grammar

I will be reviewing all Spelling, Grammar, and Sentence Formatting and will post my findings and Suggestions Here in this Thread. My first finding is while talking to Carmen about recruiting Atugia, and when referring to Carmen, She is referred to as The Baroness Multiple Times in the same...

Alright, time to stop coasting off existing threads, 4 pages is a bit much, and I'm not as frequent a poster. Briefpart here in the Caesselian codex entry where the Slyveren are referred as Slyvereen with two "e"s.

A list for the devs of whatever text that may need some form of correction discovered by players because they are only human and they are bound to make mistakes so why not give them a hand in finding them.

"you" should be "your"

When you ask Nyze for sex after completing the Hornet Hive, there's this little typo. Not a big deal, just pointing it out.

During a scene where your character asks to be bred by Lady Evergreen, there is a large section of text that stays Italicized, even though it's not spoken. Looks like a simple error when the scene was written. Firefox 91.8.0esr No F12 issues. Pic below.