[0.3.45] Assorted Typos

[WillowMelody]

New update, new thread of stuff.

Missing capitalization after beating Atugia when she attacks you in Hawkethorne.


Assume the "your" is missing here, found in the cock worship scene.

I assume the "spank her again" isn't supposed to be there in the fuck ass scene.


Nanked. Found it after making camp with Ahmri.

 

[WillowMelody]

Three more, all from the Quin Footjob scene.

 

[WillowMelody]

Last two for now.
Zo influence scene, I think me is supposed to be move?


Seems like a word's missing between ways and than, probably other.

 

[WillowMelody]

Found a couple more. Also started cropping the images since most of the screen is irrelevant.

When getting Zo's Influence ability, it should say silenced.


Apostrophe shouldn't be there in one of Zo's later tranquility scenes


Nareva's name is misspelled when she visits you about seeing the mander siblings again.


Two missing apostrophes when talking to Atugia about Etheryn and Quin's name has an extra n here and in no other menu, which is why I assume it's a mistake.


In Takahiro's sex menu, the tooltip just sort of ends. I assume it's supposed to say what you're riding him with, but I have a vagina and an ass so maybe that's causing an issue?


In the RideHim scene with Takahiro, "But I need to seek out all treasures... and take them. But maybe I keep you for myself, huh?" Should be italics, as should "Fuck me,". Also There's no space between the two.


Should be boulder. (I'm 90% sure this was in the Get Ridden scene while she was pregnant, but I forgot to mark the scene unfortunately).


Missing space when you Say Nothing to Kinu eating peaches.


Errant apostrophe when Kinu catches Aya stealing food.


Dealt.

 

[WillowMelody]

Could only fit ten in a post.

Errant space.


than seems out of place.


Errant apostrophe, bib should probably be big, and no space after the comma.


This last one in the Zo Tranquility scene isn't necessarily a typo, more of just a suggested edit since it's technically "wrong."

"You weren't serious" and "about you being a shithead actually being an integral part of her personal training" are two dependent clauses that could be merged. Similarly, "but", "she asked", and "and you shall deliver." are all dependent clauses that could be grouped together as well. So it'd be "You weren't serious about you being a shithead actually being an integral part of her personal training, but she asked and you shall deliver."