(0.4.41) Pale Flame Quest typos

[luciel1331]

There are some typos in the pale flame quest.

These are from when you take the pale flame quest and talk to Mai as kitsune champ.
Pretty sure that, "yr," is a typo. Even if Mai talks in a certain dialect I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be, "your," or ,"yer." Mai has used, "yer," before in a sentence.

Extra space between "mean," and the period.

Needs space after, "land." Happens as both kitsune champ (left) and non-kitsune champ (right).

Has an extra comma there.



These are from Undermountain map when PC faces the golem. Specifically when you are in the tile with the golem and press no and there's Brint in your party. Pretty sure it's supposed to be, "prospectors who were."



This is when kitsune champ gives Mai the molten core. The highlighted part needs to be separated since usually the part where PC speaks and the npc speaks are separated.


This is when non-kitsune champ gives Mai the stones. Since this is the PC speaking, it shouldn't be italicized.

 

[luciel1331]

These are from when non-kitsune champ gives Mai the molten core.
She says that same phrase even if PC gives her the stones or the molten core. For the screenshot below, she got the molten core. Pretty sure she shouldn't say that when the PC gives her the molten core since PC went beyond her expectation. Because she says different things with kitsune champ depending on whether she got the stones or the molten core.

Missing the quote mark. Happens as kitsune champ as well.

Highlighted part (when pc speaks) needs to be separated from the part below (when Mai speaks). Also, there's a quote mark missing at the end of Mai's part.