During said talk a bit of what Carmen says is missing some italics
And after accepting her offer there's a space in Hawkethorne's name
"So I heard. A rider from the Winter City came down some time ago with the news. Another reason why I knew you were the one. If you can save a city, surely this little thorpe should be no trouble. Just a few thousand people, huddled behind their walls as the darkness encroaches." Nobody else has stood up for the people of Hawkethorne so courageously. Not Garth or his bloodthirsty family, not Brother Sanders in his old age, and certainly not me, curse my pacifism. You have already been their shield, their avenging hero. I only wish to make it official — to let you proudly carry the hopes and dreams of this little barony on your shoulders, and to know that we all stand behind you. That is what I wish to give you."
And after accepting her offer there's a space in Hawkethorne's name
The sword moves from one shoulder to the other as she speaks, before withdrawing at 'last.' Carmen smiles down at you, resting the blade's tip between her feet. "Rise, then, Champion of Hawkethor ne. I bid you go now and serve the realm as you have been — protect us all from the demons at our doorstep."