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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    I will be reviewing all Spelling, Grammar, and Sentence Formatting and will post my findings and Suggestions Here in this Thread. My first finding is while talking to Carmen about recruiting Atugia, and when referring to Carmen, She is referred to as The Baroness Multiple Times in the same...
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    In Progress [0.7.18] Intro Scene Typos

    This one's not so much a typo as a bit of an oddity - the narration uses the British spelling of gray, then the American a few paragraphs later. This should say "cradling the girl's head," not "hand." There's also a slight inconsistency with describing his fur as white when it was described...
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    In Progress Miera Typos

    A couple typos when Miera is getting inspected by Astrida: Then there's the matter of be being particularly adept as transmutation When rubbing her tummy when she's visibly pregnant: "You stay any longer, Zach, and I might not be responsible for what I do next. It's bad enough that Senja...
  4. Ace Hangman

    In Progress [0.7.15] Livrea Quest typos

    The message for joining the Liv dungeon. Granted, this probably isn't super important since most people shouldn't see it 1. Should be 'King's Gate'. Encounter with Ylvid 2. Should be 'just a cape' 3. Should be 'muscle's' or 'muscle is' instead of 'muscles's' 4. Should be 'kind of'...
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    In Progress Superfreq's typos list for 0.7.12

    I'll be adding to this until the next public patch comes out, so please watch for more posts. Nina's Vision Quest part 1 sex with Ma Siorc's son, page 1 //The "with" should be an "of" and "helpless" should be "helplessly". Gritting sharp teeth, Gran saws his cock back and forth inside of you...
  6. Ace Hangman

    In Progress [0.6.35] Sandra & Caera typos

    Yeah, yeah. I misspelled 'Sandre' in the title. I can't change it now and I don't want to repost this. Talk > Cock Removal > Lose Pathetically First, is it intended for you to cum your soul out at any level of corruption. I literally had 1 Corruption. Anyway: 1. Remove the extra space. 2...
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    In Progress Typos

    I'm planning on using this thread to keep track of the typos I encounter as I play. I will try to be as specific as possible and include game versions: CoC II 0.6.25: Kasyrra Suck Off: "Good, good," Kasyrra moans, gently stroking your short hair, guiding you forward. You open your mouth wide...
  8. WillowMelody

    In Progress [0.3.45] Zo Tranquility Scene Weirdness

    Was going through Zo's content, found two typos (submitted elsewhere), got the sex scene, then went back to the training scenes. When I did the first Tranquility scene, instead of it being pretty innocent like the last time I saw it (hadn't had sex yet), it was odd. The section above the line...