[0.4.28] Lyric typos

Ace Hangman

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[Talk > Ask about Kobolds]
'She pauses, her eyes drifting to one said and her mouth twisting in thought.'
Should be 'side' instead of 'said'.
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[Sex; Blow You]
She turns her to one side and sucks
Should be 'She turns her head to one side'
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'... as soon as your hands clamp down on her head, she's cumming again, harder this time, her her girl-cum ...'
Remove the extra 'her' at the end.
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[Sex; Tribadism]
'You tell her that that's perfect. And, predictably, her begins wagging again, even pressed underneath her own weight as it is.'
Should be 'her tail begins wagging' instead of 'her begins wagging'.
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[Announcing pregnancy]
I noted this a long time ago, but didn't get a screenshot (so might have been corrected). I haven't seen it since, but I think it might be because it only happens the first time she tells you that she's pregnant. I think the message is slightly different on subsequent announcements.
'You wait for Lyric to explain what she means. She closes her and takes a deep breath, ...'
There should be something after 'closes her' like 'mouth'.
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