grammer

She says "Once they realized I wasn't some kind undead wraith-monster I think they just want someone a little more relatable than Carmen to talk to". It would read better as ""Once they realized I wasn't some kind of undead wraith-monster I think they just wanted someone a little more relatable...

"you" should be "your"

Description: In the Sub option for the Anno/Kase ship three way, there is a redundancy in terms used in the scene. Scene By: William ... Visceral thrills run through your doggie-dong watching this like some pervy neighbor, erecting it to full tumescence, to say nothing of your terran vagina...