[0.4.10] Various typos

[Burnerbro]

Playing the standalone Windows version of the game.

1) When doing a neck tattoo at Aurera & Claire's:

You crane your head up and wait while she wipes your neck down carefully, making sure there are no abrasions or scratches already pleasant.

'present'

2) The Appearance screen after you get a chest tattoo:

You have two tattooedmounds, capped with one 0.4-inch nipple each. The average-sized areolae are pink. You could easily fill a DD bra. Across your melon is a tattoo of a runes.

missing space; singular breast parser instead of plural; nix 'a' or change into 'a set'.

 

[sargentmayhem]

Playing the standalone windows, v 4.10

Spoiler: Kasyrra romance

The new quest you get for talking to Kasyrra at her house is spelled wrong.

Redeption

'Redemption'

 

[Burnerbro]

3) Several typos in Aurera and Claire Body Worship sex scene:

By the time you reach them both, Claire's already straddling Claire on the bed, covering her neck and shoulders with kisses and nibbles while her pierced ears are rubbed and pinched

The second 'Claire' should be 'Aurora'.

Her fingers sink into your before you're pulled over to the other tit, encouraging you onward when your luscious lips brush against pebbled areola.

'you' OR missing a word after 'your'.

You push your rear into her waiting grasp, all butt impaling yourself on her fingers.

This might be a silly mode permutation, but more likely a typo.

4) A typo in Atugia's combat description when you are fighting her at the castle.

Unlike the throbbing markings on the cultists you've seen, these evoke a solid image, shining brightly enough to clear away the shadows cast by thecastle.

missing space

 

[Burnerbro]

5) A typo in Gianna Caravan's introduction:

And sure, get excited about the alcohol instead of my incredible works of alchemy instead.

nixing the secong instance of 'instead' seems most appropriate

6) Weird wording in Tamarind's About You talk:

Honestly I was never trained in the chef stuff, but I picked it up when I found out Svern was crap at eating food and Gia never packed anything edible.

Really feels like it shoud be 'cooking food' or something along those lines.

7) A typo in Tamarind's strapon sex scene:

She rummages around, some container clicks and shuts, and a pair of panties are haphazardly tossed in a random direction before she stands naked at the counter again.

'is'

 

[Burnerbro]

8) Ruined Kitsune Shrine, a word seems to be missing in the location description:

Rotting wooden beams jut from the ceiling bearing rusted hooks from which decorations might once have hung, but if there ever were such, Tira's fire has long since turned to dust.

"turned them to dust"

9) A typo in the scene of picking up Amulet of Transference for the first time.

If you pick them up, you're tying your fate to that to one of the Seven, be it for better or for worse.

'to' -> 'of'

10) Typos in the Use Vagina win sex scene for Ninian's hostile encounter

Relaxing in preparation for your fun, you look down down between your thighs and wait.

nix one 'down'

Your allies awaits!

seems to be parsing incorrectly for having two campanions with you.

 

[Burnerbro]

11) Not a typo, but still a minor issue IMO. The scene for collecting metal scrap from a battlefield in the Foothills doesn't have a bold portion for ease of skim reading.

After a quick search, you manage to collect a nice pile of metal scraps from all the broken weaponry laying about.

The whole sentence or some part of it should be highlightened in bold to be consistent with other scenes of the Champ finding and picking up some random stuff.

 

[sargentmayhem]

Missing space in Brienne's vaginal suckle tit scene

You're about to reply when she gazesdown at you and grins as she squeezes down on you hard enough to make you moan in pleasure.

 

[sargentmayhem]

Several instances in the the ending scene of the "Winter Wolf" quest where Gweyr's name is misspelled.

Gwyer chuckles dryly, although there's no humor in it, then turns back to Garret.
everyone gives Gwyer a wide berth as she strolls down the streets of Hawkethorne
Gwyer doesn't reply immediately, instead looking up at the sky
do what you said you're going to do, Gwyer... I shan't stop you."
This isn't just about him, or Gwyer, or Sanders.

Also one in Gweyr's chat scene where she discusses the champ's kids with Gwyn

which means that Grandma Gwyer has to be, I suppose