to make it consistent with other entries.</p><p></p><p>3.</p><p></p><p>I was only able to find the examples of 'westerland' being used as a proper noun so I'm not sure what that word is supposed to mean here.</p><p></p><p>4.</p><p></p><p>Change the hyphen to space.</p><p></p><p>5.</p><p></p><p>Same as above, change ft to '</p><p></p><p>6.</p><p></p><p>This bit will work better as two separate sentences, IMO.</p><p></p><p>7.</p><p></p><p>'unto itself' -> 'in itself' or nix entirely. </p><p></p><p>8.</p><p></p><p>add 'each' before 'wielding' OR change both instances of 'her' to 'their'</p><p></p><p>9.</p><p></p><p>"allowed to out" -> "allowed to come out" OR "let out"</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Burnerbro, post: 364578, member: 35944"] 1. Meeting Azyrran, fighting/sparring with her, talking with her about her hive and having sex with her - none of that unlocks the Vesparans entry of the Codex. 2. Change the highlighted 'ft' and the dot to ' to make it consistent with other entries. 3. I was only able to find the examples of 'westerland' being used as a proper noun so I'm not sure what that word is supposed to mean here. 4. Change the hyphen to space. 5. Same as above, change ft to ' 6. This bit will work better as two separate sentences, IMO. 7. 'unto itself' -> 'in itself' or nix entirely. 8. add 'each' before 'wielding' OR change both instances of 'her' to 'their' 9. "allowed to out" -> "allowed to come out" OR "let out" [/QUOTE]
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