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<blockquote data-quote="CrackSpaniel" data-source="post: 347401" data-attributes="member: 37273"><p>(Kitsune Den)</p><p>In lieu of saving space, Azami and her subordinates have eschewed futons in lieu of hammocks</p><p>In lieu of -> By way of OR In lieu of saving space -> To save space</p><p></p><p>The concierge herself has little need of personal possessions, but those of her subordinates are visible in their own patches of personal space</p><p>personal possessions -> possessions</p><p></p><p>this lot doesn't get too used to sleeping with a roof under their heads.</p><p>under -> over</p><p></p><p></p><p>The same warm radiance of the tree's insides pervades this vast chamber, too, bringing sunlight to those who need it</p><p>~Has an extra space at the end</p><p></p><p></p><p>Perhaps it's the sight of root vegetables in neat, raised rows, or the rustling of leaves in the breeze, or maybe it's the constant scent of the tree's sap.</p><p>~It is perhaps because of those things that... what, exactly?</p><p></p><p></p><p>Beds of delicate pink and white flowers dot the surroundings amidst vibrant green grass</p><p>~The day variation of the sentence before this has an extra space</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="CrackSpaniel, post: 347401, member: 37273"] (Kitsune Den) In lieu of saving space, Azami and her subordinates have eschewed futons in lieu of hammocks In lieu of -> By way of OR In lieu of saving space -> To save space The concierge herself has little need of personal possessions, but those of her subordinates are visible in their own patches of personal space personal possessions -> possessions this lot doesn't get too used to sleeping with a roof under their heads. under -> over The same warm radiance of the tree's insides pervades this vast chamber, too, bringing sunlight to those who need it ~Has an extra space at the end Perhaps it's the sight of root vegetables in neat, raised rows, or the rustling of leaves in the breeze, or maybe it's the constant scent of the tree's sap. ~It is perhaps because of those things that... what, exactly? Beds of delicate pink and white flowers dot the surroundings amidst vibrant green grass ~The day variation of the sentence before this has an extra space [/QUOTE]
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