[0.3.30] General list of spelling and grammar errors

[TKOdarkshadow]

This is from one of Miko's scenes, it should be "how" instead of "low."

"Absolutely nothing spills back out of Miko like you half-expected it might, but judging by the greedy look she's giving you, there's little doubt that she's very much aware of just low enormous the freshly-dumped load inside of her has to be. Your faces are already so close together, and it's a small matter for her to work one of her tails over to caress your cheek, rubbing back and forth affectionately while she gives you a little grin, ears wiggling."

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Kohaku scene, "you" instead of "your."

"Sweat beads on your bodies, mixing with other, more sexual fluids as continue railing Kohaku from behind in this perverse, animalistic fashion. Kohaku's ears are pressed flat against her head and so are yours; she's openly biting her pillow at this point, threatening to rip the fabric with her pointed teeth. Well, better the pillow than her tongue. At this point, it's Kohaku who's driving the act more than you are, her hunger welling up in her belly and overflowing, her hips pulling away from your and driving back down to impale herself upon your length."

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene as above, "On" instead of "One."

"One one hand, you wouldn't have expected a merchant to be this easily overwhelmed mentally, on the other hand, you did just claim her virginity while hitting all her weak spots. It's interesting to see how vulnerable Kohaku can be when she's not hiding behind one of her glamours or even her salesman's face. Given the situation, maybe it's best to cuddle a bit until her drowsiness and exhaustion take her. You don't want Kohaku's memories of her first time being that of a fuck-and-run..."

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Mai scene, should be a space between "towards" and "your."

Like it or not, one has to admit that Mai's feet are delicately formed. They're not weak by any stretch of the imagination, but it's more the strength of a dancer or gymnast than that of the hearty and hale — the toes are flexible, the arches of her feet high, and of course, they're free of pits and calluses that accompany everyday manual labor. Whatever else might be said of them, it's clear that Mai at least takes care of her feet; from arch to sole to toe to calf, they're free of even a single blemish. Planting her hands on the edge of the donation box, Mai raises one foot and gestures for you to sit on the ground before her, a request that you comply with soon enough. She looks thoughtful for a moment, licking her lips, then sets down her pipe on the altar and raises a foot towardsyour half-hard prick, giving the tip the briefest of nudges of her big toe. The contact with her slender legs is but a split second, yet the jolt of cold heat that races down the rod of cockmeat is undeniable. One heartbeat, two heartbeats, and then you're swiftly on the way to being fully erect, your shaft steadily twitching as arousal flows into it. That's all Mai uses — she rubs her big toe in a half-circle back and forth about the circumference of your tip, caressing the underside and flicking it up and down. Every so often, the temptress of a shrine maiden lifts the bottom of her toe to press directly upon your cumslit, teasing the sensitive flesh with a back-and-forth rotation.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene as above, "playful" instead of "plainful."

"With that, Mai flips the soles of her feet inwards, sandwiching your cockmeat between the balls of her feet. She squeezes you in between her feet, steadily applying more pressure on your animal-endowment until you openly gasp, your pulse racing against her soles. Once she's satisfied, Mai rolls her feet up, moving from the balls of her feet to the arches, then following that up by rotating her ankles, giving the insistent pressure she's applying a twisting sensation to it. It's in this manner that she works the length of your cock from front to knot and back again, even stopping for a bit at your bulging knot to squeeze the bulging meat between the arches of her feet and give it some love before returning to the fore again. You begin to pant, the pressure of Mai's delicate feet and the dangerous tickle of her naughty toes starting to overwhelm you as sharp tingles of plainful excitement course through your cockmeat and into your hips. You're starting to drool from your tip openly now, forming a small puddle of alabaster on the shrine flooring while Mai picks up her pace again; she's vigorously and openly jerking you off at this point, pumping you up and down with her feet while she maintains that same small smile and arched eyebrow at your particular predicament. Droplets of cum fly into the air as you involuntary start to move your hips back and forth, trying to match Mai's movements as the temptress of a shrine maiden brings you closer and closer to the edge with just her feet."

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Kurako scene, "encumbering" instead of "encumering."

"Running their natural course, Kura's ministrations carry her to your teeming nutsack. Unhesitant velvet caresses from both hand and tongue land on your scaly 'nads, coating the virile horizons in sex-slime. "It feels... so full... so swollen," she murmurs, voice vibrating through your spunk-generator. Your brimming testicles swell to the attention either way, gradually quaking for her devoted scrotum-suckling, encumering you with a burdensome load of jism. Seed-laden nutflesh squishes and squirms to the back-and-forth undulations of her jewel-mopping maw-muscle. "Your balls taste so good..." She locks her lips to one, loudly kissing it and then its twin, inhaling so hard that you nearly become an organic bar tap. "...Maybe better than this," she smirks, pecking your penis, positioned between her fluffy ears."

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene as above, "saliva" instead of "slaver."

"A lurid suck for air drowns her in your rich ballmusk. Tugging nibbles energized by acceptance of one's place pull on your sack. Slow slurps and long, doggish licks lift and lower your slippery spheres. When one is held aloft, the other presses into her nose, transmitting a savage masculine scent throughout her body. The swollen circumference of your rolling, churning balls seethes with gurgling fluid, not a crease to be found in the foray across their lust-plumped exteriors. Your foxy nutslut enjoys the challenge presented by your hefty, weighty nut. The cheek-sized ball is too large to fit into her mouth, but still she tries, swabbing its diameter, going with the grain. It's not long before it's shining in slaver."

It popped up another time, so I was curious what slaver exactly meant, if anyone knows.

"Settling into a natural facefucking pace is easy. Your fingers stabilize her head while you screw her slaver-lacquered lips vigorously. It makes your groin buzz so hotly when you strain to fit her around another unsubtle stretch of prickmeat. You're using her. Your better nature is still there, keeping you from doing anything too rough, but her slutty side is pushing that out with every loud slurp, goading you into forgetting about that and railing her cock-socket of a face."

 

[Alypia]

Same scene as above, saliva instead of slaver.

A lurid suck for air drowns her in your rich ballmusk. Tugging nibbles energized by acceptance of one's place pull on your sack. Slow slurps and long, doggish licks lift and lower your slippery spheres. When one is held aloft, the other presses into her nose, transmitting a savage masculine scent throughout her body. The swollen circumference of your rolling, churning balls seethes with gurgling fluid, not a crease to be found in the foray across their lust-plumped exteriors. Your foxy nutslut enjoys the challenge presented by your hefty, weighty nut. The cheek-sized ball is too large to fit into her mouth, but still she tries, swabbing its diameter, going with the grain. It's not long before it's shining in slaver.

This is technically correct as-is. "Slaver" is an archaic and somewhat purple way to refer to saliva, which is still preserved in the more commonly used word "slavering" (which means "drooling"). You can tell that the writer knew that because they said "shining in slaver"; if they had meant saliva, they would've used "shining with" instead. (That said, "with" might be better anyway.)

Thanks for finding the other stuff, though!

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene as above, unneeded space between word and punctuation.

"Prickling tingles poke and prod somewhere behind your own stomach. The world darkens around you as sensations become flashes of pinkish, purplish, and black-spotted pleasure. You're only vaguely aware of how lush every face-mashing stroke becomes. Kura rocks against your body, panting helplessly to the frenzied pace of your pistoning hips. Orgasmic surge is another contraction away. Totally blissed out, your body takes the lead, buffeting the frozen fox's facial fuckhole until your sheath is crinkling around her nose, burning the image of her sexual sopor into your mind . Another wet 'twap', and-"

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

This is technically correct as-is. "Slaver" is an archaic and somewhat purple way to refer to saliva, which is still preserved in the more commonly used word "slavering" (which means "drooling"). You can tell that the writer knew that because they said "shining in slaver"; if they had meant saliva, they would've used "shining with" instead.

Thanks for finding the other stuff, though!

Of course, I was just reading through old stuff I saved since I just read all the gameplay stuff at once and then all the lewd stuff afterward. Figured I may as well try to help the game. Thanks for explaining it though, I wasn't 100% on it. lol

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Alarune scene, "price-like" instead of "pricklike."

"There's an unconscious — almost shy — wiggle to the bushel of pricklike tentacles that writhe around the Alraune Mother, and you're pretty sure you want them buried to the limit in your cunt and bottom. "

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, "feet" instead of "foot."

"That initial moment of true penetration is a brutal combination of ecstasy and the very edges of pain. First is your waiting womanhood; with your body held practically gaping and ready it's impossible to clench against the mass forcing its way into your body. A deep moan works its way out of you and into the Alraune's mouth, and she all but drinks you in as several foot of cockvine squirms and crawls its way through your cunt and pushes right past your cervix to the womb waiting behind. The aphrodisiacs that coat the tentacular fuck-meat are liberally applied to every juicy inch of your womanhood, until there's an undeniable itch that craves to be scratched. Your asshole clenches in vain; there's already so much aphrodisiac lubing up the inches-thick coil of green tentacle that you can't deny entry once your button-hole is parted."

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, "have" instead of "has."

Sadly it's hard to see much with so many tentacles swarming you, and the overinflated tits of the Alraune Mother in your face. Not that you needed any further stimulation; as though responding to this moment of distracting the tentacles in your backdoor begin to uncoil and spread themselves until your asshole is gaping to the muggy air. By this point there's so much nectar in your ass that it drools from your abused ring, but the aphrodisiacs that've been absorbed by your bowels has what would otherwise be an unpleasant sensation sending shocks of orgasmic pleasure through you.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, meters instead of metre.

Although your asshole seemed to be getting most of the attention before, now whatever breeding instinct exists in these vines has them wholly devoted to your womanhood. Finally the impossible mass of tentacles in your asshole slide out (running metres of fuckmeat across your prostate for good measure) and leave your abused backdoor gaping like a wanton lover's mouth. Two Alraune daughters take their place, tonguing your gaping ring while they're milked by their sisters. There's suddenly a lot more room in your body for the tentacles fucking your sloppy box. Even as the great weight in your bowels has subsided and allowed your stomach to deflate, even more begin to drill your twat. Your cervix has been spread open by tentacles for the entirety of your tumble with this verdant beast, and you're only able to squirt fem-cum onto them as they push in to join the rest in your womb.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, traveling instead of travelling.

You can feel it, even before a glance down actually allows you to see it. Spherical knots seem to be travelling down the lengths of every vine that's buried in your pussy, before they come to an abrupt halt against the overstuffed lips of your juice-drooling pussy. The Alraune Mother whimpers and moans as she's backed up, humping her breeder-hips against your ass as though she could force the burgeoning seeds past the walls of your cunt and into you. "Oh no! You need more!" She whines. More tentacles lift you up by your thighs until your twat is at eye-level with her. The daughters that had been toying with you all moan and complain as you're taken out of their reach, but instead they settle for scooping up the sexual slurry in the flower's base and masturbating themselves with it. She wraps her lips around the sensitive head of your now-revealed dick. Without vines wrapped around your dick the scalding air feels chill, but that doesn't last once she's sucking your prick into her mouth until her nose is mashed up against your pubic bone and her tongue is sneaking around your ballsack to tongue your clit.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, traveling instead of travelling.

Your eyes roll back yet again and white-hot pleasure drowns any thoughts in your brain. You cum once more, and the nervous spasms of your orgasmic cunt-walls apparently give the tentacles a little extra give. You'd already been moaning as you came, but now screams of unbelievable need rip their way out of you until they're echoing in the glade. Your cunt stretches around a dozen foreign intruders, like a gaggle of cock-knots locking with you. Except instead of keep you held up against the breeding vine-cocks those knots just keep on travelling, until they're pushing past your cervix. Tentacle cumslits part, and your womb is suddenly bathed in a bed of nectar that thick Alraune-seeds plop out into.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Meira scene, should be "beneath, your"

Given how strong Meira's ball-musk is, especially when combined with the scent of her pussy beneath,you body's already reacting eagerly to the heady aroma of futa 'nuki. Already half-hard, your lucky love-meat surges to full mast as Meira gives its very tip a lick, her tongue teasing your cumslit with a daub and simple swirl. Sucking on her tongue, the 'nuki witch draws back and makes a show of thinking as she strokes you off, contemplating your flavor.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, marvelous instead of marvellous

You acquiesce, and Meira starts by stroking the tip of your shaft with a hand, while the other massages its length, running up and down across veins and ridges. Her trained motions and feather-light touch attest to the fact that she's probably very, very familiar with stroking off huge cocks... like it or not, your eyes flutter shut and you moan, deep and drawn-out, rich in lust and longing. Meira truly has such marvellous hands.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, should be "her mouth"

At long last, Meira deems you ready. She lets her tongue loll out of her mouth, the small, rough thing gently lapping along the underside of your shaft all the way from base to tip. This happens for several passes, until she finally opens mouth impossibly wide and takes you inside her maw. Finally, the payoff after all that foreplay — warm wetness creeps slowly down your doggie-dong, tingles racing outwards from where Meira's lips meet cockflesh. Your 'nuki paramour's throat seems to stretch outwards under your impressive length as she takes you in, confidently gulping down your cock without missing a beat.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Gwyn scene, attention instead of attentions

Now in your arms, your slutty puppymom lets out a needy whine and starts pawing at your witch's corset. You chuckle — all in good time, now. Stepping back with Gwyn in tow, you make sure the door is both latched and barred, then turn your attentions to the task of unwrapping the prize that's fallen into your lap. A heavy scent rises from Gwyn's fur, filling your nose — you don't recognize the scent, but the heavy muskiness is quite arousing in its own right.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, "a head start"

You thrust and thrust away, Gwyn's firm, plump breasts swinging under her body. With how ginormous your seam-shredding, canine cock is, Gwyn's puppy-hole is stretched to gaping just to be able to fit your girth, and a blatant phallic bulge appears in your breeding bitch's lower tummy, rising and falling in time with the movements of your hips. You're going to give your seed every inch of head start it can get in order to end up with all the puppies you can put in Gwyn from your first good fucking.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, "anymore"

Poor Gwyn can't take it any more. The sheer stimulation sends the sexy canine over the edge and she releases a barking cry of ecstasy, her pussy squeezing and milking your bestial shaft as her entire body shakes with orgasm. Her quivering hand-paws scrabble at the kitchen floor, her claws leaving faint scuff marks where they land as she yelps and whines and begs you to fill her womb.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, "onto"

Keeping a firm grip on her ass, you pound your hips against her sexy rear as you spurt your thick load into her, thoroughly breeding the nursery matron while canine juices soak your crotch. Your large load causes Gwyn's belly to grow rounded and slosh a little with the sound of your seed whenever she moves. Once you're done, she rises slowly and staggers back to the wall while happily stroking her rounded belly, plopping down into her ass and making happy husky noises in the back of her throat.

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Gwyn scene, "that aren't"

Hmm. Well, she can keep them on if she wants. There's a certain something or the other about a lupine lady with nothing on save for her gloves... that, and you're raring to go already. Who cares about some silly gloves that're not even in the way anyway?

 

[TKOdarkshadow]

Same scene, reveling

Considering the energy you're pouring into this, Gwyn lasts surprisingly long — the girl has a good constitution, after all. But even she has her limits, and when she finally leaps over the brink of climax, the nursery matron cries out for you to tie her, something you're only more than willing to do as you feel your own orgasm mounting. Her body is as desperate as she is, her inner walls clenching and squeezing about your beast-cock as you drive your knot into her and feel it fill her nicely. Poor Gwyn yelps and barks like a whore as you pump your seed into her, revelling in the sheer sensation of having hot, slippery, sticky man-juice between her legs — something she'll never get tired of. A happy, fulfilled smile forms unthinkingly on the nursery matron's lips as her body finally gets what it wants, and she sags onto the kitchen table with an exhausted sigh.