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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    Two Paragraphs under the misspelling here there is improper capitalization The Original- "No, I'm here to announce that I've finally made up my mind after all these years. While I Initially thought that having these two girls compete with each other for the title of being my heir would push...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When confornted by Komari about knocking up Miko, there is a misspelling The Original- "Which wouldn't have come to pass if the lazy girl hadn't gotten into the habit of feigning illness when she was younger, but it's too late for that not, isn't it? Not to mention you still shouldn't have...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    From Here on I am playing the [0.7.23] September Steam Backer Version. There Is a grammar error when touring the wayfort with Daliza after the Renovations in the last paragraph of the third tile you view when the herald waves at you. The Original- The herald waves at you without a pause in...
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    [0.7.23] Convocation of Mirrors Error?

    When talking to Philander at the end of the Convocation of Mirrors event, he refers to us as mortals in the third paragraph. Is that in error or does he simply believe himself beyond mortal now that he's dead. The Paragraph in Question- "So," he continues, placing a hand on the misty glass, "I...
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    Bugged [0.7.23] The option to make Rindo your Concubine procs early

    Then if that's the case it still misused what title I had in the dialog when I was referred to as Marcher Baroness, not Champion of Hawkthorn. I will attempt to load an old save to double check and get a screen shot.
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    Bugged [0.7.23] The option to make Rindo your Concubine procs early

    I am playing the [0.7.23] backer version on steam currently. And as the thread post states, after being intimate with Rindo and going to talk to Komari I get the dialog and option to make Rindo My Concubine. I have not defeated Queen Alissa or subsequently talked to Ryn in the wayfort to accept...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    After defeating Alissa and the Abyssal Thing during the In Her Footsteps quest, there is a possible grammar mistake at the end of the fourteenth paragraph The Original- "My second act as regent is to confer amnesty to all our druidic brothers and sisters who live in exile in the Frostwood,"...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When going to enter the palace of ice and you meet Hethia in the gardens, there is a spelling error is the sixth paragraph The Original- "It's complicated," you reply. "Did matters treat you and your kindly after you departed?" My Alteration- "It's complicated," you reply. "Did matters treat...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When first meeting Mistress Matiha in Berwyn's Quest The Mistress, there is a spelling mistake in the eighth paragraph before fighting her The Original- The woman chuckles and turns around, revealing an impressive bust stretching her robes and a beautiful face with browns eyes and dark lips...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    There is also a spelling mistake in the fifth paragraph when talking to Brother Sanders about Liaden The Original- "Goddess take me, but if I had known that she was with child when we parted, I would have cut my way across Belhar and all the Marches to see Lyana again!" Sanders says firmly...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When talking to Brother Sanders about Liaden, there is a grammar error in the third paragraph The Original- "Lyana was..." he sighs, leaning against the lectern and watching Liaden work. "She was my best friend. There were other women in my life after her, I suppose, but Lyana was the only one...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    While fucking the Unitaur in Harboring a Fugitive, there is a grammar error in the second paragraph The Original- Each slap against her juicy thighs sends reverberating shockwaves of pleasure, but to the last they're accompanied by a profound sense of lacking. You should be feeling so much...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    My character is a hermaphrodite, and when choosing to Fuck the Unitaur in Harboring a Fugitive it misgender's me in the third paragraph The Error- "Ahhh, how bestial! Taking a woman like that without even asking her name. I love a man who takes charge," She growls hungrily, taking a step back...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When talking to the Cat Harem about what they want to do after beating Hirrud in Missing Meows, there is a grammar mistake in the fourth paragraph. The Original- Yset chews her plump lip, looking between you and the other kittens. After a long moment, she grins and laces her fingers behind her...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When confronting the Reaver in the getting into the closet quest with Quin in your party there is an error in the last paragraph The Original- "Don't worry about; if you live to the end of this day, I'll get real acquainted with you all over again. Now then, Selena... shall we enact some...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When attacking the palisade during the getting into the closet quest, there is an error in the 4th paragraph My party members are Cait and Quin, and after climbing the wall I had Quin use his magic to incapacitate the guards at the palisade. When confronted by the Reaver it reads as though I...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When watching the fight between Arona and Argoth, there is questionable wording when Benny enters the fight The Original- In the blink of an eye, she's gone, hurtling back with the force of a massive blow as the hill troll roars and stomps into the tent to defend its master. It's a huge...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When running into Berwyn the first time there is a grammar mistake in the fourth paragraph The Original- It takes a moment of sizing up to determine the dogfolk's gender, but the bulge just slightly tenting his black robes gives it away pretty easily despite the half-breed's almost girly...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    Starting here I am playing the [0.7.21] download version. I found a spelling mistake upon defeating Ylvid in Livrea's initial quest to get her home to Khor'minos The Original- Ylvid groans. "Well, it was a good fight! I can go back to the tribe and sing this story without shame. But still...
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    In Progress [0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions

    When talking to Garret while he's in the cage and select the talk option "Garret", there is some repetitiveness when referring to Hethia as the "Crazy Elf Witch" in the dialog. (It is separated decently, so may not necessarily need alteration. It would just be better to have different...