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<blockquote data-quote="CrackSpaniel" data-source="post: 347019" data-attributes="member: 37273"><p>(Liaden)(Hive)</p><p></p><p>"To make sure this hive is irreparable cursed2</p><p>irreparable -> irreparably</p><p></p><p>"Laden is the first to come up for air"</p><p>Laden -> Liaden</p><p></p><p>"The girls eagerly your depths with playfully little circles punctuated by knuckle-deep thrusts"</p><p>They eagerly _____ your depths</p><p></p><p>"Even still, most of yyour attention remains firmly fixated"</p><p>Even still -> Even so / Still</p><p></p><p>"When the last of them has entered you, packing your belly so full that you can feel individual eggs pressing out against your [pc.skinFurScales]"</p><p>I suggest 'When the last of them has entered you, your belly is so full[...]' or 'Finally, the last of them enters you, packing your belly so full[...]'</p><p></p><p>"their bimbofied assets keep getting their way as because of how sticky they are"</p><p>getting their way -> getting in their way</p><p></p><p>"Okay, let's get you rolled over so you can take my stingy-cock and deep."</p><p>and -> in</p><p></p><p>"sloshing around like her own persona condom"</p><p>persona -> personal</p><p></p><p>redress -> to rectify or put right</p><p>re-dress -> to dress someone or something again</p><p>It's in this scene, but there are thirty odd other instances in the game</p><p></p><p>"Smooth, perfectly-manicured black nails build into chitin-layered fingers"</p><p>build -> built</p><p></p><p>"Kind've pretty still though. Want it?"</p><p>I suggest 'Still kind've pretty, though. Want it?'</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="CrackSpaniel, post: 347019, member: 37273"] (Liaden)(Hive) "To make sure this hive is irreparable cursed2 irreparable -> irreparably "Laden is the first to come up for air" Laden -> Liaden "The girls eagerly your depths with playfully little circles punctuated by knuckle-deep thrusts" They eagerly _____ your depths "Even still, most of yyour attention remains firmly fixated" Even still -> Even so / Still "When the last of them has entered you, packing your belly so full that you can feel individual eggs pressing out against your [pc.skinFurScales]" I suggest 'When the last of them has entered you, your belly is so full[...]' or 'Finally, the last of them enters you, packing your belly so full[...]' "their bimbofied assets keep getting their way as because of how sticky they are" getting their way -> getting in their way "Okay, let's get you rolled over so you can take my stingy-cock and deep." and -> in "sloshing around like her own persona condom" persona -> personal redress -> to rectify or put right re-dress -> to dress someone or something again It's in this scene, but there are thirty odd other instances in the game "Smooth, perfectly-manicured black nails build into chitin-layered fingers" build -> built "Kind've pretty still though. Want it?" I suggest 'Still kind've pretty, though. Want it?' [/QUOTE]
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