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[0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions
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<blockquote data-quote="CrackSpaniel" data-source="post: 347016" data-attributes="member: 37273"><p>(Lyla)</p><p></p><p>"their glister managing to dodge the thick trunk of trees"</p><p>trunk -> trunks</p><p></p><p>"Since, for all you know, it could all be a trap."</p><p>Delete the second all.</p><p></p><p>"you say, rising your arms to show your intentions."</p><p>rising -> raising</p><p></p><p>"You can see remains of her last night campfire"</p><p>I suggest 'You can see remains of her campfire from last night' or 'You can see remains of last night's campfire'</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="CrackSpaniel, post: 347016, member: 37273"] (Lyla) "their glister managing to dodge the thick trunk of trees" trunk -> trunks "Since, for all you know, it could all be a trap." Delete the second all. "you say, rising your arms to show your intentions." rising -> raising "You can see remains of her last night campfire" I suggest 'You can see remains of her campfire from last night' or 'You can see remains of last night's campfire' [/QUOTE]
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