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Like title says, Karithea's first birth ever if in Wayfort will show the scene for every birth after rather than the first pups birth.

I'm playing a virgin character but now I have encountered an extreme roadblock. If I sleep at the frost hound, Atugia appears and she fingers my character and then boom, no longer a virgin. I really really really don't think this is correct, it has to be a bug right? "As you drift off into the...

This one's not so much a typo as a bit of an oddity - the narration uses the British spelling of gray, then the American a few paragraphs later. This should say "cradling the girl's head," not "hand." There's also a slight inconsistency with describing his fur as white when it was described...

A couple typos when Miera is getting inspected by Astrida: Then there's the matter of be being particularly adept as transmutation When rubbing her tummy when she's visibly pregnant: "You stay any longer, Zach, and I might not be responsible for what I do next. It's bad enough that Senja...

Not sure if this is really a bug or just an oversight on the part of Tobs, but it's a pretty obvious one if so. Regardless, my character hasn't met Gwyn's mother yet, so she has no business measuring the distance from apple to tree.

I noticed that upon having six kits, the text indicates that her body is better able to make use of your virility to grow her kits. However, it appears the opposite is true, as initially my character is advancing her about two trimesters before the improvement, then only about a single trimester...

The message for joining the Liv dungeon. Granted, this probably isn't super important since most people shouldn't see it 1. Should be 'King's Gate'. Encounter with Ylvid 2. Should be 'just a cape' 3. Should be 'muscle's' or 'muscle is' instead of 'muscles's' 4. Should be 'kind of'...

Uses the text for Pummel, which makes using the ability hilarious 'cause it seems like you're repeatedly hip checking the enemy but sexily

Yeah, yeah. I misspelled 'Sandre' in the title. I can't change it now and I don't want to repost this. Talk > Cock Removal > Lose Pathetically First, is it intended for you to cum your soul out at any level of corruption. I literally had 1 Corruption. Anyway: 1. Remove the extra space. 2...

Scene when she ask for fuck. Missed opening quotation mark and italic there. Double "as you" in the sex scene (last screen) That scene, despite the description and Kiyoko comments, don't give even basic Kitsune debuff :P

Probably just copy pasted code, but figured it was worth mentioning.

I'm sure it's obvious but this scene is when you choose to have a meal with her, but anyway there's some redundant text during it. I've only seen the scene with her trapped inside the Astral Plane so I'm not sure if it exists outside of it, also she was not pregnant at the time not sure if that...