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<blockquote data-quote="WillowMelody" data-source="post: 357750" data-attributes="member: 38174"><p>Could only fit ten in a post.</p><p></p><p>Errant space.</p><p>[ATTACH=full]17097[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>than seems out of place.</p><p>[ATTACH=full]17098[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>Errant apostrophe, bib should probably be big, and no space after the comma.</p><p>[ATTACH=full]17099[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>This last one in the Zo Tranquility scene isn't necessarily a <em>typo</em>, more of just a suggested edit since it's technically "wrong."</p><p></p><p>"You weren't serious" and "about you being a shithead actually being an integral part of her personal training" are two dependent clauses that could be merged. Similarly, "but", "she asked", and "and you shall deliver." are all dependent clauses that could be grouped together as well. So it'd be "You weren't serious about you being a shithead actually being an integral part of her personal training, but she asked and you shall deliver."</p><p>[ATTACH=full]17100[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="WillowMelody, post: 357750, member: 38174"] Could only fit ten in a post. Errant space. [ATTACH type="full"]17097[/ATTACH] than seems out of place. [ATTACH type="full"]17098[/ATTACH] Errant apostrophe, bib should probably be big, and no space after the comma. [ATTACH type="full"]17099[/ATTACH] This last one in the Zo Tranquility scene isn't necessarily a [I]typo[/I], more of just a suggested edit since it's technically "wrong." "You weren't serious" and "about you being a shithead actually being an integral part of her personal training" are two dependent clauses that could be merged. Similarly, "but", "she asked", and "and you shall deliver." are all dependent clauses that could be grouped together as well. So it'd be "You weren't serious about you being a shithead actually being an integral part of her personal training, but she asked and you shall deliver." [ATTACH type="full"]17100[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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