[0.4.30] Land of Milky Honey typo

kizmelelf

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In the following paragraph,
"Oooh fine..." Nyzerrah sighs, reaching out to stroke yours and her daughter's chins. "Regardless I believe there is anything we could do for you now, but let it be known; if ever you have need of my daughters and I, we will wing to your aid at a moment's notice." Her expression turns momentarily serious, and she thumbs a hand on her chest. "May Lumia scorch our wings should we fail you in this."
the following sentence has a few errors. particularly a missing comma, as well as missing "do not" in the beginning. Also, I do understand that "wing" can mean to fly, although it is not a common usage, particularly not in this context. therefore I suggest it be changed to "fly"
"Regardless I believe there is anything we could do for you now, but let it be known; if ever you have need of my daughters and I, we will wing to your aid at a moment's notice."
I suggest it be changed to the following
"Regardless, I do not believe there is anything we could do for you now, but let it be known; if ever you have need of my daughters and I, we will fly to your aid at a moment's notice."