[.0.4.28] Keros typos (Kitsune shrine)

Ace Hangman

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[Shrine; Petition? (Augest Mistress); Sex; Breeding (2nd time, if it matters)]
Surely you can faster and deeper than that, can't you?"
Should be 'go faster and deeper'.
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August Mistress at the Center of heaven
'Heaven' should be capitalized as a title.
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with a thump that her love-tunnel tries
Should be 'than' instead of 'that'
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And it feels like it's it's everything
There's an extra 'it's' in the sentence.
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It is really theft if you were going to give it to her in the first place?
Should be 'Is it' instead of 'It is'.
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you don't even recognize it as you cum immediately
Should be 'your cum' instead of 'you cum'
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August Mistress at the Center of Heaven slinks over to to your side and and gives you an animal lick
There's an extra 'and' before 'gives you an animal lick'.
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Ace Hangman

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[Shrine; Petition? (August Mistress); Maidens 4Sum]
Not a typo, but in the 2nd page, when Keros says:
"Well then, there's nothing holding us back, is there?"
That ends the page and requires clicking Next. This doesn't go to the next page, but instead adds the rest of the scene to the current page. This might be intentional, but it's not something that normally happens and makes it hard to find the spot you were reading at before continuing.
Obviously there should be a space between the two sentences, but I think that's because it should be two different pages.

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"You're such a generous and considerable person;
I believe 'considerate' is the intended context here, though the champ is quite considerable.
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Let's see what you're capable of, then.Are you potent enough
Should be a space after 'then.'
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