[0.4.1] Typos

chunk123

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Atuga stands protectively at attention behind her mistress
Atuga -> Atugia
(when baroness summons player to her castle after player completed enough quests)


"Rise, then, Champion of Hawkethor ne.
Hawkethor ne -> Hawkethorne
(when baroness names player Champion of Hawkethorne)


the spirits of the dead becoming restless and refusing the move on from the mortal plane
refusing the move on -> refusing to move on
(Codex: Spirits and Ghosts)


the daughter is by far a more balanced and suited for her father's position.
by far a more balanced -> by far more balanced
(Fort Marrok quest, reading gatekeeper's log)


Even the ones getting the stick joins in everyone else in laughing at their own misfortune
joins -> join
(Fort Marrok quest, reading gatekeeper's log)


We'll show them when it means to fight on our turf!
when -> what
(Fort Marrok quest)


The room is mostly large and featureless, with windows set high in northern wall;
in northern wall -> in the northern wall
(Fort Marrok quest)


the two leave the circle laughing as if nothing had ever had happened.
as if nothing had ever had happened -> as if nothing had ever happened
(Fort Marrok quest)


you manuveur in what little give this roaring avalanche of a woman offers you
manuveur -> maneuver
(Fort Marrok fuck Magna)


Having several kinds of fuck pounded out of you by a monsterous wolfess and surviving to tell the tale has to be some kind of acheivement.
monsterous -> monstrous
acheivement -> achievement
(Fort Marrok fuck Magna)


One by one, the spectral soldiers of fade away
soldiers of fade away -> soldiers fade away
(Fort Marrok quest, after making Jarl Gunvaldsen leave)


I learned more coming here than I'd even get from an old piece of shiny metal
even -> ever
(Fort Marrok quest, after making Jarl Gunvaldsen leave)


You've managed to talk down the Jarl's spirit and gotten him to realise he'd dead and should move on.
he'd dead -> he's dead
(Fort Marrok quest update text)


I'm not surprised, you look very warm,"
(missing quote at the start of this sentence)
(Meeting Vari)


Good to see you, Vari.
see you -> see you (double space)
(Meeting Vari convo)


You lay queen's jacket across the snowy ground behind you just in time
lay queen's -> lay the queen's
(Fuck Drider Queen vaginal)


The drider pushes her chest out and your squeeze back
your -> you
(Fuck Drider Queen vaginal)


surprised by just how pretty and pink her insides are despite her prediliction for buttstuff
prediliction -> predilection
(Sariel, eat ass)


She only stop when you put up your hands and tell her that you mean no harm.
stop -> stops
(Moth Girl in her camp)


you feel the gooey rod inside you start shaking, vibrating stronger and stronger as their mass slowly inflated it
inflated -> inflates
(Slime Siblings, win battle, herm fuck)


Instead the slim shushes and soothes you
slim -> slime
(Slime Siblings, win battle, herm fuck)


Jarl Gunvaldsen's name above his portrait should have a space, see attached file.


Drider Queen Vaginal option description text is wrong (lol). See attached file.
 

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chunk123

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Curly 'hair' spills down well past her shoulders and a little button nose and dark-gold eyes start forming on from the momentarily-blank face, followed by a smile on pillowy yellow lips.
forming on from the momentarily-blank face -> forming on the momentarily-blank face
(HoneyGolem in hive)


When the gem finally bumps up against the flesh of her tit, and you take your chance.
(remove the word 'and' OR remove the word 'When')
(Honey Golem get goo'd)


She grins wickedly as her gooey tendrils plunged towards your asshole.
plunged -> plunge
(lose to Honey Golem)


it's impossible to see anything at this point
it's -> It's (first word of sentence not capitalized)
(lose to Honey Golem)


It would be dazzling, if you weren't already enraptured by the ecstacy she brings you.
ecstacy -> ecstasy
(lose to Honey Golem)


from her own pussy’s sweetness Her lips meet yours again, but
sweetness Her -> sweetness. Her
(beat Nyzerrah, get fucked by ovi)


Kasyrra’sevil.
Kasyrra’sevil. -> Kasyrra’s evil.
(talking to Nyzerrah)


"Hmn... whatever this it's... unclean."
this it's -> this is it's
(Brother Sanders, cleanse core for hive quest)


She eyes you as you approach, drawn by the appetising smells and soft sizzling of dripping fat
(missing period at end of sentence)
(Arona's text in camp)


I'll be sure to get you some of my meat later.Like I said,
later.Like -> later. Like
(Arona's text in camp)


Youoverjoyed at the nice surprise when the witch's crimson skirts bulge
Youoverjoyed -> You're overjoyed
(defeat Tanuki Witch. Player has bimbo personality, might be relevant to get that text to display)


Just an inch or two, promise.It's not like I was going to
promise.It -> promise. It
(defeat Tanuki Witch)


for one last cumming hurrah. a thick strand forces one of
a -> A (capitalize start of sentence)
(Drider Queen titfuck)


You spank her again press your head into her a couple of inches
again press -> again and press
(Sariel fuck)


a constant babbling mixture of "Oh fuck," and "I'm cumming!"
(missing italics on I'm cumming!)
(Sariel fuck)


and pulling out a camouflage cloak to toss over her immobile form. .
(double period at end of sentence)
(Sariel fuck)
 

chunk123

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1. Kitsune Agent tease text (might be generic tease text idk) says "you sees", should be "You see" (attached screenshot)
2. Prince Nyze's attack text is missing a space (see attached screenshot)
3. When meeting the Honey Golem, the whip is floating in the pool, the player already has the key. The word "key" in the text should be replaced with "whip". (attached screenshot)
4. HoneyGolem above portrait should be Honey Golem (attached screenshot)
 

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