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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    I will be reviewing all Spelling, Grammar, and Sentence Formatting and will post my findings and Suggestions Here in this Thread. My first finding is while talking to Carmen about recruiting Atugia, and when referring to Carmen, She is referred to as The Baroness Multiple Times in the same...
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    In Progress [0.7.18] Intro Scene Typos

    This one's not so much a typo as a bit of an oddity - the narration uses the British spelling of gray, then the American a few paragraphs later. This should say "cradling the girl's head," not "hand." There's also a slight inconsistency with describing his fur as white when it was described...
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    In Progress Miera Typos

    A couple typos when Miera is getting inspected by Astrida: Then there's the matter of be being particularly adept as transmutation When rubbing her tummy when she's visibly pregnant: "You stay any longer, Zach, and I might not be responsible for what I do next. It's bad enough that Senja...
  4. Ace Hangman

    In Progress [0.7.15] Livrea Quest typos

    The message for joining the Liv dungeon. Granted, this probably isn't super important since most people shouldn't see it 1. Should be 'King's Gate'. Encounter with Ylvid 2. Should be 'just a cape' 3. Should be 'muscle's' or 'muscle is' instead of 'muscles's' 4. Should be 'kind of'...
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    In Progress Superfreq's typos list for 0.7.12

    I'll be adding to this until the next public patch comes out, so please watch for more posts. Nina's Vision Quest part 1 sex with Ma Siorc's son, page 1 //The "with" should be an "of" and "helpless" should be "helplessly". Gritting sharp teeth, Gran saws his cock back and forth inside of you...
  6. Ace Hangman

    In Progress [0.6.35] Sandra & Caera typos

    Yeah, yeah. I misspelled 'Sandre' in the title. I can't change it now and I don't want to repost this. Talk > Cock Removal > Lose Pathetically First, is it intended for you to cum your soul out at any level of corruption. I literally had 1 Corruption. Anyway: 1. Remove the extra space. 2...
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    In Progress Typos

    I'm planning on using this thread to keep track of the typos I encounter as I play. I will try to be as specific as possible and include game versions: CoC II 0.6.25: Kasyrra Suck Off: "Good, good," Kasyrra moans, gently stroking your short hair, guiding you forward. You open your mouth wide...
  8. WillowMelody

    In Progress [0.3.45] Zo Tranquility Scene Weirdness

    Was going through Zo's content, found two typos (submitted elsewhere), got the sex scene, then went back to the training scenes. When I did the first Tranquility scene, instead of it being pretty innocent like the last time I saw it (hadn't had sex yet), it was odd. The section above the line...
  9. GEESE

    In Progress [0.3.37] Shield of Brawn triggering off companions?

    needed to adjust my characters masculinity, so I slapped on the brawn shield and went with just cait to get beat up in the glacier for a bit, and... unedited game, obv. though I'm curious to look in an editor to see if it actually did make cait more manly somehow. (also just noticed, looks...
  10. Tide Hunter

    In Progress [0.3.34] Champion thinks Lyric stole electrum before catching Lyric

    Basically: Doing the metabolism talk with Lyric, without yet having done the scene where Lyric gets caught eating electrum, the text seems to think that my Champ did catch Lyric eating electrum already. Browser is Firefox, though I doubt it impacts this. In addition to that, when doing the...
  11. DaisukeKaiser

    In Progress 0.3.29 Kiyoko and Inarizushi

    I'm sure it's obvious but this scene is when you choose to have a meal with her, but anyway there's some redundant text during it. I've only seen the scene with her trapped inside the Astral Plane so I'm not sure if it exists outside of it, also she was not pregnant at the time not sure if that...
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    In Progress Shield of Brawn Reduces Companion Femininity, Ostensibly

    See title. Since the Shield of Brawn has been equipped in my playthrough, companions have had combat text expressing dropping femininity when they prevent crits. I have no idea if this means anything for their actual statistics, but even if it doesn't (which seems likely), the text probably...
  13. IraMorti

    In Progress Azyrran Rough with Me scene v 0.3.3

    I don't know if this is a bug or just an oversight, but in the Rough with Me scene, it causes a Hornet pregnancy even though the scene itself states that the eggs are unfertilized.