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This chapter was short, but one of the better, the story begins to show more and the scenes was interesting, also the adult one, good to see at the end a scene between Addine and Jonathan

I read you are waiting GB approve your work, I hope you have found him, otherwise I don't know when he will be back for giving or negating his approval. I haven't already tried the game, but probably the face of Becky and Melissa need a bit of work, now Melissa seems more innocent than Becky...

The first 2 chapters could be way better, but I can understand because this won't happen, so the true story begin in chapter 3 and it's a great chapter, it is visible that Natali has done a noteworthy job, the ball probably needed much time, complex as how was, only the sex scenes are a bit...

You have reason, I speak how your game could be a delusion, but for now you have continually improved it and deserve more time before judging, surely it's better than many and not bad, I think that some could even find it one of the better games on Patreon. Sorry for the words.

Glad to hear you want to give more background and extend the scenes, your game could become a very surprise. I wasn't sure to write, because my opinion could seem a bit biased, because I have already written that I searched adult scene in a game, but it was with the better intentions, you are a...

I have played the game and I'm a bit challenged, the game is surely better than the original and the story more captivating. You have also added a bit in the adult zone, the scenes "interrupted" or with "teasing" are well done, but when we arrive at the parts where there is the true action...

I don't think that the images seems underage, not even the sister that from aspect I would have thought of the same age of Emma. If the author hasn't said the age, the main characters could have 19 years and the sister 18, if one is born in march and another in October you would say 2 years...

I have read that you want to add a naughty sidequest in chapter 2, an experience that could be repeated if it's liked. This can be an interesting choice to add adult parts only for who interested, but the trick behind a good sidequest is to add something extra, when the player complete it he...

With those and the lake picture, that you have posted on the Patreon page, but not here, we can say that Addine could be put in a dictionary as example of the word "voluptuous". I have to say that the new cover for the game, the throne, can be appropriate, but result a bit bare, don't attract...

I have tried the game, but I have had difficulty to understand what doing, and the breakout game really doesn't invite me to multiple playthrough so I cannot do a sincere answer. It would be good that the memory section would have also the sex scenes together with the images.

Thanks for the ready answer and I like that you at least want to create sex scene that will be hot. I can begin to express my opinion, other will continue. Inspiring from famous tv series, like games of thrones you have a advantage respect them, you don't need to submit of big audience...

I didn't want to say that the Natali isn't a good author, the contrary. I could wait 6 months and see how the story evolves, but I would want to decide before if supporting her and the adult theme is important for me, I could even pay 100 in future if I sees her can write and depict hot scenes...

The renovated game seem decisively better, more dialogues make the story more interesting to follow and you have improved the graphic; even if I found the original dressing Addine scene a bit more erotic with the unsuccessful try to cover herself completely the new scene is surely more...

I don't like the breakout minigame, it's not difficult, but too slow. If I play casual I can see all the content in this game or you need the ultimate difficulty to see all ?

The game was short, but i hd played until the end and the author had asked for a feedback, so I thought was a correct thing to do. You need to do attention to do a game too much complicated as first game, when you haven't for now much experience,  keeping in the family  could be a...

I don't know what to say, there is little contents in this demo, it's too short. The playing windows is a bit too little, at least for me, but maybe I'm doing something wrong. The models and the posing especially can be better, but if you have only two months of experience the result is...